The Last Kingdom

OOC: Once Some one puts Sanitys Necklece On his ghost will Leva And I Will Start Playin A War lord And start cosing yall trouble
 
Stalker

Stalker Fallows Karrak aNd the girll in to the mountins He finly sees his Chance to Hunt A mountin Giant . This Will make him the envie of his Etin Tribe (Etins Are an off Shoot Of the Forest Giants WHo pride themselfs onn their hunting Abilties.)
 
OOC: Rayv... please note... earlier on Garret's possessed character found the necklace and gave it to his master the evil drowl... thus Vixen cannot see the necklace. I will make Vixen search for it... and later in the thread I believe she will find it with the drowl and will attempt to kill him for it... okay?

IC: King Kelwyn

"This does not bode well, we are missing almost half our original numbers, and key members of the prophecy itself!" Kelwyn ranted.

Vixen turned to him after listening to Lord Randall's words. She was getting irritated by the lack of focus and orginization, her animal instincts abhoring this lack of pack skill.

"It would be just a ridiculous to try and find the missing members too... firstly we don't know where any of them went or are... and I know Karrack, he moves fast when he wants to... he usually tells me of his movements, but as I was unconcious I guess he had his own reasons for leaving the group. I have faith he will find us again, he knows how important the prophecy is. As for the pale girl, hopefully she is with Karrack, he spoke often of the giant tribes and the myth behind their scattering. I recall him mentioning a moon child who was the key to reforming the giant clans... perhaps he felt she was the one and has gone to take her to his tribe... either way... if he was in a hurry, it would take more than a fast horse to catch him now... I suggest we move onwards... those of us who are missing would be expected to move forward to our goal... wherever that may be... as we have the boy we should follow him as the King suggested and make sure we leave a decent trail for the ones which may come following us." Her opinion spoken she stopped speaking and waited for them to respond.

King Kelwyn nodded, "Vixen speaks wisely... much as I agree with Lord Randall's advice, in this case it would be foolish to waste time looking for those who do not wish to be found... we will follow the boy... we must fullfill the prophecy and I have faith in the written words... that those who are needed will find the place when the time comes... Lady Avallyn, do you know any places on the boy's suggested route where we can replenish supplies? I ask because I believe you passed through these parts to get to my kingdom..."

"She can speak to you as we ride Kelwyn.." Vixen said addressing the king by his first name, she had long given up trying formalities... it seemed foolish now that they had all fought together. Lord Randall took instant offence and brandished his sword.

"Woman... you step over the bounds!" He roars.

King Kelwyn grins at her cockiness and raises his hand to stop Lord Randall.

"Lord Randall... I do not take offence... she has earned as much and I have told you on many occassion you should take the same liberties... 'tis a pity you are too well trained to take my heed..." he laughs.

Lord Randall looks at the King in shock, "M'Lord... Majesty..."

King Kelwyn chuckles again and just pats his man on the back.

"Let us be moving as the Lady Vixen suggests, the sun is already high in the sky and we have little time before the dark possesses us..."
 
Ooc: It's true, Garret gave it to the Drowl. If you want, you can write how the Dark elf used the necklace to bring to life an evil leader or something.

Garret mounted up, quickly grabbing what was left of his stuff. He had no use for it now, but it seemed like it would look odd if he didn't. He took a quick inventory for now. Barely a hundred. One of the King's men mentioned reinforcements.
If they were a good team, it would be another hundred. Still, easily defeated as soon as he could contact the Drowl once more.
On the horse he felt as ease, it wouldn't be long now. They were finally riding. Doom awaits, and patience isn't one of it's virtues. (That is a kick ass line, I just made it up... Holy cow I am a writer)
Picking up a nice pace he began to trail this Vixen character. She seemed headstrong, one of the potential leaders. Since his two prize prophecy members were already gone he would have to take the next in line. The fact that she knew so much only gave him more incite.
Taking on a more innocent face he rode up to her, matching her speed.
"You seem to know a lot about all of this. How experienced are you on missions and battles? This has been my first, and I'm just blown away by it all. I don't even think I could hold a sword as big as yours."
Playing the kid card seemed more brilliant every time he did it.
 
Vixen...

Vixen appeared startled by his sudden questions.

She looks across at his innocent face full of awe as he inspects the sword she has strapped to her horse's saddle. She rarely used it herself unless in battle, she preferred her knives almost exclusively. She liked the clean kill.

She reacts to his enthusiasm much as a fox would treat a cub eager to learn.

She smiles at him, wondering at her suspicion of him earlier. Clearly he was a boy, he couldn't harm anyone.

"I have fought before, and hunted, missions as you call them, I guess I have had my experience with that also, I usually fall into those, I don't like following other's usually, not unless they've proved themselves... seems silly that people can be born to power... that's not the way my family worked..." she shrugs and grins, "as for the sword, it's not as heavy as it looks, I could teach you a few moves at our next stop if you like?" She looks into the horizon and frowns.

"Fire ahead!" She calls behind her, "been smouldering for some time though..." she sniffs the air delicately, "human village, probably attacked several days ago..."

They urge their horses into a quicker canter. Passing through the small village, Vixen wrinkles her nose. Nothing could have survived this. Blackened stumps are all that remain of the simple crude housing. Startling white are the bones of the victims, their flesh cleaned from them by vultures and rodents and the like. It was a sickening sight.

There was a sombre silence amongst the group as they moved onwards through the destruction.

Vixen looks to Garret again, "are you sure this is the way?" She asks him.
 
Garret looked at her with the utmost of confidence.
"There was a map, that showed the huge valley we're in now," he pointed to the two mountain ranges on either side. Now filling with hundreds of creatures, waiting for his signal to attack. It would be several days though.
Looking back at the woman, "Inside this valley was a ravine that lead all the way through it. The Drowl's said there was no reason to conquer it because it had such little human resistance," he paused, looking back, "Still, they did say they would send occasional scout groups just about everywhere. With an army this size though, I doubt they would be of any harm to us."
Everything in the village looked fresh, as if the fire had started mere hours ago. That meant they must be getting everything prepared. This was all perfect. Just perfect.
"I don't know, I think that's what they said. I'm so scared. They took my mother you know, they took nearly all of my village. The only reason they let me go was because of this prophecy. If it means losing my mother though, I don't want to be a part of some stupid prophecy. I just want my mommy back."
He bowed his head low, producing some tears for the emotional scene to be just that much better. Who couldn't resist a bubbling child over his mother?
As a cruel smile went over his face he began bubbling even more.
(lol, this is getting to be kinda fun.)
 
Vixen...

Vixen felt decidedly uncomfortable. She wasn't used to such blatant human emotion. She tended to stay on her own for precisely this reason. Now this child was crying and she didn't know what she was suppossed to do with him.

She frowns and tentatively pats his back.

"There, there..." she mutters unconvincingly. She shrugs. She looks around hoping no one will think she is the cause of the boys sudden grief.

"Hey... umm... look... don't worry... we'll take care of you... come on... no need for tears..." she pats him a little harder on the back and turns to unbuckle her sword... "here boy... you can take care of my sword for me... right? It's a huge responsibility but I believe in you... you just keep it for me until I need it okay? You can practise holding it, see if you like the feel of it..." she smiles, distraction was always the best way to forget your woes... at least that's what she had found in her travels.
 
Randall

Randall was not pleased to say the least. First this little strumpet manages to somehow be allowed to address the King by his first name, and she only a commoner! Next, they place all of their faith in a boy who supposedly ran away or was released by the enemy....

Now as they rode through a valley where several villages had be ransacked, Randall began to question the "good fortune" that seemed to have befallen them. This was not a good place to travel. Enemies had already been there, they were in a valley where they could be ambushed, and the kid seemed a little to eager to be riding into danger...

Feeling a chill run down his spine, Randall called over Baron Falco for a short conference. "Falco, I know this situation stinks in some way, it has too. It's to damn convenient for us to be able to sneak off and then attack the enemy headquarters like this on the word of an "escaped" prisoner. I don't like it. Send out some large scouting parties to probe the edges of the woods, and set up a company to head up the side of the valley and patrol the top so we can know what the hell is coming over it. And keep an eye on that boy."
 
New Life

The Dark Elf Exammens the nackless . He knows whot it is and how it works. Kartan Had told him About it. He started work on A potion. Fethers from A raven And A dove , Fangs Of A werewolf, ANd the blood of a deamon. He than Calld For an elf woman. He placed the Neckless On the neck of the elf woman And pured the potion on here There is a Flash Of light the same light flashes in front of Karrak and aveene Knocking themm back on to the ground. Sanitys Neckless And the neckless around AVeene's neck Turn in to Metel Crosses with Onix centers . The elf womans Belly swells to the size it would be if she had been pregnant For 9 months. Aveene's Dose the same .




OOC: Prety good uh? Wait untill the births. Poohvill thanks for the sajestion
 
New Life

The Dark Elf Exammens the nackless . He knows whot it is and how it works. Kartan Had told him About it. He started work on A potion. Fethers from A raven And A dove , Fangs Of A werewolf, ANd the blood of a deamon. He than Calld For an elf woman. He placed the Neckless On the neck of the elf woman And pured the potion on here There is a Flash Of light the same light flashes in front of Karrak and aveene Knocking themm back on to the ground. Sanitys Neckless And the neckless around AVeene's neck Turn in to Metel Crosses with Onix centers . The elf womans Belly swells to the size it would be if she had been pregnant For 9 months. Aveene's Dose the same .




OOC: Prety good uh? Wait untill the births. Poohvill thanks for the sajestion
 
Karrack

As Karrack carried Aeneva through the woods, Karrack began to sense a change in the air. Slowing slightly he asked Aeneva "Lady, do you feel anything?" just then he slowed to a stop in a meadow.

As they stood, and listened, a figure burst into being in front of them. "Karrack (it said), I am glad you have come. I am Vernt, your god, and I see you have follwed my words well. I am pleased. the spirit said as it finally firmed into the shape of a massively built man. Turning his somber and yet youthful eyes to the lady in Karrack's arms he spoke again.

"You will not need that (as the necklace disappeared) for you are my daughter in heart, and mind. I will not say in flesh, for that is for you to know alone and no others whether it be true or not. Now, do you have anything you wish to ask of me?" he said to her and waited with an air of respect and calm.
 
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To Rayv:

No, I don’t think it is good. Perhaps maybe both you and Poohlive discussed and decided what to do but Aeneva is my character and I was not even asked if I would agree to such an event. To take control and to cause my character to change in such a drastic manner (becoming pregnant) was out of line.

I was polite enough to agree to your forceful demand that my character take the necklace but I will not agree with this. I respect the other characters here and their owners and try my best not to write actions for them. All I ask in return is the same respect.


To the others:

It has been both a pleasure and a delight writing and collaborating with you all. However, if this is what is to be expected in future posts, I am afraid I cannot continue like this.

As for my character, I shall need a little more time to write her out. I am sorry if this will mess up some of the plot lines but I cannot work in such a manner that affects my character without my permission.


Respectfully Yours,

Jazzi
 
Ooc: Jazzi, I understand your anger, but I hope this isn't laid on my doorstep. I only suggested Ray had the Dark Elf use the Sanity necklace to create and evil darklord or something. I didn't tell him to do anything with your character.
And we all know that taking control of a character without permission is not allowed. Rayv, I thought you were here long enough to know that. If you want to do something this drastic at least e mail Jazzi about it or something. How would you like it if Jazzi had her character just miscarriage the baby on purpose? That would ruin your whole plan. You see how easy this can get out of control?
Ok, this is no problem. We can deal with this. Rayv, I like the whole idea of new birth and everything, but either use a NPC (like you did with the other necklace) or ask someone first. With that, I'd say that D.L. your post needs to be alterred to whatever Rayv decides to do. And Jazzi, don't even think of leaving, you're too good... you're just too good. If you leave, then I leave. It's as simple as that. You can't leave.
 
Wiping away the fake tears Garret grabs the sword. Surprisingly it is very light. He must have been trained well. That is a great advantage. The strength of a man in the body of a child. This is simply too perfect.
Weighing the sword in his hands as if it were heavy he nodded thanks to Vixen.
"I'm sorry. I just get like that when I think of her. I want to get these guys so bad cause of that. They were so ruthless."
He wiped away his cheeks putting the sword in it's appropiate place on his horse.
"So, "he sniffed, "You haven't told me much about yourself. What brought you here, and why are you on this mission anyway? I don't even understand why I'm on this mission. I'm just a kid, but I must be important enough for those drowl's to take me. What do you know about all of this?"
 
Note:

Oc: I agree poohlive, and I regret not first making a point of repremanding Rayv. He should know better by now, and as a somewhat experienced person, so should I have played by the rules instead of trying to tip-toe around or trample through them. I'm sorry such a thing occured Jazzi, and I'll try to rectify it now.

Rules to WRITE BY:
1) We NEVER take action against another which would cause a major thread shift without their CONSENT. This is much like how far you go on a first date.

2) There is only one necklace which can affect this "birth" (and I'm personally not sure I should even dignify that with such a word.) and that is with Sanity's necklace. NOT Kartan's

3) I shall consult the two older members from this point on regarding things that should be done to keep this thread on the somewhat straight and narrow. (Money, please clean out your PM box, if you need help in doing this please ask.) And this is omething I should have done from Day 1.

4) If things happen in the thread which bother you, do NOT feel afraid to call in the moderators or monitors, I forget which they're called now regarding the offending thread. They're there for you to use as you see fit.

What's going on: The elf woman is pregnant, Jazzi is NOT pregnant, and the group is still riding through the valley, and Karrack and Aeneva are running for the hills so to speak.

My post will be re-edited to state that Aeneva is claimed to be Vernt's daughter nothing more. Rayv, I now use my power of thread starter to modify yours, sorry. Beyond that, I hope you will stay Jazzi, and if not please feel free to e-mail or PM me if you so wish.
 
OOC:

Phew... I'm gone a few moments and all hell breaks loose!

Darklord... I think you will find that my PM box has been clear for the last several days... you should have no problem PMing me now unless there is something wrong with the system... also... I have made my email option available to those who wish to use it so feel free if you have something urgent to discuss with me.

As for Jazzi... PLEASE DON'T GO... I concurr with Poohlive, you're much too good a writer for us to loose. It's unfortunate when someone takes advantage when one shouldn't... I'll admit to being a little confused as to what is going on myself.

I think it is VITALLY important for all posters to read ALL posts... it's most unfair to just skip over those posts you ASSUME have nothing to do with you.

You never know when some other character will try and interact with yours...

Now... apparantly there were two necklaces? I don't know... I also don't know who is supposed to be playing the evil drowl. Jazzi & Poohlive were doing a very good job and then Rayv would sometimes play the character also... this is WAY too confusing for me. If Rayv wants to play his own evil drowl this is fine but I assumed he was only playing the Kartan and Sanity characters... at some stage I think the line was blurred and one of Rayv's characters was also the evil Drowl... this is too confusing... posters have their own characters for a reason. Is either Sanity or Kartan alive? Are they drowls or angels? What are their weaknesses? If they come back what are they capable of? You should give us all an idea of what your characters a capable of because making it all up as you go along gives them too much power and the balance becomes way to uneven.

These are just my suggestions... opinions... others might disagree... but it would be cool if Darklord and the rest of us could agree on exactly what is happening and where this is going, at least in the short term.

M.T. has spoken... :D ;) :)
 
Itsame Mario.

I am from a race of deamons. I used to be a good guy but now I spend my free time gathering souls to make myself stronger. The extent of my power is uknown.
I will try to corrupt the good and befriend the bad. I am Sadistico
No one can stop me!!!HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
OOC:: Any of the bad guys on this post can move me along in the story so that I am not left behind.:D
 
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ooc: I go away for a few weeks and we have a board war!!

Alright alright, BREAK IT UP PEOPLE!! Nuthin to see here..


My char is gone, and if We cant set up a war general (Unbaised of course) Soon, I'll set up one myself, I'd like to play some too...

So whoever wants to do it, say so before next wensday, or Im making one.

Thanks yall, I hope nothing else goes haywire..
 
OOC: woah I miss a few days and we are all at each others throat. I agree with poohlive Jazzi you have to stay, your character is just to important in the thread and you are to talented to let it go to waste. We all make mistakes please don't leave and give this place another chance.

IC: Avallyn followed everyone towards the town quiet and lost in thought. She couldn't shake it but she felt an odd sense of distrust for the boy. She didn't understand why, he was nothing but an innocent who had lost his mother why was she uncomfortable. She pushed her distrust aside and looked in horror as the destroyed village. A sense of sorrow filled her every sense as she gazed at the distruction. All those innocent people killed for the sake of war. Why was life so cruel. Turning her head away from the distruction she stared at the ground.
 
Bio On Kainus

OOC:Kainus: ARe a race of Gardion angels. They Are Part ANgel, Part Human. With An Animal Link that keps them on earth un till thay die. Wene A kainus Dies he gose home to hevan. Each Kainus Wears necklace That has a jewl pendent each pendent Is shaped diferntly. The typ of jewl dicktates famliy. There are Five basic Familys, But Only Four are still around. I will Now list the Famliys And their Jewl.
1. The angel Michael's family -Jewl Ruby
2. The angel Zeus- Onix
3. Gabriel-emrial
4. Odin-Dimond
The fith family was Lusifer Whos Famliy did not have jewl His Family was silver. But you all can probly gusse why his family didnt Stick aroud long. Well needless to say .the Kanice are the decindents of the Graetest ArchAngles of all time. Now on how a kainus reproduces It has to do with the necklaces. A kainus gives his Necklace to A earth Woman Or man Depending On the gender the kainus choses to be . Exampel If The kainus is A man he will Give his Necklace to a woman. When the kainus Dose this it means when he dies The woman will give beirth to A Child kainuse that will take the place of its fother. The femal Kainus on the other hand reproduction is DIfrent And i havent decided on how they reproduce. A mael Kaius Can't I repeat Can't Reproduce on till hes dead. Now to Sanity An his Brother Kartan They are Part Of the Zeus Family They were brothers Althoug No Kainus is sure on how Kartan Was born firts Than Some How Sanity was born His Necklace al redy on his neck . ANy way They did Kill each other. As for Powers They Are Vary skild in magic to the point its almost second nature. The have ware forms Wich is A combinatoin Of their animal link and their Angel Blood ANd thier
human or earth forms. Each family dose have one power that the oters Dont Have .
1. Michael -this familys power are more felt than Seen their powers Are ther presents of god
2. Zeus- Can call ANd controll lightning
3. Gabriel-Has A unique mastery os sound
4. Odin-Can Call And controll Fire
If you are woundering about what was lusifers power his is illusions.
In my next post Il Explain What I was going to do and after that Ill DO what i ver can to fix what i mestdup on acident ANd hopfully We can still all play together
 
Notice:

Ooc:
I would like to say this now. For the next few days I urge people on this board to pray for the families of the victims of today's attck.

I also urge people to go and donate blood. If you live near either place that was attacked, please go offer your help to the Red Cross or other groups.

Above all else, I hope you all will what is best, and that is be smart, and do not jump to conclusions about who did it yet. We must first know who did it, and that is up to the government, then as a people we can take action.

Take care, and God Bless all of us.
 
What to do....

Ooc: There has been much discussion recently between me, money and poohlive on what to do and where to take this. I guess what I want to know is whether or not you, the other people in the thread still want this to keep going. Please PM me with your answer yea or nay in the next couple of days so we can take action.
Thanks
-Darklord
 
A Notice Of rebirth

For thase of this tread WHo Miss it I Am Creating A New One And Hope That All Come back The one I am Making is to take place A Year Or two After This one I will post a littel Histery But I Hope T^o see you all there.
 
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[sigh]

Geez Roland... it can get really old really fast you getting your knickers in a knot like this.

It's a simple mistake... I miswrote Darklord's character's name... it seems... (and I have checked this) that it was originally Randall not Roland as I have mispelled it.

I believe Darklord generously went along with my mistake but either way... although you tend to use the name 'Roland' for your characters... you should have noted that this particular ROLAND was NOT your character. On top of which... it's not like you are the only person 'Allowed' to use that particular name. Just like I can't stop another person from using the name Vixen in a thread if they choose to do so before me. It doesn't BELONG to me unless I make it mine. Does this make sense?

I will correct my mispelling of Darklord's character's name in the previous few posts if I can.

Now I'm annoyed... because I hate writing OCC posts to a story line unless absolutely necessary. But I
thought I should note my mistake.

Thanks for you patience.

M.T.
 
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