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For more than a week or so?
Got the negative stuff done, but it ran longer than expected as it always does. Thought I'd have ~200 words to write, then the sex; turned into 2000 and the sex hasn't started.But the follow-up bad decisions should go quick, and the big dramatic speech moment has a theme that's developed organically, I think, out of what I wrote this evening. Sssssssssso hopefully the content of this chapter can be closed tomorrow
Normally I don't work on two projects simultaneously, but today I got ~2300 words of the Valentine's story finished, though I still don't know anything beyond the characters and setting. I've also added 1900 and counting to the other story, with a little more negative stuff and the sex, which is annoying to write when the MC is high on a substance that dramatically increases perception. Still think the followup bad decisions will go very fast -- no more than 300 words -- and the big dramatic speech will.. occur? At some point? The key is getting through this damn sex scene alive. It's been a productive day.Working on a Valentine's Day stand-alone sequel to my romantic series. Hopefully I can make it stand alone enough to qualify for the contest.
Had to take a break for another story, that has been burning inside of me.Currently working on Roma Aeterna, an alternate-history world where the Roman Empire never fell but evolved into a matriarchal technocracy. It’s part historical speculation, part character-driven drama, exploring faith, order, and desire in a society that worships light instead of gods. The project’s in a slow burn worldbuilding phase right now, but I’m moving toward more intimate, emotional narratives within that framework. I’ll start with a few short stories that reveal different facets of the world before I'll be diving into the larger arc. Or not, who knows.
Second chapter is in the can. I need to decide where to put the chapter break as there's three places it can go. I'm leaning towards keeping it where it is, but that means the chapters are 14,000 and 21,000 words long, and it'd be nice to shift that to something more like 16,500 and 18,500. Chapter 3 needs more meat on its bones before it can be done, but I also think I need to engage in a wholesale darling-slaughter here; I'm going to try rewriting most of it to condense what I have and add a bit more action and a little less "here are a lot of people" workplace orientation, even if it actually is a workplace orientation scene.I've also added 1900 and counting to the other story, with a little more negative stuff and the sex, which is annoying to write when the MC is high on a substance that dramatically increases perception. Still think the followup bad decisions will go very fast -- no more than 300 words -- and the big dramatic speech will.. occur? At some point? The key is getting through this damn sex scene alive.
Looking forward to reading that one.On the positive side, I did a lot of background work on my next story, Oh Sweetie, an LS story intended for the Valentine's Day contest.
That sounds so interesting as a plot setup. I can imagine it's not easy to pull off.The inciting incident for the story is one of my characters being interviewed by another on Radio 4, while the main protagonist listens.
Happy to help, hunAgain, I've gotten myself in trouble (@EmilyMiller I might need your eyes on this one so I don't fuck it up).
So now I'm nose deep in a late coming out story involving a lesbian awakening, a dramatic breakup, and a possibly autistic MC (absolutely unintended, she just appeared that way on the page).
If it makes you feel any better, my recent 20,000-word light foray into T/I just ticked over 40K-words and I still need to do polishing on a couple of the sex scenes.Second chapter is in the can. I need to decide where to put the chapter break as there's three places it can go. I'm leaning towards keeping it where it is, but that means the chapters are 14,000 and 21,000 words long, and it'd be nice to shift that to something more like 16,500 and 18,500.
Oh, very welcome to, You always make my stories better
Please can I beta read?

I absolutely adore this solutionWas having a conversation with @SamanthaBehgs about how best to describe characters, and I'm trying a really dumb framing device, where the FMC (in the story) reads a passage from a book where the FMC (of the book) describes how the MMC (of the book) looks, because it's how the FMC (in the story) thinks the MMC (in the story) looks too, at least superficially. The MMC (in the story) makes fun of how over-the-top the author of the book describes the MMC (of the book). It's fun to write, but it's a challenge to switch sentence to sentence from 1P present to 1P past when going from quoting the fake book to the characters offering commentary on it. It's also a nice change from having a non-described male character or shoehorning in a mirror scene or doing a bunch of indirect description.