Dueling Samurai

wipe the swet from my brow
tighten my grip on the scabbered
reflection of sun light glares off steel
 
slow calm strokes
tranquil ritual
painting heals

hehehe.. developed thru meditation blue/green walls this morning!
Du~ :catroar:
 
Du Lac said:
slow calm strokes
tranquil ritual
painting heals

hehehe.. developed thru meditation blue/green walls this morning!
Du~ :catroar:

"Paint the Fence"
(a quote from Karate Kid = citing my source for the ...<grin>)

after you paint the walls ...hehehehe
very theroputic Du~ or is that the fumes? <laughing>

so we gonna have a Haiku night?
 
My Erotic Tale said:
"Paint the Fence"
(a quote from Karate Kid = citing my source for the ...<grin>)

after you paint the walls ...hehehehe
very theroputic Du~ or is that the fumes? <laughing>

so we gonna have a Haiku night?

Night falls~
risen Moon inspires
more haiku
 
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powerful and zingy there Ninj loved it good work
Du~

Ninja Nookie said:
stars that fly
like piercing spears thrown
from a shadow
 
"Yare utsuna hae ga te o suru ashi o suru."
Look, don't kill that fly! It is making a prayer to you by rubbing its hands and feet.
Issa Kobayashi
 
I
Spongy springtime grass
Trampoline of the Goddess
Joy and hope returns

II.
Apollo's fingers
seducing winter white skin
wind chimes freely sing

Du~ :nana:
 
My Erotic Tale said:
sword lays in rest
next to a samurai sitting
watching Koi swim


Lightning strike,
swift...sudden...
Koi on spear.
 
Remec said:
Lightning strike,
swift...sudden...
Koi on spear.


Tears pour from the sky,
Empathy for ignorance,
Koi dances in flames.

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Du Lac said:
Tears pour from the sky,
Empathy for ignorance,
Koi dances in flames.

piles of scales,
amassed on the rocks,
gleaming.
 
I neglected to return with the edited version of my poem in the challenge:

Pressed a cup
of priceless joy
from my gleeful heart

Spritzed over
a large armful
red and white tulips

White became
alabaster
red, precious ruby

Offered you
a loving gift
please friend be happy
 
i guess my intent got muddled in the first version. I hope this version clarifies it. Thanks Tale.
 
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