ladyphoenix
Really Experienced
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The Work of MyEros333
I read “Wolf Calls”.
Then “Dressing Down”. Then “Something Sensual”, and then it hit me. Like you, as the lover in “Something Sensual”, I was looking for a key. For the pin that holds your works together. There is usually a key. Or a common thread. Something.
I have been told that my stories are about control, in some form or another. Others are about freedom. Some are nothing more than wishful thinking.
MyEros333 is a seeker, and this line exhibits his search as nothing else can:
“For tonight will hopefully be just the beginning of many, but only as your desire permits. When you ask for my body, you gain the rights to so much more. The right to expect me to be renewed for you. The right to request anything of me without judgement and without rejection. The rights to secrecy and discretion. The right to be the sole posessor of my body and sexual self so long as you still desire me. Those are the rights I give to you, those and many more, and may you never have to demand them of me."
Now, I go on to skim “Something Wilder”, to see if the theory proves itself before I wax poetic about it. First the hypothesis, then the proof, and yes, it’s there. And now, the final step. I think that you must be single, so I check your profile.
Ha. I’m right.
These stories are exceptionally interesting, for someone twenty years older and with the wisdom of hindsight. Your theme is the discovery of THE ONE. You know, the woman who will fulfill you, love you, give you passion and grief and children. You are seeking, and it pours out in your writing. EVERY story starts the same way: a meeting. It may be in the woods, in the store, or on a hilltop, but there it is. You meet someone. Even in “Something Sensual”, where you are already with “her” at the start of the story, you write, “FOR YOU ARE NEW TO ME.”
There is good reason why you say these women in your stories are elusive. Because, as you have not found “HER” yet, you do not know which face to put upon her. She has no real form for you. If you had a wife you adored, or even a girlfriend that your heart knew was the ‘one’, your lover would not be so elusive.
Also, your stories are greatly egocentric. You, the lover, while certainly gentle and very considerate, are the focus. The great lover. That’s not a bad thing, darlin...just the reality of your work as I read it. You present yourself as focus, perhaps because, while you long to find her and truly please her, you also fear her. Fear losing yourself in her; losing your own identity to her. We all fear it. We all lose ourselves, to some extent. But remember, as you gain, she gains. And as you lose, she loses...but the whole is more than the sum of its parts. Stop worrying about it. She’ll come along.
I read “Wolf Calls”.
Then “Dressing Down”. Then “Something Sensual”, and then it hit me. Like you, as the lover in “Something Sensual”, I was looking for a key. For the pin that holds your works together. There is usually a key. Or a common thread. Something.
I have been told that my stories are about control, in some form or another. Others are about freedom. Some are nothing more than wishful thinking.
MyEros333 is a seeker, and this line exhibits his search as nothing else can:
“For tonight will hopefully be just the beginning of many, but only as your desire permits. When you ask for my body, you gain the rights to so much more. The right to expect me to be renewed for you. The right to request anything of me without judgement and without rejection. The rights to secrecy and discretion. The right to be the sole posessor of my body and sexual self so long as you still desire me. Those are the rights I give to you, those and many more, and may you never have to demand them of me."
Now, I go on to skim “Something Wilder”, to see if the theory proves itself before I wax poetic about it. First the hypothesis, then the proof, and yes, it’s there. And now, the final step. I think that you must be single, so I check your profile.
Ha. I’m right.
These stories are exceptionally interesting, for someone twenty years older and with the wisdom of hindsight. Your theme is the discovery of THE ONE. You know, the woman who will fulfill you, love you, give you passion and grief and children. You are seeking, and it pours out in your writing. EVERY story starts the same way: a meeting. It may be in the woods, in the store, or on a hilltop, but there it is. You meet someone. Even in “Something Sensual”, where you are already with “her” at the start of the story, you write, “FOR YOU ARE NEW TO ME.”
There is good reason why you say these women in your stories are elusive. Because, as you have not found “HER” yet, you do not know which face to put upon her. She has no real form for you. If you had a wife you adored, or even a girlfriend that your heart knew was the ‘one’, your lover would not be so elusive.
Also, your stories are greatly egocentric. You, the lover, while certainly gentle and very considerate, are the focus. The great lover. That’s not a bad thing, darlin...just the reality of your work as I read it. You present yourself as focus, perhaps because, while you long to find her and truly please her, you also fear her. Fear losing yourself in her; losing your own identity to her. We all fear it. We all lose ourselves, to some extent. But remember, as you gain, she gains. And as you lose, she loses...but the whole is more than the sum of its parts. Stop worrying about it. She’ll come along.
