Angeline
Poet Chick
- Joined
- Mar 11, 2002
- Posts
- 27,191
I had a couple of questions, Angeline, relating to the wide swath of the NYC melting pot and how it may have affected your writing as well as how all your editing work made you a better poet; however, you seemed to have addressed those questions already, so I'll just say that "Chambers Street" really brought back memories, I probably worked in New Brunswick when you were at Douglas, and we probably passed each other in one of the shopping malls on US 1 sometime or another. (Or is it "some time or another," Madame Editor?(LOL))
I so much appreciate your poetry and what you do here as moderator.
Thank you and thank you for using the mote in your glosa. I have to reread it again (and again) and look at the meter because I think we are trying the same kinds of experiments.
Maybe we passed by each other in Tumulty's. I bet there's a good chance of that. I went there a lot.
As to your style question I think I'd prefer the first usage in a poem although the second is, I suppose, technically correct.