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Angeline · Jul 4, 2008

PS I'll write erotic or nonerotic--we'll see where the lines go. But the best part is that once we do it, we can shame others into it, too. Lol.

The_Fool · Jul 4, 2008

a sequenced line, impale me with your spite

How the fuck do I get wrapped up in this shit?

I've confessed to no murders, how did I get served witch such a savage penance?

Angeline · Jul 4, 2008

The_Fool said:
a sequenced line, impale me with your spite

How the fuck do I get wrapped up in this shit?

I've confessed to no murders, how did I get served witch such a savage penance?

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside

Homie.....

(You love sonnets and me. That's what always does it.)

Homburg · Jul 4, 2008

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For I've two hands with which to two hearts

--

Did I do that right?

Angeline · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For I've two hands with which to two hearts

--

Did I do that right?

You need an end word to rhyme with "spite." So ten syllables ending in a word that rhymes with spite.

Angeline · Jul 4, 2008

I'm going to beddy bye. Sonnet to be continued tomorrow?

:kiss:

The_Fool · Jul 4, 2008

Angeline said:
I'm going to beddy bye. Sonnet to be continued tomorrow?

slavedriver...... :kiss:

Hom, if you want, we can switch the order and you give the first line.

Homburg · Jul 4, 2008

Angeline said:
You need an end word to rhyme with "spite." So ten syllables ending in a word that rhymes with spite.

Got the pattern screwed up.

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white

Anschul · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For I've two hands with which to two hearts

--

Did I do that right?

A sonnet? How can I resist?

...watch my punctuation...

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For I've two hands, and two more wait. This night

Your turn, Hommie? Just jump in...10 syllables...rhymes with beside

Anschul
...a sonnet...duh...no way I could stand on the sideline...It's sort of like chocolate or drugs...I just can't stop myself...

Anschul · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
Got the pattern screwed up.

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white

Ignore previous post...

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white,
Translucent alabaster. I, astride,

Still can't help myself...

champagne1982 · Jul 4, 2008

Anschul said:
Ignore previous post...

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white,
Translucent alabaster. I, astride,

Still can't help myself...

LOL, you're so giving, dear chefferro. This is their penance for flirty behaviour and if you wish to be absolved of sins real and imagined, I'll impose that you endeavour to write a mirror to theirs in tandem with each line as it is struck.

That oughtta keep yas all busy.

Homburg · Jul 4, 2008

champagne1982 said:
LOL, you're so giving, dear chefferro. This is their penance for flirty behaviour and if you wish to be absolved of sins real and imagined, I'll impose that you endeavour to write a mirror to theirs in tandem with each line as it is struck.

That oughtta keep yas all busy.

Damn, Champy means business.

And I am still trying to figure out what is wrong with flirty behaviour.

champagne1982 · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
Damn, Champy means business.

And I am still trying to figure out what is wrong with flirty behaviour.

silly. It's sinful s'all.

Homburg · Jul 4, 2008

champagne1982 said:
silly. It's sinful s'all.

Wait a gol-darned minute. Since when is sin wrong?!?

Some of my favourite things in this world are sins!

champagne1982 · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
Wait a gol-darned minute. Since when is sin wrong?!? Some of my favourite things in this world are sins!

Then you must be punished...

Homburg · Jul 4, 2008

champagne1982 said:
Then you must be punished...

Heh, do I ever know folks that would get seriously aroused to see a line of text like that.

sassynyc · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
Wait a gol-darned minute. Since when is sin wrong?!? Some of my favourite things in this world are sins!

i am so co-signing on this.

*exits quickly before the champ hurls pennance in my direction*

UnderYourSpell · Jul 4, 2008

*Sigh* everything I enjoy is either illegal immoral or fattening

Anschul · Jul 4, 2008

champagne1982 said:
LOL, you're so giving, dear chefferro. This is their penance for flirty behaviour and if you wish to be absolved of sins real and imagined, I'll impose that you endeavour to write a mirror to theirs in tandem with each line as it is struck.

That oughtta keep yas all busy.

Oooo...you're a hard mistress...

Angeline · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
Got the pattern screwed up.

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white

A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white
but shared with one and one while held astride

[Pssst Annschul love, did you see my crab cake recipe? They're gooood!]

Homburg · Jul 4, 2008

To reiterate, and make dead clear:

Line:
1-Fool Rhyme A1
2-Ange Rhyme B1
3-Homie Rhyme A2
4-Ange Rhyme B2

5-Fool Rhyme C1
6-Ange Rhyme D1
7-Homie Rhyme C2
8-Ange Rhyme D2

9-Fool Rhyme E1
10-Ange Rhyme F1
11-Homie Rhyme E2
12-Ange Rhyme F2

13-Ange Rhyme G1
14-Ange Rhyme G2

So I've two more lines to write.

And I dig your final line. Hell, the whole thing so far.

Angeline · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
To reiterate, and make dead clear:

Line:
1-Fool Rhyme A1
2-Ange Rhyme B1
3-Homie Rhyme A2
4-Ange Rhyme B2

5-Fool Rhyme C1
6-Ange Rhyme D1
7-Homie Rhyme C2
8-Ange Rhyme D2

9-Fool Rhyme E1
10-Ange Rhyme F1
11-Homie Rhyme E2
12-Ange Rhyme F2

13-Ange Rhyme G1
14-Ange Rhyme G2

So I've two more lines to write.

And I dig your final line. Hell, the whole thing so far.

Thank you, Homie.

We'll continue when Fooly shows up again.

:kiss:

champagne1982 · Jul 4, 2008

Homburg said:
To reiterate, and make dead clear:

Line:
1-Fool Rhyme A1
2-Ange Rhyme B1
3-Homie Rhyme A2
4-Ange Rhyme B2

5-Fool Rhyme C1
6-Ange Rhyme D1
7-Homie Rhyme C2
8-Ange Rhyme D2

9-Fool Rhyme E1
10-Ange Rhyme F1
11-Homie Rhyme E2
12-Ange Rhyme F2

13-Ange Rhyme G1
14-Ange Rhyme G2

So I've two more lines to write.

And I dig your final line. Hell, the whole thing so far.

I knew it would be a fun penance for you lot. Plus, you can thinly veil flirtation inside a penitent hair shirt... <<< yes, I know.

Guest · Jul 4, 2008

1-Fool Rhyme A1
5-Fool Rhyme C1
9-Fool Rhyme E1

That just strikes me funny. Any rhyming poem I'd do would be fool for sure.

Homburg · Jul 4, 2008

champagne1982 said:
I knew it would be a fun penance for you lot. Plus, you can thinly veil flirtation inside a penitent hair shirt... <<< yes, I know.

I remember as a kid reading about hair shirts and just not getting it. I've been furry since I was like 11 or 12.

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