My first version of this was 3rd person. It seemed to me to lack impact. Another option was to write it 1st person, from the POV of the male - that didn't grasp what my own comment pointed out that I wanted to do: illustrate the vulnerability of women who consent to illicit sex. From either the male, or a 3rd person, POV, that seems to me to be impossible; the male (in this story) knows he just wants to give pleasure, so does the 3rd person omniscient. Only the woman (in 1st person) is fully aware of the risk she is taking - no matter how much she trusts the guy in the story.Fifty5, how about changing your point of view to third person and adding fictitious details of character: description, name, etc. You can still base fiction on real people, look at fan fiction. Fiction doesn't mean you can't be grounded in reality or that it has to be about a vivid imagination. But, you can do it in a way that it doesn't have to be incriminating. Find yourself an editor on here to help you. A bit of character and plot development should help. Give your story the time it deserves.
Read, Read, Read! The more of the type of story you want to write, you read, the better you will see what it is your stories might need. Lots of people on here with wonderful advice, constructive criticism, and encouragement. Use those resources. Goodluck!
PS: I did NOT mean to rhyme there!
No, to date I've never edited any of my stories after submitting them.
Maybe sometime soon someone besides me will show up....? 
I think there's lots of people who'd be more than willing to share their real snow with us (had flurries today), but I know you are just itching your wittle kitten ears to use the faux stuff, so...have at it!
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My pleasure! *wipes fake snow off of face* No, not looking forward to that nastiness either. But I can't wait to make *dreamy* snow men and snow angels and play.
) With the wind chill it was 10 degrees at that point, and it felt it, lol.
