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LadyJeanne said:
I never know what to call them.

Them? It? Him? You? Johan?
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I know someone *ahem* who calls theirs "Old Blue" or "Big Blue" depending on the moment.
 
You know I never
I never seen you look so good
You never act the way you should
But I like it
And I know you like it too
The way that I want you
I gotta have you
Oh yes, I do

You know I never
I never ever stay out late
You know that I can hardly wait
Just to see you
And I know you cannot wait
Wait to see me too
I gotta touch you

Chorus:
Cause baby we'll be
At the drive-in
In the old man's Ford
behind the bushes
till I'm screamin' for more
Down the basement
lock the cellar door
And baby
Talk dirty to me

You know I call you
I call you on the telephone
I'm only hoping that you're home
So I can hear you
When you say those words to me
And whisper so softly
I gotta hear you

Chorus

C.S. pick up that guitar and talk to me

Solo, Chorus out
 
carsonshepherd said:
How does Meathook sound to you?
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He sounded okay in "Like a Bat Out of Hell" but I like "Two outta Three Ain't Bad" better.














:D
 
carsonshepherd said:
He leaned his head closer to mine against the back seat. “I can wait,” he whispered, a breath in my ear. “But can you?”and his eyes dropped to my lap where the outline of my hard cock showed against the top of my thigh.

“You know,” he kept on, soft and relentless, “the first thing I noticed about you when I saw you was your smile, laughing at something your friend said. I kept looking up at you to see if you were smiling again. I was drawn to your lips… the way you licked them after you took a drink of your beer…”

This made me blush and I kind of laughed, staring down while his breath brushed my cheek.

“And you turned around and stared at me, up and down before I looked up. Oh yeah,” he laughed softly, “I knew the whole time. You were so sexy when you blushed liked that, I wanted to drag you to the john and bend you over the sink but didn’t think I’d see you again… which would have been a shame. It would’ve been a shame because I kept looking at your lips and thinking what they could do to me… kissing down my chest and my belly and wrapping around my cock…”

A gasping squeak came from me. I couldn’t help it. His words were getting to me no matter how I tried to fight it. I was the man of steel, dammit, and he was melting me into a puddle without a single touch. Just a low, husky, slightly southern whisper in my ear under the eyes of the cabbie who was plainly worried about what might happen in his back seat.

“I think your lips would be pretty around my cock,” Daniel whispered and my belly clenched, abs flexing in an effort not to rub myself against my jeans. My hands balled up into fists in my jacket pocket as he kept on and I shivered from h is husky voice in my ear.

“I want to see you lick my balls because I love that. Then I want to watch you lick my cock up and down while you unbutton your pants and play with yourself.”

I gasped without meaning to. Dammit. My cock ached and he grinned at my stricken look, my hungry breath. He was enjoying this. My fidgetting was uncontrollable and I raked my fingers through my fair. His laugh caught me in the gut.

“Yeah, do that, ‘cause that’s what I’ll be doing while you’re sucking the head of my dick… I’ll be tugging on your hair and making you moan. You’ll like that, won’t you? Having your hair pulled?”

His own breath was getting jerky as he kept up his barrage of images.

“Oh yeah… I love watching someone who really loves sucking cock. You get this look on your face, you know that? I love looking down there and seeing that look, seeing your eyes looking up at me while my cock is down your throat. But know what else I like?”

There was a pause and I closed my eyes and gulped a breath. I shuddered. But this time, he didn’t keep on. He stopped and waited. I opened my eyes and saw he was waiting for me to ask him what he liked. I swallowed and licked my dry lips. It wasn’t easy for me to say things like this.

“What?” I finally breathed in the barest whisper.

A slow grin spread over his face and he glanced at the cabbie, then leaned close to my ear so that we were touching, his arm against mine, our thighs touching. How long had it been since someone seduced me?

“I love watching, but I like doing it, too. I’d like to flip you over and lick you, taste you because I know you’ll be so sweet… so hard and ready for me…”

Oh my God I groaned and I was almost sure I’d said it aloud but then the cab came to a stop and when I looked up I realised we were sitting in front of my house and the cabbie was staring at us, waiting for his money.

Fuck.

I fumbled for my wallet and shoved him what I hoped was enough cash as I threw open the door and tumbled out with Daniel behind me and we almost ran up the front stairs, his hands tugging at my clothes while I fitted the keys to the lock.

The door slammed closed and my back hit the wall of the dark foyer and his mouth crashed into mine, demanding lips and rough stubble and a soft, utterly delicious tongue invading my mouth, tasting me while I wound my hands in his soft damp hair - mist of rain like a spiderweb - and pulled him down, licking and sucking fiercely at his bottom lip. Yeah, bruise him, make him sore and tender, swollen from sucking me.
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Critical: its all tell and no show. I certainly understand you can do better. :) Examples? One, and most imprtant:

He leaned his head closer to mine against the back seat. “I can wait,” he whispered, a breath in my ear. “But can you?”and his eyes dropped to my lap where the outline of my hard cock showed against the top of my thigh.
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His hair fell to my mouth when he put his head back. I could smell the ....? shampoo, and as strands hit my lips and I sucked them back, his breath hit my ear. "But." he teased .... . "Can you?

His eyes scanned me crotch. They dropped over my cock like I wanted his mouth. and then I looked down too, seeing what I hardly noticed, except to feel the outline of my dick in my jeans - tense and pressing. It bulked and then throbbed. I could almost see the veins pulsing ...."

Blah blah. My point is... where is the feeling? :) thats what is missing.
 
CharleyH said:
Critical: its all tell and no show. I certainly understand you can do better. :) Examples? One, and most imprtant:



His hair fell to my mouth when he put his head back. I could smell the ....? shampoo, and as strands hit my lips and I sucked them back, his breath hit my ear. "But." he teased .... . "Can you?

His eyes scanned me crotch. They dropped over my cock like I wanted his mouth. and then I looked down too, seeing what I hardly noticed, except to feel the outline of my dick in my jeans - tense and pressing. It bulked and then throbbed. I could almost see the veins pulsing ...."

Blah blah. My point is... where is the feeling? :) thats what is missing.
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thank you. welcome to my first drafts. :kiss:
 
carsonshepherd said:
:rolleyes:
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I thought it was rather clever. Hrumph…
logophile said:
:D

Love it.
Missed you so much!
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:D I've missed you, too!

But I'm back to being confused about my sexuality and I might have to blame you for that... ;)
 
yui said:
But I'm back to being confused about my sexuality and I might have to blame you for that... ;)
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Ah, you're too kind. I can hardly take credit for such a development! :eek:


Just try on my personal sexuality theory and see if it helps...
It's a spectrum. A few are gay and a few are straight, and the rest of us fall somewhere in the middle.

:heart:
 
not sure exactly where I would fall on such a scale...obviously it does not bother me to tease or flirt with Carson, so I am not at that extreme end way over towards phobia...
 
yui said:
He sounded okay in "Like a Bat Out of Hell" but I like "Two outta Three Ain't Bad" better.


:D
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Uh..... I thought that was "Meatloaf".......but then again at my age what do i know....
 
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