An excerpt from a new Emma & Lily story

[VallesMarineris]

To be fair, guys often compliment me on my “warmth and effervescence”, I’m like Coke that’s been in a microwave.

Emily

You also say above that you're dispensable.

Maybe you're a Pez dispenser?

 

[EmilyMiller]

I gave it my synopsis of Coleoidphilia…

I did get a stern talking to about being in breach of their guidelines

—

Emily Wilson gazed out of the viewport of the commercial space freighter, her mind drifting as she watched the stars twinkle in the distance. As the great-granddaughter of the renowned erotic novelist Emily Miller, she had inherited a penchant for passion and desire, yet her life aboard the ship was anything but exciting.

As a junior officer, Emily's shifts were long and solitary, with only the hum of the ship's engines to keep her company. The rest of the crew remained in suspended animation, leaving her to navigate the vastness of space alone. The loneliness weighed heavily on her, exacerbating her boredom and frustration.

In search of stimulation, Emily turned to vintage porn and the ship's rudimentary entertainment center, finding temporary relief in the simulated fantasies it offered. But as the days passed, even those diversions failed to quench her growing thirst for excitement.

One fateful night, while mindlessly browsing through the ship's archives, Emily stumbled upon a peculiar video – a girl, bearing an uncanny resemblance to herself, engaged in an intimate encounter with tentacled creatures. Despite her initial shock, Emily found herself strangely aroused by the sight, her pulse quickening as she watched the erotic scene unfold.

The following day, as Emily went about her duties, a sense of unease lingered in the back of her mind. Her thoughts kept returning to the bizarre video, the memory of it haunting her every waking moment.

Suddenly, the ship was engulfed by a strange cloud, its swirling tendrils casting an ominous shadow over the vessel. Emily's heart raced with fear as she struggled to make sense of the surreal phenomenon unfolding around her. But to her astonishment, nothing seemed to happen – the cloud dissipated as quickly as it had appeared, leaving Emily shaken but unharmed.

That night, as Emily lay awake in her bunk, her thoughts consumed by the events of the day, a presence manifested before her – a giant octopus, its form shifting and undulating in the darkness. It was David, a shapeshifting, telepathic alien, banished by his people for the crime of inter-species relations.

With his telepathic abilities, David sensed Emily's desires and vulnerabilities, and a strange connection formed between them. Despite the vast differences in their species and origins, they found solace in each other's arms, their bodies entwined in a dance of passion and ecstasy.

As they explored the depths of their newfound love, Emily and David discovered a bond that transcended the confines of space and time. Together, they embraced their desires and embraced each other, finding refuge in the warmth of their embrace amidst the cold expanse of the cosmos.

And as they surrendered to the primal urges that consumed them, Emily realized that sometimes, the most unexpected encounters could lead to the most profound connections – even if they were with a tentacled alien from the depths of space.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I love “penchant for passion and desire” I wish I could rite dat gud.

 

[EmilyMiller]

It just occurred to me, maybe I’m the one who causes the singularity, by introducing LLMs to tentacle porn

 

[EmilyMiller]

Of course this entire thread is an elaborate advertisement for my ChatMLE story

 

[StillStunned]

Not to spoil the fun, but remember when the mod issued a warning about al, the AI images people were posting?

In the meantime, James Cameron is going to have to remake Terminator 2. John Connor spends the enire movie giving the T-800 prompts to write sex stories.

 

[EmilyMiller]

In the bustling streets of Casablanca, Rick Blaine presided over his iconic nightclub, Rick's Café Américain, a haven for those seeking refuge from the chaos of war-torn Europe. Nestled amidst the swirl of intrigue and desperation, Rick maintained a facade of neutrality, but his past bore the scars of rebellion and lost love.

As December of 1941 unfolded, the shadow of impending conflict loomed over the city, casting a pall of uncertainty over its inhabitants. Among them was Rick, a man of many secrets and alliances, whose past exploits had earned him both admiration and suspicion.

One fateful evening, the arrival of a former flame, Ilsa Lund, reignited the embers of Rick's buried emotions. With her husband, Victor Laszlo, a symbol of resistance against tyranny, Ilsa's presence stirred long-buried memories of a love lost amidst the turmoil of war.

As tensions escalated and rival factions vied for control, Rick found himself entangled in a dangerous game of deception and betrayal. With the coveted letters of transit at the center of the conflict, Rick's loyalty was put to the test as he grappled with the ghosts of his past and the uncertain future that lay ahead.

In a dramatic showdown, Rick confronted his inner demons and made the ultimate sacrifice for love and freedom. With the echoes of "La Marseillaise" ringing in his ears, he chose to stand against oppression and tyranny, forging a path towards redemption and reconciliation.

In the misty streets of Casablanca, Rick and his unlikely ally, Captain Louis Renault, embarked on a new journey, their destinies intertwined in the crucible of war. And as they disappeared into the fog, Rick uttered the iconic words that would echo through the annals of history: "Louis, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."

 

[EmilyMiller]

It’s so much better than the original

 

[StillStunned]

What was the prompt for that? "Write a précis of Casablanca in the style of a 13-year-old who's only read the Cliff Notes"?

 

[EmilyMiller]

In the quiet and serene land of the Shire, nestled amidst rolling hills and lush greenery, there lived a hobbit named Bilbo Baggins. Content with his simple life in his cozy hobbit hole, Bilbo had never ventured beyond the borders of his homeland, preferring the comfort of his hearth and home.

One fine morning, as Bilbo sat enjoying a leisurely breakfast, a knock echoed through the door of his hobbit hole. To his surprise, a tall figure cloaked in grey stood before him – Gandalf the wizard. With a twinkle in his eye and a hint of mischief in his smile, Gandalf invited Bilbo to join him on a grand adventure.

Before Bilbo could protest, a band of thirteen dwarves barged into his home, their raucous laughter filling the air. Led by Thorin Oakenshield, they sought Bilbo's aid in reclaiming their homeland from the clutches of the fearsome dragon, Smaug, who had stolen their treasure and driven them into exile.

Though initially hesitant, Bilbo found himself swept up in the excitement of the dwarves' quest. With Gandalf's guidance and the camaraderie of his newfound companions, he embarked on a journey fraught with danger and discovery.

Through dark forests and treacherous mountains, Bilbo and the dwarves faced countless perils – from ravenous trolls and cunning goblins to the enigmatic creature known as Gollum, who guarded a precious ring of power.

As they drew closer to their goal, Bilbo's courage was tested time and again, his small stature belying the strength and determination that burned within him. Along the way, he discovered hidden reserves of bravery and resourcefulness, earning the respect and admiration of his companions.

Finally, they reached the Lonely Mountain, where Smaug lay in wait, his fiery breath casting a shadow of terror over the land. With cunning and guile, Bilbo and the dwarves hatched a daring plan to steal back their treasure and rid the world of the dragon's menace once and for all.

In a thrilling showdown that tested their mettle to the fullest, Bilbo confronted Smaug in the heart of his lair, armed with nothing but his wits and the courage of his convictions. With a stroke of luck and a well-timed riddle, he outwitted the dragon and secured the dwarves' victory.

As the sun rose over the horizon, illuminating the reclaimed halls of Erebor with its golden light, Bilbo stood alongside his companions, triumphant in their quest. Though the journey had been peril

 

[EmilyMiller]

What was the prompt for that? "Write a précis of Casablanca in the style of a 13-year-old who's only read the Cliff Notes"?

It was the Wikipedia synopsis (which reads much better IMO).

 

[Djmac1031]

In the bustling streets of Casablanca, Rick Blaine presided over his iconic nightclub, Rick's Café Américain, a haven for those seeking refuge from the chaos of war-torn Europe. Nestled amidst the swirl of intrigue and desperation, Rick maintained a facade of neutrality, but his past bore the scars of rebellion and lost love.

As December of 1941 unfolded, the shadow of impending conflict loomed over the city, casting a pall of uncertainty over its inhabitants. Among them was Rick, a man of many secrets and alliances, whose past exploits had earned him both admiration and suspicion.

One fateful evening, the arrival of a former flame, Ilsa Lund, reignited the embers of Rick's buried emotions. With her husband, Victor Laszlo, a symbol of resistance against tyranny, Ilsa's presence stirred long-buried memories of a love lost amidst the turmoil of war.

As tensions escalated and rival factions vied for control, Rick found himself entangled in a dangerous game of deception and betrayal. With the coveted letters of transit at the center of the conflict, Rick's loyalty was put to the test as he grappled with the ghosts of his past and the uncertain future that lay ahead.

In a dramatic showdown, Rick confronted his inner demons and made the ultimate sacrifice for love and freedom. With the echoes of "La Marseillaise" ringing in his ears, he chose to stand against oppression and tyranny, forging a path towards redemption and reconciliation.

In the misty streets of Casablanca, Rick and his unlikely ally, Captain Louis Renault, embarked on a new journey, their destinies intertwined in the crucible of war. And as they disappeared into the fog, Rick uttered the iconic words that would echo through the annals of history: "Louis, I think this is the beginning of a beautiful friendship."

CasablancAI

 

[lustychimera]

Sexy Good Omens.

I agree, it's a great recap. Every sentence adds a new twist or angle.

Despite their past allegiances, Lily and Emma learned to embrace their differences and cherish their shared humanity

This part made me do a doubletake. The first part is all about how they're celestial beings, the middle is about how they change, but at the end, it seemed to brush right over that seeming conclusion where they embrace their "humanity."

 

[Djmac1031]

Sexy Good Omens.

I agree, it's a great recap. Every sentence adds a new twist or angle.



This part made me do a doubletake. The first part is all about how they're celestial beings, the middle is about how they change, but at the end, it seemed to brush right over that seeming conclusion where they embrace their "humanity."

Yeah I questioned the "humanity " line too .

I'm like, ummm...

https://imgur.com/a/cplON6t

 

[EmilyMiller]

Sexy Good Omens.

I agree, it's a great recap. Every sentence adds a new twist or angle.



This part made me do a doubletake. The first part is all about how they're celestial beings, the middle is about how they change, but at the end, it seemed to brush right over that seeming conclusion where they embrace their "humanity."

I know, it’s almost like AI creates garbage.

Emily

 

[Djmac1031]

I know, it’s almost like AI creates garbage.

Emily

Still better than a Ben Shapiro script.

 

[EmilyMiller]

Sexy Good Omens.

I’ve not read the book, and couldn’t get into the TV version.

But people have said that Heaven & Hole is kinda Good Omens adjacent.

But with more blow jobs.

Emily

 

[EmilyMiller]

Still better than a Ben Shapiro script.

He has scripts?

 

[lustychimera]

Yeah I questioned the "humanity " line too .

I'm like, ummm...

https://imgur.com/a/cplON6t

I think it works metaphorically in an ironic twist of fate kind of way, But it reads kind of funny having it be in the middle of a paragraph and tacked onto a list.

 

[EmilyMiller]

I think it works metaphorically in an ironic twist of fate kind of way, But it reads kind of funny having it be in the middle of a paragraph and tacked onto a list.

The whole thing reads kinda funny.

Emily

 

[lustychimera]

He has scripts?

Ever heard him rap?

 

[StillStunned]

I think it works metaphorically in an ironic twist of fate kind of way, But it reads kind of funny having it be in the middle of a paragraph and tacked onto a list.

Read in the context of the Casablanca story, for example, it just highlights that AI has no actual understanding and is just regurgitating bits and bytes that it finds online.

Much the same as many schoolkids nowadays, I suppose.

 

[lc69hunter]

I love your fertile mind

 

[lustychimera]

it just highlights that AI has no actual understanding and is just regurgitating bits and bytes that it finds online.

I just posted a Been Shapiro rap song I found on YouTube just above this. Guess I'm showing my age.

I really don't think that would be a bad recap, but there's no nuance of subtext to it due anything more. It's straight up telling you: This happened and then this happened and then this happened.

 

[StillStunned]

I really don't think that would be a bad recap, but there's no nuance of subtext to it due anything more. It's straight up telling you: This happened and then this happened and then this happened.

Exactly. But without any understanding of what "this" is. The mention of the letters of transit comes out of the blue. The "ultimate sacrifice for love and freedom"? No, he sacrifices loves for the world's freedom. Combined with the "echoes of the Marseillaise ringing in his ears" makes it sounds like he dies. Forging a path towards redemption and reconciliation? Who, what, why? Why is his unlikely ally only mentioned right at the end?

As a synopsis it's awful. As a story, it fails on every level.