Writing Exercise (ten words or less)

[FallingToFly]

"What did she smell like?"

Heartbreak and betrayal.

"Silk and flowers."

One word over.... but I still like it. And yes, it's in one of my stories.

 

[cloudy]

You win!

It was damn hard to do that in ten words.

 

[Affirmation]

"Alimentary, Watson." "But it hurts, Holmes!".

 

[Stella_Omega]

"What did she smell like?"

Heartbreak and betrayal.

"Silk and flowers."

One word over.... but I still like it. And yes, it's in one of my stories.

Beautiful.

I just did something like that;

"I ain't paying, I know what you're worth," he said, and thought; Priceless.

uh-oh, threadjack!

 

[Huckleman2000]

Not mine, but still good:
Other than that, did you enjoy the play, Mrs. Lincoln?

and:

"I enjoy homosexual necrophilia", said Frank in dead earnest.

and...

Rectum? Damn near killed 'im!

(the last two need to be said aloud to make sense)

 

[FallingToFly]

Beautiful.

I just did something like that;

"I ain't paying, I know what you're worth," he said, and thought; Priceless.

uh-oh, threadjack!

Stella, you and I need to seriously have coffee one of these days. I have a feeling the conversation would be staggeringly beautiful and erotic as hell- our minds seem to run in similar circles.

(And please, please, please don't take that as an insult, lol! It's just a fancy way of sayong I admire your eloquence.)

 

[Stella_Omega]

Stella, you and I need to seriously have coffee one of these days. I have a feeling the conversation would be staggeringly beautiful and erotic as hell- our minds seem to run in similar circles.

(And please, please, please don't take that as an insult, lol! It's just a fancy way of sayong I admire your eloquence.)

PM'd ya

 

[Huckleman2000]

This one is my own entry:

In the drawer with his ties, she found a note.

 

[Jubal_Harshaw]

She didn't even kiss me. Barkeep, pour me another one.

 

[elsol]

Because I don't love you anymore. I'm sorry.

 

[elsol]

Pawn shops don't pay much for engagement rings.

 

[elsol]

I...killed him. Tell me what to do, please.

 

[FatDino]

I slept with him...no, her...no, him...or...You!!!

 

[elsol]

I left her, and he's not my best friend anymore.

 

[elsol]

For Sale: American Flag. Blood stained.

 

[scriptordelecto]

Pawn shops don't pay much for engagement rings.

This is my favorite so far.

 

[elsol]

I did not have sexual relations with that male masseuse.

 

[elsol]

Woman. Wet. Warm. Wanton... Wonderful.

 

[elsol]

I want you...I don't need another friend.

 

[Darklove666]

Put the gun down honey, and we'll talk.

 

[elsol]

Leaves behind two young children and a loving husband.

 

[Grushenka]

I didn't know this was a contest.

I didn't either, then I wanted to honor the first 'entry' that moved me.

I liked your "Aargh, this geek hat..." entry.

Me too.

"...can't read it."

"It said, Wrong Way to Calcutta, Cristoforo."

You get at least a runner-up, glad you managed (more than).

In the drawer with his ties, she found a note.

Very nice. I love the simplicity and implications.

 

[elsol]

Son, Husband, Father, Soldier. A Good Man Rests Here.

 

[elsol]

The open pill bottles condemned me for failing her.

 

[elsol]

I slapped your mother around, Junior. I didn't kill her!