Tips for Creating Stories Women Appreciate

[StillStunned]

It can be done. In one of those flash-in-the-pan mainstream publications some years ago, an anthology of short erotica, one of the stories featured a man who was clearly physically unattractive. I think he was overweight, I'm not sure, and I can't remember the particular eroticism he was involved in, but I do remember that it worked. It needs a better author than E. L. James, here on Lit @ElectricBlue comes to mind. I'd read the submissions in any category if there were such a challenge here, just because it would stretch people's skills.

I actually have a couple of WIPs with less-than-gorgeous male protagonists. One is about an older man who meets a much younger (and also not conventionally attractive) woman. The other is about a young, awkward, overweight man who's something of a late bloomer and who flourishes as he becomes comfortable around an older woman.

It's all about highlighting their personalities. Most people in real life aren't drop-dead gorgeous, and still we manage to find someone who's attracted to us. If your minds are in sync, the physical stuff really becomes secondary.

 

[Bramblethorn]

And a six inch diameter dick, isn't all that crazy, it's probably more common than a twelve inch long dick. It's closer to an empty toilet paper roll, than a soda can.

No, six inches is more than double the diameter of a normal Coke can. It's almost exactly the same girth as a 155mm artillery shell, as seen in this photo:



You might be thinking of six inches circumference?

 

[Kelliezgirl]

No, six inches is more than double the diameter of a normal Coke can. It's almost exactly the same girth as a 155mm artillery shell, as seen in this photo:

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You might be thinking of six inches circumference?

Even the diameter of a Coke can doesn't sound like fun at all.