Horrible story

[LadyIlsa]

Just my 2 cents

To me, a transcript could almost be written in 'play' format - like for the stage. You could 'set the scene', have plenty of dialog and 'staging instructions'. That way, it might flow more easily.

just a thought

 

[KarennaC]

Dv8t, thank you for your feedback!

LadyIlsa, ooh, good idea!

 

[LadyIlsa]

I actually had an idea while I was reading it: Honey could be sitting there in curlers and face cream, filing her nails while writing. Travelingman could actually be in a large conference listening to some jerk give a 'buzz word' speech. The stage settings could reflect that. And you could have other dialog: the speaker and the husband - back and forth and Honey could have on Jeapardy and could randomly call out answers.

Just a thought. LOL

 

[mjl2010]

To me, a transcript could almost be written in 'play' format - like for the stage. You could 'set the scene', have plenty of dialog and 'staging instructions'. That way, it might flow more easily.

just a thought

Thats an interesting idea. GratefulFred's Story Ideas threads were like that. Too bad RisiaSkye put the kabosh on it and Freddy left for greener fields. His stories are ridiculously outrageous over the top and very bizarre, but that is how he writes, in screenplay sort of format.

The Case of the Missing Boyfriend begins on page two with post #30. I'd read the thread so you understand what's going on though.

This story was also posted in humor after editing and conversion to third person for which I claim no responsibility whatsoever. And when you read what happens to me, just remember. It's fiction people.

MJL