cymbidia
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Re: Re: my storys
Smoothier?
Spelling errors?
~tickleticklegringrinnudgenudge~
I couldn't resist, darlin'! I love your writing and love your advice, but this one was just too good to pass up!
nitengale said:[Some are too short and combining them would make for a smoothier read. Watch your spelling errors and how you use the quotation marks.
Smoothier?
Spelling errors?
~tickleticklegringrinnudgenudge~
I couldn't resist, darlin'! I love your writing and love your advice, but this one was just too good to pass up!