SmilingLez
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I just finished a free verse (posted in the poetry forum - 2025 holiday poetry) in honor of today - national ugly Christmas sweater day.
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Sex scenes with more than two participants are pretty hard to write. It's definitely a steeper learning curve than writing a two person sex scene is.I think orgies are the hardest things to write.
I think orgies are the hardest things to write.
Still exactly here. I've figured out a better way to divide the story into chapters, which fortunately/unfortunately has caused the introduction of a scene where our heroine fucks the drug lady for drugs, loses her shirt in a space-poker game, has super unsatisfying p-in-v sex with a super unsatisfying dick and takes her frustrations out on herself with her fingers (or a toy, if I can find one laying around). So I guess that's what I'm writing tonight. That plus some minor revisions will let me close the chapter. Then I can finish the negative stuff with a bit of sex that hopefully threads the line between uplifting and exploitative, and that plus minor revisions lets me close chapter 2. The apology, once I get it done, will let me close chapter 3. That'll bring this project to ~50k words, I think, but I'll be at a stopping point and able to switch gears to a Valentine's Day story.Halfway through the negative stuff. Once that's done, I have the insincere apology to write. Then I'm gonna sit on it until I figure out how to divide this up, because right now I expect to have a single 30,000 word chapter and a 12,000 word chapter, and I don't love that.
I think the minor revisions are going to be more extensive than expected, but the plan tonight is to knock those out, then get started on the negative stuff. Last night was quite productive because my newborn slept for quite a while; if tonight is like most nights I'll only get about two hours of writing time.I've figured out a better way to divide the story into chapters, which fortunately/unfortunately has caused the introduction of a scene where our heroine fucks the drug lady for drugs, loses her shirt in a space-poker game, has super unsatisfying p-in-v sex with a super unsatisfying dick and takes her frustrations out on herself with her fingers (or a toy, if I can find one laying around). So I guess that's what I'm writing tonight. That plus some minor revisions will let me close the chapter. Then I can finish the negative stuff with a bit of sex that hopefully threads the line between uplifting and exploitative, and that plus minor revisions lets me close chapter 2. The apology, once I get it done, will let me close chapter 3. That'll bring this project to ~50k words, I think, but I'll be at a stopping point and able to switch gears to a Valentine's Day story.
With my VD draft, I’m just about getting to the group sex scene, but it’s gonna be just two couples who do a swap later. I don’t think it should be difficult logistically, but I’m not sure it even qualifies as a “proper” orgy.I think orgies are the hardest things to write.
I think the challenge comes if you try to write the scene from multiple POVs. So far, the ones that I have written have focused on the experience of a single MC, their own experience and the activity that they see around them.With my VD draft, I’m just about getting to the group sex scene, but it’s gonna be just two couples who do a swap later. I don’t think it should be difficult logistically, but I’m not sure it even qualifies as a “proper” orgy.
Back on my bullshit. Revisions done, negative stuff started. Got a too-impaired-to-be-precisely-consensual sex scene to write, today or tomorrow, then some more very bad decisions, then a big dramatic speech moment. Then I can close the content-book on chapter 2.I think the minor revisions are going to be more extensive than expected, but the plan tonight is to knock those out, then get started on the negative stuff. Last night was quite productive because my newborn slept for quite a while; if tonight is like most nights I'll only get about two hours of writing time.
Bro what? Lol. I got it, but it took a few reads.Was having a conversation with @SamanthaBehgs about how best to describe characters, and I'm trying a really dumb framing device, where the FMC (in the story) reads a passage from a book where the FMC (of the book) describes how the MMC (of the book) looks, because it's how the FMC (in the story) thinks the MMC (in the story) looks too, at least superficially. The MMC (in the story) makes fun of how over-the-top the author of the book describes the MMC (of the book). It's fun to write, but it's a challenge to switch sentence to sentence from 1P past to 1P present when going from quoting the fake book to the characters offering commentary on it. It's also a nice change from having a non-described male character or shoehorning in a mirror scene or doing a bunch of indirect description.
Got the negative stuff done, but it ran longer than expected as it always does. Thought I'd have ~200 words to write, then the sex; turned into 2000 and the sex hasn't started. But the follow-up bad decisions should go quick, and the big dramatic speech moment has a theme that's developed organically, I think, out of what I wrote this evening. Sssssssssso hopefully the content of this chapter can be closed tomorrow, and I can move to the third chapter, or work on the V-Day entry, or the Summer Lovin' entry or outline the Nude Day entry or maybe an Oggbashan entry that'd be a prequel to a different series. Too many things to write and too few hours when I'm not caring for a newborn in which to write them!Back on my bullshit. Revisions done, negative stuff started. Got a too-impaired-to-be-precisely-consensual sex scene to write, today or tomorrow, then some more very bad decisions, then a big dramatic speech moment. Then I can close the content-book on chapter 2.