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What makes me quit reading mid-story.

What makes ME stop reading?

Lazy writing. And by lazy, I'm not necessarily picking on grammar or spelling.

I mean lazy as in no thought put into it. Writer wants two characters to fuck, so they fuck. Why? Who cares? She's got big tits, he's got a 12 inch monster. Does that not arouse you? Don't question, just spank it to my story, Dammit!

Incest stories can be the worst at this.

Plot: brother sees sister naked in the shower, wants to fuck her. Goes in, cock throbbing, sister barely protests before dropping to her knees to suck the biggest cock she's ever seen. They fuck. They cum. The end.

If I wanted that, I'd just go watch porn.
 
Djmac1031 said:
What makes ME stop reading?

Lazy writing. And by lazy, I'm not necessarily picking on grammar or spelling.

I mean lazy as in no thought put into it. Writer wants two characters to fuck, so they fuck. Why? Who cares? She's got big tits, he's got a 12 inch monster. Does that not arouse you? Don't question, just spank it to my story, Dammit!

Incest stories can be the worst at this.

Plot: brother sees sister naked in the shower, wants to fuck her. Goes in, cock throbbing, sister barely protests before dropping to her knees to suck the biggest cock she's ever seen. They fuck. They cum. The end.

If I wanted that, I'd just go watch porn.
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You probably should avoid most of the stuff I write. LOL
 
TROPES!

the usage of commas may be stupendous :D the quotation marks sublime :love: the sentence structure miraculous:heart:

however if the storyline is family camping trip or mom/sister sitting on son/husband lap in a car or wherever or mom/dad die in car accident or home from spring break/college, or husband comes home and discovers wife screwing plumber, electrician, best friend and gets a baseball bat/gun...each category has them...

i'm out..on to the next looking for something fresh
 
The adventures of Rachel and Gregory, and what they said and felt about their smoothies. Going live tonight! lol.

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theWollstonecraftWoman said:
I'm on the Lit NEW drug in my pending files. Two stories go live sometime after midnight, somewhere in the world, tonight. It is a bit unfortunate they are coming out on Sabbath. I'm going to synagogue tonight and tomorrow morning. But, YEA for me!:nana:
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Surprise me, tell me neither of them has a white husband, watching his white wife, fuck a black man!
 
theWollstonecraftWoman said:
I'm on the Lit NEW drug in my pending files. Two stories go live sometime after midnight, somewhere in the world, tonight. It is a bit unfortunate they are coming out on Sabbath. I'm going to synagogue tonight and tomorrow morning. But, YEA for me!:nana:
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You have a kapele stories
 
MillieDynamite said:
Yeah, well, plenty of them around! :) You notice I didn't say my dad was like that, only he had friends like that. I lucked out when mum and dad took me in! Best adoptive parents EVER!
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According to my younger daughter (29) the top most embarassing thing I ever did to her was when she was in High school and I picked her up and gave her boyfriend a ride home. She was trying to act all cool so I put in the Cher CD that was both our guilty pleasure and I proceeded to not just blast but sing "I found someone" at the top of my lungs....and I cannot sing.

Every time her BF started to laugh she gave him the look of death and he'd try to hold it in.
 
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robroy1968 said:
The descriptor paragraph.
Poor grammar.
18 year olds as sexual geniuses.
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I did a few "descriptor" paragraphs in my early stories and quickly realized how much I hated them lol.

I very, VERY rarely mention specific penis or breast size now unless it's important for some reason.

Nothing WRONG with a good description to paint a picture, of course.

But yeah, the "Suzy walked into the room. She had 44D breasts and a 28 inch waist" passages do tend to get annoying lol.
 
lovecraft68 said:
According to my younger daughter (29) the top most embarassing thing I ever did to her was when she was in High school and I picked her up and gave her boyfriend a ride home. She was trying to act all cool so I put in the Cher CD that was both our guilty pleasure and I proceeded to not just blast but sing "I found someone" at the top of my lungs....and I cannot sing.

Every time her BF started to laugh she gave him the look of death and he'd try to hold it in.
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My pops didn't like a guy that came to see me when we had the big place and horses and really torked me off. The kid was bragging about what a great rider he was, and dad said, "Here, ride this horse. He so gentile a 5-year-old could ride him." Of course, a cayuse named Bad Bob isn't called Bad for the sake of irony. I knew the kid was full shit, and so did dad. I tried to talk him out of Riding Bob, but he tried. Good thing the round pen had sick inches of plowed-up powder for him to fall on. Oh, and by the way, anytime anyone says a horse is gentle enough for kids, don't ride him.
 
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