Chasin' Chickens

My Erotic Tale said:
A carousel rose

She pulled her blouse back and exposed her breast
the crowd was swirling in a massive bliss
she puckered her lips and blew a kiss
closed her blouse and wiggled her hips

I sat unsettled and moved to move
I was growing in length and shuffled a shoe
I licked my lips like I wanted to lick her
I saw her shift as if she was stirred

:kiss:

This is Naughty and sooo sexy. I like !!!

:nana:

*grins
 
RhymeFairy said:
:kiss:

This is Naughty and sooo sexy. I like !!!

:nana:

*grins


yep I need to get more POWER
so I can work on some of these, actually I am doing the BOOK too
just not enough time to do it all.

I like the AV RF perfect. <grin> and then there is the new tale <bigrin> which you already no about <bigger grin> and I just keeping nymphs in everything...even fairys lol ...must be reminders to go to work <ha>
 
Reading the River

reading depth;
Bold and Italic shades
heighten the contours
of the shallow
and the deep.

reading current;
lap top
white 'caps' out
across the horizon
which border margins
and which is uneven.

reading technical;
shoreline font and size
river low or high?
For the water high
hides the stumps low
writers block.

reading genere;
genere the waters blueish green
each day differs
romantic moon
sun in a steamy cartoon
tissue novels bloom
"The River" by whom?
 
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Double Dealing ~

sun shine has escaped.
weathered a storm.
only to be blown away,
by the eye.

caught off guard,
by comic misfortune
of loves mistaken hand.

so many things,
gone wrong.
so very, very fast.
when one is watching,
protecting the future,
only to be treacherously
tripped by the past.

thinking all is going so well.
finally, seeing the rainbow
at the end of the storm.

finding out, you were in
the eye, the storm
... had yet to pass.

playing cards, with a
raging, manic storm,
is a game I have been
made to learn, to play
well.

then, with a flick
of the wrist,
my loving dealer,
deceivingly dealt in
a twist.

throwing the card,
I never saw coming.
this card marked
with death to this,
forevers hand.

no words uttered, for nothing
could be said. dealers, like
the customer, is always right.

my future was marked.
right from the start.
for nothing beats,
the love of this, my
double dealing man.

so I wait, forever
if it takes. for the
turning ... flipping
of next card.

my hope
... dream
'twill be a joker of
healing hearts, to
come save us.

hence,
this is where,
comic misfortune
comes in hand ...

~~~~~~~~~

I am working on this one.
Any advice would be appreciated ~ :D
I just like the twist and turns.
Just Me~

:confused:
 
RhymeFairy said:
sun shine has escaped.
weathered a storm.
only to be blown away,
by the eye.

caught off guard,
by comic misfortune
of loves mistaken hand.

so many things,
gone wrong.
so very, very fast.
when one is watching,
protecting the future,
only to be treacherously
tripped by the past.

thinking all is going so well.
finally, seeing the rainbow
at the end of the storm.

finding out, you were in
the eye, the storm
... had yet to pass.

playing cards, with a
raging, manic storm,
is a game I have been
made to learn, to play
well.

then, with a flick
of the wrist,
my loving dealer,
deceivingly dealt in
a twist.

throwing the card,
I never saw coming.
this card marked
with death to this,
forevers hand.

no words uttered, for nothing
could be said. dealers, like
the customer, is always right.

my future was marked.
right from the start.
for nothing beats,
the love of this, my
double dealing man.

so I wait, forever
if it takes. for the
turning ... flipping
of next card.

my hope
... dream
'twill be a joker of
healing hearts, to
come save us.

hence,
this is where,
comic misfortune
comes in hand ...

~~~~~~~~~

I am working on this one.
Any advice would be appreciated ~ :D
I just like the twist and turns.
Just Me~

:confused:
your amazing...and a writing tornado...excellent ideas
the length and the topics suggest that this is two poems
the eye of the storm was a great idea...only to smacked even harder
on the later half of the storms eye...I like this whole concept and your poem could revolve around that thought then

write another poem about the cards being dealt and the joker and all...this is just my ideas and opinion but...when I read it it read like two poems together <grin> please pursue the eye of the storm...I loved that concept <grin
 
Let me bounce this off of you,
or is it that your mind is glue
you take it and begin to chew

chewing on it like mental gum
I'm still waiting for the return
I didn't realize your stance was firm

I see in your eyes it still churns
now that the verbal has begun
I am bouncing off some other fun
 
having your fun
while chewing
your gum.
better watch out,
your brain might
begin to sprout.

big green roses,
round purple posies.
greasy gopher guts,
for gears. tiny tootsie
rolls for ears

have ya ever
seen such a sight?
man, your gonna
give us all a fright.

so no more gum
for you,
just go on
and play in tha loo.
we know your goin too,
before the night is through ...

:p :D :devil:
 
RhymeFairy said:
having your fun
while chewing
your gum.
better watch out,
your brain might
begin to sprout.

big green roses,
round purple posies.
greasy gopher guts,
for gears. tiny tootsie
rolls for ears

have ya ever
seen such a sight?
man, your gonna
give us all a fright.

so no more gum
for you,
just go on
and play in tha loo.
we know your goin too,
before the night is through ...

:p :D :devil:


lamo

now that's funny...cute...and so true <grin>
 
My Erotic Tale said:
lamo

now that's funny...cute...and so true <grin>

Cute .. yes. :D

Thanks My friend ~

Now I am gonna Bounce
one of your others
.. Sooooo Beware ~!!

:devil:
 
My Erotic Tale said:
there is a star in the twighlight
bright
a moon in sliver
that smiles
while the day dawns
greeted with a yawn

twilight twinkles, two silver
rings, round spheres hooping,
holes intertwined.

dawn yawns her greeting,
gentle smile, welcoming.
warm loving rays encircling,
encapturing your true
essence.

enrapturing rays, rings shining.
enchanting auroras twining
graciously, into the realm
of one.

:rose:

Hmmmm ~
 
RhymeFairy said:
twilight twinkles, two silver
rings, round spheres hooping,
holes intertwined.

dawn yawns her greeting,
gentle smile, welcoming.
warm loving rays encircling,
encapturing your true
essence.

enrapturing rays, rings shining.
enchanting auroras twining
graciously, into the realm
of one.

:rose:

Hmmmm ~


mmm mmmm nice

thanks RF
a ray of sunshine on another cloudy day <grin>
maybe this post won't be removed ...there is always PMs <grin>
when freedom of speech in PUBLIC is not allowed
 
muncher~ weg*

spontaneous
clinching
muscles
twittering
too
fro

milking
that cookie
muncher
more

more

:devil:

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
now ... thats outta the way
.. sorry had to be said ~

Happy Writing~

heheheheehehehehe

;)
 
RhymeFairy said:
spontaneous
clinching
muscles
twittering
too
fro

milking
that cookie
muncher
more

more

:devil:

grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
now ... thats outta the way
.. sorry had to be said ~

Happy Writing~

heheheheehehehehe

;)


where did you find that one of mine you sent me?
I can't find it...to WORK it over as you said or work on it...
any way...nice write and you always place a smile in my day.
 
I can't even find the e-mail...so I'll wing it!

One lone howl
at the moon's glow
a wolf in the night
remembers its love.

Soft paws pounding
running over the soil
guided by the light
of the moon coiled

in illumination's
brightly lit rings
a howling wolf
in the blue, sings

mournful memories
of yesterday
gazing at the stars
recalling frolicking days

in tune with the moon
the wolf's insight
expressing feelings
by the moon's light
 
A CHICKEN CHOKER
A CHICKEN CHOKER

Well I never...
well okay once


just the other day I was out in the hen house and that dang speckled hen wouldn't get out of the box so I could get the egg. She literaly pecked at me to keep me from getting my breakfast. I reached out and grabbed her and she began a 'squawking' flapping wings and carrying on so. Then she stopped, limp as a wash cloth I just felt awefull, I had choked a chicken. Now I knew what I was having for breakfast and dinner, well I layed the hen down and grabbed the egg. That was when 'Bruce Lee' come in and snatched my chicken and ran off. what do you think I did? I went after 'Bruce' I was gonna kick his ass for stealing my chicken. I layed the eggs down and ran after 'Bruce lee' I caught that dog in the corner of the fence and got my chicken back. When I went to get the eggs one of them was broken. Of course ole Bruce was lapping it up faster than wine to a wine-o.

I got one egg that morning and southern fried chicken that night ...the day I choked a chicken...I wrestled with the thought of this and finally I slipped off to slumber land about.....1201
 
Isn't that chicken post on two different chicken threads? I'm confused. We really shouldn't have two chicken threads on one poetry board. Something mighty powerful and sinister is 'bout to happen. Heed my warning!

Too much chicken. Too much chicken. Too much chicken.
 
WickedEve said:
Isn't that chicken post on two different chicken threads? I'm confused. We really shouldn't have two chicken threads on one poetry board. Something mighty powerful and sinister is 'bout to happen. Heed my warning!

Too much chicken. Too much chicken. Too much chicken.

I wrote it here, my collection and pasted it in the new chicken thread,
lord have mercy it is an endless bucket of chicken... finger licking good?
some body placed a poodle in the hen house about 12:01 stirred up the hens and they made a racket, it was so late into the night before we got settled back down that even the rooster woke up late and didn't feel like 'crowing' so we all slept in.
tosses 12 a milk bone.


I'll play nice...
 
the dog barks at the chickens for sheer boredom
he barks because he knows not, anything else to do.

If I tie him up he will bark more
if I leave him be he will stir up the chickens...

randy brody shoots dog for fun
I do not.
I think everyone has a purpose or rather something that they do well
I just don't believe this dog barks very well

omg...that makes me a critic <grin>
 
Thank you, Art, for your kind words.

You are truly a wonderful person. I think you and RF are the only two who poets who actually read my work and tell me how you feel.

No other poets on Lit care to tell me if what I do is good or not. But the two of you just seem to be sweet and kind.

Thank you so much....
 
Honey123 said:
Thank you, Art, for your kind words.

You are truly a wonderful person. I think you and RF are the only two who poets who actually read my work and tell me how you feel.

No other poets on Lit care to tell me if what I do is good or not. But the two of you just seem to be sweet and kind.

Thank you so much....


Thanks Honey

I enjoy your writes and encourage you to write more
if you have an older poem that did not get the recognition you wish it had
post it here or on DUSTY POEMS <grin>

you know the thing about honey is
it is so sweet <grin> like you!

and sappy like me...<laughing>
okay any way... don't be a stranger
 
chokin chickens?

well, I never
okay, once

I was in the chicken coop
stepping over chicken 'poop'
collecting me some eggs.

when I come across a chicken
that was bitching
about me collecting these eggs

I reached past this Hen
and she pecked my hand
and I was a tad bit shaken

when she did it again
'the pecking of my hand'
I grabbed me a handfull of chicken

The hen went to squawking
and wings were a flapping
while I grabbed me an egg

then the hen just dangled
limp as a wash cloth strangled
I was sorry and sad

I sat this speckled hen down
only for a moment then turned around
and that's when I knew something was wrong

I looked around the chicken coop
stepping over the chicken poop
looking for the hen that was gone

When I looked outside
the mystery subside
as this chicken was still alive

walking around on the ground
making those chicken sounds
that's when I went back inside

There in the chicken coop
stepping over chicken poop
collecting me some eggs

The day I almost choked a chicken
the day I was chicken bitten
the dangers of collecting eggs
 
your last day


It is simple
your in a time ripple
alive in the now
reading of how
it use to be


planning ahead
future's not dead
just not here now


The past is in your mind
it didn't go away
it is in you to stay
till that day
you are no more

a birds life is short
but long
in it doesnt know
what is right or wrong
it only wishes to fly
and sing songs
not knowing there is a day
it will be gone

is knowing death a curse
that holds you back
from spreading your wings
and flying into tomorrow
with out the thought
it may be your last day
 
Honey123 said:
Thank you, Art, for your kind words.

You are truly a wonderful person. I think you and RF are the only two who poets who actually read my work and tell me how you feel.

No other poets on Lit care to tell me if what I do is good or not. But the two of you just seem to be sweet and kind.

Thank you so much....

Aww Hun.

I love your writes. :heart:

We are all here to write ... learn, and just explore this world of poetry.
There are others who read your poetry, just sometimes we all do not have the time we want, require to say all we want.
I love reading and commenting. It inspires me to want, be more. Yet, I never have enough time and when I do .... Grrrrrr, I get writers block, lol.

I am Happy to tell anyone how I feel about their writing.
I love ... sharing and exploring through words.
So HANG in there. It will come in its own time,
then all will be well ~ ;)

As far as sweet and kind ..
Well Thank you !! I think, lol.
( Here I thought I was a Hot Fairy on tha Prowl for Love n Lust ;) :catroar: )

I hope to encourage and maybe help a lil. There are some that have shallow skin and for fear of hurting feelings, I give a lil criticism in hopes of helping. Without being mean and cold about it ~ I have received many comments back, thanking me and agreeing ( or not, lol), then they say ... what do you think, what would you change.

That's when growing and learning starts.
With a desire to want MORE form your writing
and learn from it and others. ;)

Just Me ~


RF~

:rose: :rose:
 
RhymeFairy said:
Aww Hun.

I love your writes. :heart:

We are all here to write ... learn, and just explore this world of poetry.
There are others who read your poetry, just sometimes we all do not have the time we want, require to say all we want.
I love reading and commenting. It inspires me to want, be more. Yet, I never have enough time and when I do .... Grrrrrr, I get writers block, lol.

I am Happy to tell anyone how I feel about their writing.
I love ... sharing and exploring through words.
So HANG in there. It will come in its own time,
then all will be well ~ ;)

As far as sweet and kind ..
Well Thank you !! I think, lol.
( Here I thought I was a Hot Fairy on tha Prowl for Love n Lust ;) :catroar: )

I hope to encourage and maybe help a lil. There are some that have shallow skin and for fear of hurting feelings, I give a lil criticism in hopes of helping. Without being mean and cold about it ~ I have received many comments back, thanking me and agreeing ( or not, lol), then they say ... what do you think, what would you change.

That's when growing and learning starts.
With a desire to want MORE form your writing
and learn from it and others. ;)

Just Me ~


RF~

:rose: :rose:

two rays of sun shine
I better get the sun tan lotion
and my boots <grin>


okay I have to think on it more but this thought came to a bit ago...


The Diver


Muff Diving is as serious as deep sea diving
snorkle in hand
and into the bush

to breath while lapping can be critical
don't hold your breath
but engulf the wettness

can man breath under water
with the right equipment
like a medium size dildo <grin>
insert into the pool and subside
strokes are obviously very important
for maximum orgasmic surges

a good Muff diver is always called upon again
you know they really can't swim <grin>
it's their hunger for the Art
of licking so close to a fart
 
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