Struggle of good vs. evil

ooc: lol I just noticed that too....
IC: *Roland smiled at her, Wondering what she was thinking..wondering exactly where to go from here..he opened his mouth, but found no words except..* I love you ambrosia...*was all he could find the will to say, for the oddest of reasons...it was true..*
 
OOC: I don't like to read 8 page threads alone, but this one seems like a great thread and I'd like to join in, but once again I'd really like a summary.
 
ambrosia...and lucifer..

SUMMARY:
lucifer and her followers are at war with the good angels, it is the time in the 'bible' in which it predicted that there would be war, the humans are few but there are a legion or so around, there commander, rolland, is with the former angel of peace, ambrosia...who was sent from heaven to fight, due to the fact that the good side is outnumbered, lucifer has a hefty number of followers, right now, micheal...and um...lucifer...seem to be ...gettin it on...something god isn't happy about, the two sides (good and bad) are awaiting micheal and lucifer's commands to fight. ambrosia is waiting with rolland, who just told her he loves her. um...im thinkin that this thread needs MORE people before it gets cheesy (as in sex). and um, if you think the sex thing is taking away from the thread in any of the least bit, please let us know. we would love you in the thread, maybe get a few more people in here too. if you don't mind...oh by the way, basically the good and evil are behind two hills that surround a valley, they realyl have no clue they are sooo close. and read the last three or so pages if you really want to be clued in...it isn't bad reading.



Lucifer:

i stared at him, my eyes wide, his tender kisses left my skin moist, my chest heaving, and my mind in pieces. but what he did next was shock me....my head swayed side to side in abandonment, moaning, i cloaked us in darkness, not wanting to be disturbed, but the blank space on the top of a small hill was not too hard to notice. the ground erupted in commotion, it trembled again, the sky thundered, i frantically tried to pull him up before i lost all control of myself. i didn't want to lose control. i couldn't, never again would i do it until i was sure. laying my lips upon his, i could taste myself on him. i ran my nails lightly over his skin, finally reaching his excitement. a few smooth fluid strokes and i saw him close his eyes. unable to resist, i ran my toungue along the tempting curve of his bottom lip. "i won't lose you again," i said in determination, a demand, one i wouldn't allow to be questioned. i lifted his chiseled chin so he could look me in the eyes. i brought his body closer to mine, adoring the feeling of forbidden pleasures as his manhood made contact with my skin.


AMBROSIA:

"love isn't something to toy with rolland." i said, not quite sure what all this was about. i understood what love is, it was part of me, part of my training, but when it came from his lips, i had no comprehension of the words. my chin trembled, for reasons i didn't know, "too much is going on, i ...i....just want to go home..." i said quietly. i quickly found solitude in his embrace.
 
*He wiped a tear away from his eye* I Wish you could too...You really dont belong on this battlefield...A Rose Amongst the Swords of battle..*he said trying not to sound very Cliche* I Wish I could do more Ambrosia..I wish I Could Just Find A home Again...But My home is destroyed...And my family, Gone....I guess the big difference between you and me is...I dont have a place to go back to once all of this is over..*he turns his head away, ashamed to bring up such a topic but he couldnt stop himself..*
 
ambrosia

AMBROSIA:

"your kind...i mean...you tend to think of the future too often, live the moment." i pushed a tendril of hair from his face. the feathers on my wings ruffled with a new breeze. "don't think about the things you don't have, but the things you do." all of this was starting to have true meaning, about the moment, mostly. he stared at me. i tried not to think about the war that was going to be raging soon, but to live the moment, my own advice, seemed to lure me in like a drug. i didn't know what i was doing.
 
*He fliped his hair out of his eyes as he stared deep into hers, They seemed so calm...So kind* you know...Your right Ambrosia...*he nodded smiling* your so right....I have to Live for the moment! I have to live for the here and now! And thats Why IM Going to do this! *He leans in and gives her a long, passionate kiss on the lips, it was loving, caring, everything a kiss should be..*
 
i find this funny...ambrosia

ambrosia:

my eyes widened in shock, i uttered a small cry, i should have felt corrupted, this was temptations of humans, but it felt lovely. i felt his tounge line my lips, where they meet. it shocked me. but i held on to him a bit closer. i tilted my head. it was natural. i felt like my body knew what it was doing.
 
Im Finding this hilarious.

*At last he Draws away in a deep breath ANd he suddenly turns away* Im Sorry, I dont know what came over me...please forgive me ambrosia..*his eyes tear ridden, he felt as if he had just made a grave mistake*
 
Michael (who has never written a story where he had to be the good guy, and have sex, while maintaing good guy status)
felt his entire body rub against Lucifer's.
She lifted her thigh, pressing it firmly to his manhood.
Michael closed his eyes, a wave of pleasure going through him. He dropped to her chest, feeling her heartbeat. That heart, that wonderful heart.
He kissed her chest, before raising his head to meet hers.
Lucifer spread her legs gently, wrapping them around his waist, as if to pull him in.
Michael looked at her again, almost trying to back out. There was a part of him that wanted to stop, this had gone too far, he was...
Her legs pulled him in. Michael felt himself enter her. She gasped, arching her back to meet his.
Michael didn't need any more temptation. He thrusted (I hate that word, is there a better word? I wrote a 25 page erotic story, and each time they had sex I used the word thrusted, and I hate it. I need some synonymns people) into her, going as far as she could go.
There was a slight scream, and Michael stopped. He had hurt her. A tear came to his eye, he was too fast. She closed her eyes tightly, then opened them, accusingly.
"Don't stop..." her breathing was irratic, "Please don't stop."
Michael smiled.
 
ambrosia and lucifer

(lol at pooh, your doing a wonderful job, i don't have much time so for now i am writing ambrosia's part, then later when i get home, i will write a long part for lucifer...and i'll think about a synonym.)

ambrosia:

he apologized, i wiped the tear from his eye. "no...no...don't apologize, that was beautiful." i said in awe. "i may be an angel, but i have been given a human body. i can sin. but i know this isn't a sin." i reached up and cupped his face in my hands. "however, your leading me into temptation roland." i said jokingly. "i don't understand this kissing, but...with the love...i don't understand how it could be bad.." the ground was rumbling again, i grabbed hold of roland. he gently placed his lips on mine. he pulled away when the ground began to split.
 
ooc: I Shall Lead Ya Into Temptation..But Damn Is it Fun!!!
ic: *he jumped back an considerable distance as the ground split in two and began a massive fissure, i yelled to Ambrosia* HEAD TEN MILES SOUTH! MY ARMYS CAMP SHOULD BE THERE! WE CAN MEET UP THERE! I DONT WANT EITHER OF US TO GET HURT! ALRIGHT AMBROSIA? *He waited, stepping back as the fissure became bigger, i half exepected lava to flow out of it*
 
ambrosia...

(lava? lol...it can be arranged...)


ambrosia:

i was torn apart from him, i nodded at his instructions. luckily i spread my wings and began to lift off the ground before the ground beneath me sunk. the tips of my wings began to curve under and i frantically pushed with all my might, trying to get some height. i got it, after gaining altitude i began to soar, in that direction. i saw roland running, the split following him, off in the distance i saw a deep void. what is that? his camp was near, i saw him men there, the ground there wasn't shaking. i saw the split follow roland, it was at his heels, a huge tree was going to fall and roland was right there. he was heading right in it's path, rolling i aimed my body at a diagnal. thank the Lord for my wings. i pushed him from behind, he uttered a surprised grunt. "wha.." "oomph," was all i could say as the tree fell upon my legs. my body began to heal, with the power God gave me before he sent me out, i couldn't get my legs free.

(lead me into temptation...er..i mean...lead us not...no...i mean...awwwww..damn it all to hell...WHOOPS (covering mouth) i mean GOD BLESS ME.)
 
lucifer

(synonyms: thrusted: pushed, drove, rammed, plunged, entered,,shoved....those are the only one's i can think of off the top of my head...maybe i will look at the thesaurus...but hey just add an eloquent word in front of it each time, or make up a phrase to say it differently...say...ok...i may even use this in this post...'he plunged himself full-force into the recesses of her womanhood' too cliche? 'and his cock was immediately enveloped in her pussy' too harsh? i think plunged is a good word...drove is too...but if you want subtle, use the first one i gave, but spice up the words to make em pretty...ok, im no help!)


LUCIFER:

he had doubt in his eyes, but he never let go. i didn't like the doubt, but his actions told me otherwise. as he plunged himself into me, i felt like he tore my soul. pain shot through my body. "don't stop." i gasped. "oh GOD I LOVE YOU." i said to him. slowly he picked up the rythem. my gentle moans mingled with his in a passionate embrace.(so i'll stop with the damn cliches) i pulled him close, our body's picked up a fluid movement. flashes of us together before the fall into hell were in my mind, the same loving caresses he gave me then, were occuring now. his hands gently went to my back, lifting me and caressing me as we made love. i layed kisses along his neck, his ear, i frantically searched for his mouth. finding it, i poured my love into him.


(um...........um..............how about ....opened himself to her womb...no, i hate the word 'womb." hopefully my other suggestions are good enough.)
 
Lokken watched the split follow Roland."Seal!" he shouted. And it did his bidding, it closed. He flew over to Roland."Hey, buddy. How's it going? Oh, I see, your having a little batlle. Mind if i join in?" asked Lokken.
 
ambrosia

(um...we will assume morgoth, that you are next to roland, and didn't notice me , ambrosia, under the tree.)
 
ooc: Morgoth: As Usual, You need to be EDUCATED!!!!!! This is NOT The same roland from the RPG Threads of old, this is a HIGHLY Different Roland, Not to mention he wouldnt recognize you if you wanted him too. *lmao* Sorry, But thats the way it is, could you do me a HUGE Favor and re-write that???
 
Ooc: Roland, thats a bit harsh. He didn't know, hell, I didn't know you were a different Roland either. I mean, if you use the same name, people assume you are the same person.
Besides, Morgoth might be one of your human buddies... or not. I don't want to make these decisions for you. I am not your babysitter...
Lol, always wanted to say that, I love power trips.

Lava, thanks for those. I needed them, although, I was in my bed, alone, like always, and I thought of pump... I don't know it sounds a bit bad, but I don't think I will even go there any more. This sex lingo is getting too complicated. They need a few essays on how to write specific erotic stories, I saw the essays they have at this site, and it's all about how to write well, I know how to do that, I want to know how to write erotic...
I am rambling again, I hate it when I do that, ever since I was three and the new...
::strangling noises::
Technical difficulties, will be right back



Michael plunged his (hah, got you) tongue into hers. Swirling them around. He felt in tune with the moment. The world started to drift away. This was their world, Lucifer's and Michael's, together, forever.
This was the only world.
The ground started shaking, as Lucifer's moans increased. Michael never noticed. He saw the look in her eyes, a look of hunger and alarm.
( i love that whole excitement tied in with the earthquake... lets see what happens during an orgasm)
Michael started going faster, his breath becoming hard. She reached to grab something, but he hand grabbed only the cloth on the rock. She squeezed it tightly in her hands. Lucifer was moaning deeply. Michael gasped himself, raising his back higher.
The earth shook with a fierce vengence, rattling everything from it's foundation. Neither of them cared...
Michael took a gentle, but firm grasp on her hips, moving with his own (damnit) thrusts.
Suddenly, Lucifer screamed as her body thrashed on the rock. Michael looked in surprise, the orgasm ravished her body. She rocked back and forth in his hands, screaming in pleasure.
Michael watched as a mountain crumbled before his eyes.
(and we aren't even finished yet, lol)
 
ooc: *slaps self* your right, sorry morgoth, *dies* I keep forgetting these things sometime, maybe you can, sorry, have a helluva headache right now, i'll post this evening, sorry to keep you all waiting tho
 
lucifer...

(words that annoy me are pussy and cock, what other ways can you say those two minus, penis and vagina...those two give me the creeps...by the way...on another note...that was a beautifully written thread...and um...anytime your alone in your bed, im alone in mine too...so let's say we get together for the sake of body warmth, and see where it takes us...)


ahem...to the story...
(god, i got myself all worked up and bothered...)
AMBROSIA...
um...someone get the damn tree offa her!

LUCIFER:
the vibrations of the earth only seemed to intensify my orgasm, i wasn't sure if the quaking was only in my mind, but the beauty and loving in his eyes caused me to hold on, after slipping from my hold on the rock, i reached for him, i brought him close to me as my earth-shattering...(pun...ha...i did a pun...) orgasm rolled through my body. "ooooooooooooohhhhhhh, MICHEAL." i screamed over and over. arching my back, my eyes wide in lust, i felt his body go rigid. then i felt the glorious feeling of his seed spilling into my body. i trembled a bit. he silenced my cries of pleasure with his heavenly tounge. (alright i did another pun, smack me please) i thought it was over, i clenched on to him tightly, in more senses than imaginable. i reached around to his back, the earth beneath us rumbled fiercly, causing sensations to run through my body as he was still in me. i began to moan again. my eyes filled with lust and love at the same time. i stroked his face gently, running my thumb over his lips. he looked down at me innocently. then i smiled.....
 
*jIm bent down* Sup Morgoth? Gimme a hand with this! *he Grabs at the holds in the rock and pulls upward as hard as he can, the rock slowly begins to lift off the ground*
 
Ooc: I thought you were yelling at me Lava, was afraid I wrote cock and pussy, but I didn't... who are you yelling at? unless I wrote it in another one. I don't think I did, I don't like those words either... hey speaking of synonyms, what words do you use for those? I would like to know, is all.



Michael laid down, beside her. She smiled warmly at the morning sun (is it morning? I thought it was night... damn these authors). He wrapped his arms around her, snuggling close. She was shivering slightly, but not because of the cold, Michael imagined she was shivering for another reason.
He was still inside her, half erect. (hey erection, there's a synonym) She didn't seem to want to change, as if she wanted him to stay inside as long as he could. Michal was more than willing to comply.
After a few minutes, Lucifer started making circles around his forearm. He gently took hold of her hand, and kissed it. He kissed the hand, on every finger, every knuckle. She tasted so warm, and so inviting, he didn't ever want to leave her side. This rock, this was where he... no they belonged.
Life was finally good.
( Body heat huh? I don't think that will hold up in court, but then again, who the hell cares... let's you and me snuggle)
 
OOC

Synonyms for cock other than penis and erection: Member; sex; manhood; Jimmy; Johnson; phallus; dick; shlong; wang; meat... to name a few. ;)

Synonyms for pussy other than vagina: love hole; love box; love tube (Damn there are a bunch with a "love" prefix...); sex; womanhood; center of sexuality; wetness; love source... that's all of which I can think at the moment.
 
Ooc: Thanks Loner, always good to have an erotic english professor on our hands... lol, thank you.
 
lucifer and ambrosia

(not that im upset at your post roland, but i just saved your life. you seem a bit non-chalant about it...oh well...)


LUCIFER:
the after effects of our love-making had me in a euphoria. my mind was clouded with nothing but peace. i gently made circles on his forearm...he was still inside me. gentle and warm as always. he kissed my fingers tenderly, paying attention to each and every inch of flesh upon my hand. i sighed. using my other hand i ran my fingers through his gorgeous hair, that was one of the many favorite things about him, but whenever i touched him like this, it seemed to bring me closer to him. i loved the raw feeling of his skin against mine, our bodies mingling scents, warmth, and intimacy. (hehe...snuggling...see p.s. at the bottom of this..) my legs were still loosely wrapped around him, my heels on his calves. i gently ran my foot over his leg. i heard him make a low moan. i felt him stir a bit inside of me. i didn't dare speak, but we both knew that this was was total and utter peace felt like, his hands brushed over my breasts. his rough hands exciting my nipples. i loved the way he knew where to touch me, to make me utterly and completely his. "what now love?" i said quietly. i saw him smile up at me. i kissed his lower lip.


(ooooooooooooooo...um...snuggling? my favorite pastime? ohhhhh hell yeah. a date and time hun and im allll yours. i love how guys are always so warm, and soooo.....oh wait, i better stop, or i won't be able to control myself...)
 
(He's just faced with an immediate situation, He'll be grateful after He's helped her)
*Finally the Tree Gave way and he tossed to the side, picking her up he sets her out of the way of the crack and breaths heavily* Thanks....Thanks...Thanks Ambrosia...Ya Saved My Life there..*he wipes the sweat from his brow* I owe you about three million for that one..*he says jokingly, Trying to lighten the mood, his face streaked with sweat, his eyes hurt, he seems to sway a bit, as ambrosia speaks up* Are you Alright? *she asks concerned, he waves a thumbs up* oh yeah im just..-*he gets cut off as he Faints dead away from over exertion*
ooc: *LMAO* thats what he gets for not thinking..
 
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