Confessional Booth
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Angeline
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A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
Homie.....
(You love sonnets and me. That's what always does it.)
Angeline
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You need an end word to rhyme with "spite." So ten syllables ending in a word that rhymes with spite.
The_Fool
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I'm going to beddy bye. Sonnet to be continued tomorrow?
slavedriver......
Hom, if you want, we can switch the order and you give the first line.
Homburg
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Got the pattern screwed up.
A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white
Anschul
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A sonnet? How can I resist?
...watch my punctuation...
A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For I've two hands, and two more wait. This night
Your turn, Hommie? Just jump in...10 syllables...rhymes with beside
Anschul
...a sonnet...duh...no way I could stand on the sideline...It's sort of like chocolate or drugs...I just can't stop myself...
Anschul
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Ignore previous post...
A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white,
Translucent alabaster. I, astride,
Still can't help myself...
champagne1982
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LOL, you're so giving, dear chefferro. This is their penance for flirty behaviour and if you wish to be absolved of sins real and imagined, I'll impose that you endeavour to write a mirror to theirs in tandem with each line as it is struck.
That oughtta keep yas all busy.
Homburg
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Damn, Champy means business.
And I am still trying to figure out what is wrong with flirty behaviour.
champagne1982
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silly. It's sinful s'all.
Homburg
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Wait a gol-darned minute. Since when is sin wrong?!?
Some of my favourite things in this world are sins!
champagne1982
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Then you must be punished...Wait a gol-darned minute. Since when is sin wrong?!?
Homburg
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Heh, do I ever know folks that would get seriously aroused to see a line of text like that.
sassynyc
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Wait a gol-darned minute. Since when is sin wrong?!?
i am so co-signing on this.
*exits quickly before the champ hurls pennance in my direction*
UnderYourSpell
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*Sigh* everything I enjoy is either illegal immoral or fattening
Anschul
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Angeline
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A sequenced line, impale me with your spite
and kiss me while another waits beside
For skin so soft should not be cruelly white
but shared with one and one while held astride
[Pssst Annschul love, did you see my crab cake recipe? They're gooood!]
Homburg
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To reiterate, and make dead clear:
Line:
1-Fool Rhyme A1
2-Ange Rhyme B1
3-Homie Rhyme A2
4-Ange Rhyme B2
5-Fool Rhyme C1
6-Ange Rhyme D1
7-Homie Rhyme C2
8-Ange Rhyme D2
9-Fool Rhyme E1
10-Ange Rhyme F1
11-Homie Rhyme E2
12-Ange Rhyme F2
13-Ange Rhyme G1
14-Ange Rhyme G2
So I've two more lines to write.
And I dig your final line. Hell, the whole thing so far.
Line:
1-Fool Rhyme A1
2-Ange Rhyme B1
3-Homie Rhyme A2
4-Ange Rhyme B2
5-Fool Rhyme C1
6-Ange Rhyme D1
7-Homie Rhyme C2
8-Ange Rhyme D2
9-Fool Rhyme E1
10-Ange Rhyme F1
11-Homie Rhyme E2
12-Ange Rhyme F2
13-Ange Rhyme G1
14-Ange Rhyme G2
So I've two more lines to write.
And I dig your final line. Hell, the whole thing so far.
Angeline
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champagne1982
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I knew it would be a fun penance for you lot. Plus, you can thinly veil flirtation inside a penitent hair shirt... <<< yes, I know.
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That just strikes me funny. Any rhyming poem I'd do would be fool for sure.
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Homburg
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I knew it would be a fun penance for you lot. Plus, you can thinly veil flirtation inside a penitent hair shirt... <<< yes, I know.
I remember as a kid reading about hair shirts and just not getting it. I've been furry since I was like 11 or 12.
