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Re: Re: my storys

nitengale said:
[Some are too short and combining them would make for a smoothier read. Watch your spelling errors and how you use the quotation marks.


Smoothier?
Spelling errors?
~tickleticklegringrinnudgenudge~

I couldn't resist, darlin'! I love your writing and love your advice, but this one was just too good to pass up!
 
More smooth?
Much more smooth?
Smoothly?
Smoothiest?


At this hour of the day, I barely know my name...I need to avoid posting at this time :) Thanks Cym ! (brat) ;)
 
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