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Art Challenge v.2 Word vote: "KEY"

Best Solution to "KEY" Art Challenge

  • Kept

    Votes: 14 45.2%

  • Making Love

    Votes: 7 22.6%

  • Hidden Archives

    Votes: 5 16.1%

  • Sexualikey

    Votes: 5 16.1%
  • Total voters
    31
  • Poll closed .
Comment on 2 - clearly a lot of work went into this, I always respect that. I also was amused by the background because I think I recognize it from a museum mock-up of Edison's laboratory? :D One technical issue is that the lighting on the drawing seems to be a lot brighter than the lighting on the background, maybe darkening the drawing or lightening the background would make it look like it fit together a bit better, although it's not jarring the way it is. A Pygmalion and Galatea story is always cute, but I'm not sure this captures that emotion as strongly as it could - can't really see the inventor's face from this angle, and the gynoid is missing enough pieces to be a little creepy, although she has a nice facial expression. That little detail with the dripping is interesting, I like that.
 
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Comment on 1 - I really like the concept of the kept woman, and the fact that the lock has been painted-over long enough ago that the paint is crackly adds a nice implication that her existence is a long-standing secret. I spent a few moments wondering why no screw slots were visible through the paint, but then thought perhaps they were nails.
 
sunandshadow said:
Comment on 1 - I really like the concept of the kept woman, and the fact that the lock has been painted-over long enough ago that the paint is crackly adds a nice implication that her existence is a long-standing secret. I spent a few moments wondering why no screw slots were visible through the paint, but then thought perhaps they were nails.
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heh heh.. I really don;t think it matters too much one way or another.
we can set up a poll and ask all participants what they think.
 
sunandshadow said:
Er... what? Did I totally misinterpret what I was looking at or something?
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I do not think so.

We are at a state of pending conclusion on revealing the illustrators' identities prior to the close of the polls.
 
THROBBS said:
so, are we dropping the pretense of anonymous submissions?;)
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You're the one who told me I ought to comment on other people's pieces if I wanted comments on mine. I'm a lot more interested in commenting on new pieces than old ones.
 
sunandshadow said:
You're the one who told me I ought to comment on other people's pieces if I wanted comments on mine. I'm a lot more interested in commenting on new pieces than old ones.
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Yes, I stand by that.

However, then it becomes very tempting for each illustrator to respond to those comments.

That's all.
 
THROBBS said:
Yes, I stand by that.

However, then it becomes very tempting for each illustrator to respond to those comments.

That's all.
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I don't mind discussing techniques and what not in depth after each contest has ended, though.
 
IrezumiKiss said:
I don't mind discussing techniques and what not in depth after each contest has ended, though.
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that is my opinion as well.

discussion ahead of the poll closing can (should?) influence the votes.
I am willing to dicuss the ramifications of that too.
 
THROBBS said:
that is my opinion as well.

discussion ahead of the poll closing can (should?) influence the votes.
I am willing to dicuss the ramifications of that too.
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ok so I guess I jumped the gun, I thought we were gonna discuss, sorry bout that.
 
I want to encourage the people who just come to vote to comment - I'd way rather have a comment than a vote.

I'll be pretty thoroughly bored of each batch of pieces by the time the voting is over, including mine, but I do want to follow whatever rules the group agrees on, not trying to be a troublemaker. So people can either wait to respond to my comments or respond to them in PM I guess. Since I already voted I don't think it matters if I get confirmation now of which artist did what.
 
sunandshadow said:
I want to encourage the people who just come to vote to comment - I'd way rather have a comment than a vote.

I'll be pretty thoroughly bored of each batch of pieces by the time the voting is over, including mine, but I do want to follow whatever rules the group agrees on, not trying to be a troublemaker. So people can either wait to respond to my comments or respond to them in PM I guess. Since I already voted I don't think it matters if I get confirmation now of which artist did what.
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I think we can all benefit from hearing the responses.
 
I also find that be continuing discussion and commentary about all the challenges can keep them a bit more "fresh".

perhaps each illustrator can post an answer to "What the hell were you thinking?"as well as "How the hell did you do that!?"
 
sunandshadow said:
Comment on 1 - I really like the concept of the kept woman, and the fact that the lock has been painted-over long enough ago that the paint is crackly adds a nice implication that her existence is a long-standing secret. I spent a few moments wondering why no screw slots were visible through the paint, but then thought perhaps they were nails.
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heh heh.. I had to look back and note the title "Kept".

I love the voyeurism of this one. The crackle paint too...but I do not infer the "secrecy", only an old door. I never question the nails vs screws issue.

I would have like to see a bit more attention given to the figure. The contrast of flesh vs metal and paint I think is enough... the technique need not change, in my opinion.

everyone should take a look at xssve's version.
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Xssve's


HA!!! I did not even SEE the brick in the "black" of the negative space before! I tilted my monitor and there it was! gives more a sense of captivity.. a "prisoner" in a "cell"
 
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my 2 cents. I would like to keep voting and art anonymous.

Would love discussion afterwards about concepts, techniques, etc..

I agree with Irezumi, we can often guess the artist pretty accurately but the secret keeps the mystery.
 
kinkikittyn said:
my 2 cents. I would like to keep voting and art anonymous.

Would love discussion afterwards about concepts, techniques, etc..

I agree with Irezumi, we can often guess the artist pretty accurately but the secret keeps the mystery.
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ooooo Sekrits!!!!:cool:

me too.
 
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