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Patrick O'Malley.... 22/m..... 6'2"..... 185 lbs...... brown hair...... hazel eyes

Pat had been an all-state baseball player in high school, and was a top draft choice of the New York Yankees. He had advanced rapidly through the minors and had just now received "the call." He was going to the show. The Yankees were in need of a shortstop because their all-time shortstop had suffered a season-ending injury. O'Malley was the prize prospect and a lot was expected of him.

The players welcomed O'Malley into the locker room. They treated him as one of their own from the first time he walked into the room. Some of the players even took him home on occasion for home-cooked meals. Pat became friendly with quite a few of the players' families. He felt right at home in pinstripes.
 
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Erin Collingsworth ...20 years old...5'2...110#s ... long auburn hair... green eyes
Baseball. Erins family lived and breathed it. Ever since she was a kid it was baseball all day, every day. If it wasn't baseball season it was waiting for spring training.

Erins older brother had played year round in an indoor complex. He was an amazing third baseman and had home to college on a full ride scholarship. Now he was the starting third baseman for the New York Yankeed.

Erin was a full time college student majoring in none other than sports medicine. She attended as many games as was physically possible, sitting in the first row , left field side ... Raymond had offered her a sky box but she had refused. Where was the fun on that? It was the atmosphere she loved and you couldn't get that in an air conditioned room!

It was a Thursday evening and Erin got a call from Raymond just as she got out of her last class.

"Hey kid. You coming home this weekend? I'm bringing a few teammates back to my house for dinner on Saturday after the game. Wanna join?" He asked. Erin immediately agreed. She hadnt been planning on coming home that weekend but she couldn't resist the invitation.

"Sure I will be there" she said. After a few moments they Hung up and Erin went to her dorm to work on the homework she would no doubt neglect that weekend.
 
Pat was enjoying the his first month in the majors. After all, he was staying in first-class hotels on the road..... they flew to away games instead of of taking long bus rides.... and he was hitting the heck out of the ball. Life was great, and the women around the team were too. There were beautiful women outside the locker room all the time, and they were at all of the local clubs where the players went.

Pat had become close to the team's third baseman. Raymond Collingsworth had taken Pat under his wing when he was brought up. They played side-by-side on the field, and Raymond helped Pat adjust to life in the big leagues. They had an afternoon game on national television on Saturday and Raymond invited Pat back to his place for dinner after the game. "I am going to have a few of the guys and some other friends over. You should come by. It will be a good time, and we play Sunday night, so, it won't matter if you are out a little bit late on Saturday night," Raymond told him.

Pat agreed to go to Raymond's house. It would beat the hell out of hanging out in his small condo.
 
Erin got as much homework as she could done on that Thursday evening. She had no classes on Fridays, so the next morning she packed a small bag and made the three hour drive back home. She unpacked her things at her brothers house, where she often stayed in his guest bedroom. Her parents lived close by, but it was much better staying at his house instead of with her parents. There was no game on Friday, but Erin had tickets, as always, to the game on Saturday.

It was a gorgeous day for the game, the weather was perfect. And the Yankees won, making the day even better. Erin knew that the night would be a celebration now that they had won the game.

She headed back to Raymond's house, knowing that she would beat him since he would have stuff to do after the game, before coming home. She hurriedly showered and changed her clothes, deciding to wear her favorite pair of ass-hugging denim jeans and a form-fitting red tanktop that fit her body like a glove. She paired it with a pair of red high-heeled sandals.

She knew Raymond would want the house straightened up so she set about doing that, figuring his guests would probably show up about the same time that he did.

She had just finished giving the house a quick cleaning when she heard his truck pull in the driveway, followed by several other vehicles as well.

The party was about to begin!
 
Pat had another good game on Saturday. In fact, the network announcers wanted to interview him after the game. Some of his teammates gave him a hard time about it. Pat walked over and started talking to the reporter on national tv. Then, Raymond came up behind Pat with a towel filled with shaving cream and covered Pat's face in it. Pat was starting to feel like one of the guys.

After heading back into the locker room and enduring the good natured ribbing that his teammates gave him Pat went to the shower. He took his time..... savoring what he was experiencing. Then he heard Raymond yelling for him to hurry up and get ready. "If you want to follow me to my house you better get your ass in gear Rook."

Pat exited the shower, toweled off and began to get dressed. He had worn a navy blue suit to the park with a light blue shirt and a pink tie. He decided to leave the tie off. He followed the guys out of the locker room and into the players parking lot. He watched all of the guys get into their fancy cars and trucks and SUVs, as he walked to his rental car. He hadn't had time to even think about buying a car since getting called up, and he didn't want to jinx anything by running out to get a car.

He got in and pulled in behind Raymond and followed him to his house. It was like a parade... many of the players were going to Raymond's. As Raymond pulled into the driveway, Pat pulled in front of the house and got out of the rental. He had a feeling this was going to be a fun time.
 
Erin had had the tv on while she was cleaning and had seen Pat's interview. She had yet to meet him and wondered if he would be at raymond's house. He was usually very good towards rookies.

Raymond was the first to enter the house. Erin greeted him with a big smile and walked up to jig him."Hey,.good game bro" she told him.

Several more players filed in after him, greeting her as they did. Several were very flirtatious towards her, Mich to Raymond's chagrin. It was then that Pat walked in and Erins gaze traveled to him. Wow, she thought. He was pretty hot. Erin was used to the hot baseball players of the Yankees, but something about Pat really drew her attention.

Raymond stepped in to make introductions then. Throwing an affectionate arm around Erins shoulders he steered her towards Pat.

"Rook, this is my kid sister Erin, Erin this is Pat" he said and Erin rolled her eyes at him having called her a kid.

She extended her slim hand."Hi Pat, nice to meet you. My older brother here seems to forget that I'm no longer a kid anymore" she said, flashing him a brilliant smile that traveled all the way to her bright green eyes.
 
Pat walked toward the front door of Raymond's house. Several of the veteran players walked in in front of him. He heard them flirting. Then he saw her. She was gorgeous. It was all he could do to keep from staring at her.

Then Raymond introduced her as his younger sister. Damn, he thought. Just his luck. This beautiful woman was a teammates sister. He would never be able to ask her out.... Raymond wouldn't allow it, and his teammates would never let him hear the end of it.

He took her hand when she offered. "It is very nice to meet you, Erin." Her bright green eyes were mesmerizing and he couldn't help but look into them. Then Pat decided to through a dig at Raymond, and he said to Erin "Now I understand why Raymond is so ugly, you got all of the good looks."
 
Erin threw her head back and laughed at Pat's comment. Raymond slugged him in the shoulder playfully.

"Watch it rookie" he said with a grin.

Erins eyes were still bright with laughter."Hey, don't blame him just cause he speaks the truth, Ray-Ray" Erin said, reverting to his childhood nickname (which he hated). Raymond scowled playfully at her and then muttered "You behave" before turning and going to entertain his guests, leaving Erin and Pat together alone.

"So, I saw your interview this evening, you did great. How are you liking the big leagues?" Erin asked conversationally. More people were starting to arrive and Erin stepped a bit closer so she could hear his answer over the music that had been turned on.

He even smells delicious, she thought to herself. She then mentally chastised herself. She shouldn't be having thoughts like that about him. She was never attracted to any of Raymonds teammates ... but there was just something different about Pat.
 
"Ray-Ray? Isn't that cute." he laughed at Raymond. He watched as Raymond walked away and gave Erin and him a dirty look. He looked back to erin. "I love it in the majors. It beats the hell out of the long bus rides and flea-bag hotels of the minors."

As she moved closer to him he allowed his eyes to move over her and take her in. Damn, was she hot. The clothes she was wearing just added to the attraction. The jeans accentuated her firm ass, and the top showed off her perfect breasts.

Erin was beautiful and sexy and he loved being so close to her, but...... She was Raymond's sister and he could not take the chance of alienating any of his teammates, especially the one that had taken Pat under his wing.


What an awful predicament.
 
Erin laughed at Pat teasing Raymond."yeah he hates when I use that name" she said."Hey you wanna beer or something?" she asked. The music was now pumping loudly and people were helping themselves to the plentiful alcoholic beverages. Erin was only 20 but she did drink when st Raymondd house since there would be no reason for her to drive.

She studied the man in front of her. What she wouldn't give to have him really take notice of her, she thought. But she knew chances of that were slim. A lot of men were intimidated by her superstar brother and those who played on the team were afraid to tick him off.
 
"Sure, I would love a beer." he deserved one. he needed to relax. He had spent the last couple weeks uptight... after all it was his first trip to the show. He also needed to relax because he was extremely attracted to Erin, and she was hands-off as far as he was concerned.

He followed her to the cooler and he reached in and grabbed two beers. he opened them and handed one to Erin. They tapped bottles "cheers" and then he took a big swig of the beer.

He looked around at the party going on around him. For the last several minutes it seemed like him and Erin were the only two in the house.
 
Erin smiled and took a drink of her own beer. She too surveyed the party which was now on full swing. People were laughing,talking about the game and celebrating everywhere. Some other women had shown up and several men were working their magic with them. A few were even turning the kitchen floor into a makeshift dance floor.

Erin turned back to Pat."Before the end of the night someone will have ordered pizza, and everyone will be dancing. You just wait" she said with a grin. She had to look up when she spoke to him since he was a foot taller than her.
 
"Ordering pizza? I thought this was a classier party than that." He laughed in an atempt to break the tension. He looked at several of the women that had showed up. Something told him that they were the team groupies. He watched the dancing that was going on in the kitchen... that seemed more like grinding than dancing..... foreplay if you would.

He turned his attention back to Erin, afterall, that she was the best thing about the party. He was running many scenarios through his mind trying to figure out a way to ask her out or ...... but he was so concerned with messing the team mojo and his relationship with her brother. Ask her to dance, he thought... that is unintrusive. "Would you like to dance, Erin."
 
Erin busted out laughing at his comment about it being a classy party."Honey no one in their right mind would call these man classy" she said still grinning.

Then he asked her to dance. Erin smiled brightly at him, glad he wasn't so afraid of Raymond that he didn't want to show any interest."Sure, I'd love to dance" she said. Her heart rate had picked up when he asked and her body was humming with excitement at the thought of dancing with him.

As they headed into the kitchen area Erins hips automatically began to sway to the beat of the music, her jeans hugging her ass to perfection as she did so.
 
As he followed Erin into the kitchen, he couldn't help but watch her fine ass moving to the music. The jeans made that tight ass look so good and he was captivated by the way she moved it.

As the got to the kitchen, she turned to face him and they began to move to the music. She was an incredible dancer. She moved so well. In fact, they moved well together.

He leaned in to talk to her. "I guess I just figured that these big leaguers with all of their money threw classy paties, but this is ok, because I get to dance with the prettiest woman at the party." As he talked to her, his cheek brushed hers.
 
Erin's pulse hammered as his cheek brushed against hers. An innocent and brief touch but it was enough to nearly make her knees collapse. She didn't know what it was about this man that made her want him so bad but that attraction was definitely there.

Pat also had moves, she thought with a smile. They seemed to fall into a rhythm of moving that Erin wasn't used to having with a man. Their bodies were close, but not touching- yet. The song playing was fast paced but Erin knew that eventually a slow one would definitely come on. She wondered if he would dance with her to a slow song.

"Big leaguers just means more money to throw away on booze and pizza" Erin said back, her eyes bright and laughing as she gazed at him.
 
He laughed with her. "I can think of a lot of things to spend big league type money on them, and none of them include booze or pizza." He was enjoying the time with Erin. She was a great dancer, she was easy to talk to, she had a great personality, and she was gorgeous.

Just as Pat was starting to forget that Erin was Raymond's sister, Raymond came busting into the kitchen. He looked around, and saw Pat and Erin dancing. "Hey Rook, watch yourself. My baby sister is off limits to ballplayers."
 
Erin rolled her eyes at Raymond's comment.

"Cut it out Raymond. We're just having fun. But I suppose if you'd like I could go crash some frat party back at college and have my way with some loser who's about to flunk out of college any day now" she said, sending him a smug look before turning back to Pat.

"Ignore him, please" she said with a small smile. "He thinks just cause he's my big brother that he gets to control my life," she turned and shot a look at Raymond again. "But he doesn't".
 
Pat looked at Raymond and then back to Erin. He was feeling like this was a test. A test not only as far as Erin was concerned, but a test in front of all of his teammates. If he was weak, he looked weak to erin and he looked weak to his teammates. If he was strong, he made an impression with Erin and his teammates. If he was too strong, he ran the risk of looking like a young punk to his teammates.

Pat went right back to dancing with Erin. He said nothing to Raymond. He just smiled at Erin as the began to move together again.
 
Erin smiled as Pat began to dance again. Good, he wasn't backing down to Raymond. that wad a good sign. Erin moved a step closer so that her hips bumped into Pat's. She winked at him. Just then her favorite song came on and she grinned.

She turned so that her ass was facing Pat and really started to dance. Her ass shook and wiggled in beat to the music.
 
Pat was extremely happy to see Erin's response to the way he handled her brother's comments. He was also real happy to see that his teammates reacted positively to the way he handled the situation.

As Erin spun around and began to shake her fine ass, Pat smiled and placed a hand on her hip.
 
Erin felt his hand on her hip and smiled. She backed up until her ass brushed against his groin. She then pressed against him so she was grinding against his groin. Erin was by far the best dancer there and several of the men were watching her as she danced with Pat.
 
Pat knew that they were the center rof attention now. For one, he had stood up to Raymond about erin, and for another, the hottest woman, who also happened to be the best dancer, was now grinding back into Pat.

Pat's hand on erin's hip pulled her back into him even more. He loved the feel of her ass grinding back into him and his arousal was going to be hard to hide (pun intended.) He moved his hand around Erin and placed it on her stomach at the waist of her jeans.
 
Erins stomach lurched as he placed his hand there. It was gentle but arousal coursed through her body. Her nipples grew hard beneath her shirt. She stood up straight, still grinding her ass against him, so that her back was pressed against his chest. She also tilted her head up to look at him as she danced. A brilliant smile crossed her lips as she saw him looking down.
 
Pat pressed Erin back to him. He saw her smile and smiled himself. He moved his other hand to her hip and with her; pressing his hips to her. Just as they were moving so well together the music stopped. Pat slumped a little, disappointed in the music stopping.

Then Raymond shouted, "Yo Rook, you are the new guy, so, you get to pay for the pizzas. Time to buck up, the guy is at the door." Pat chuckled a little and walked toward the front door. Standing there was the delivery guy. The pizzas had already been confiscated from him, and the partiers were already chowing down. Pat paid him and gave him a big tip... thanking him for his patience. Then Pat went back inside to look for Erin.
 
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