Litmerick

[denis hale]

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POE-ISH FLOW

With the hubris of a
well-hung Fortunato,

I flopped my schlong on
the bricks of Amontillado...

"I'm Monty, and
this here's my Python!" I told
dude who's

hatred was life-long,

and he seized my stick/sack
for hat rack in his Grotto.

 

[free_and_easy]

She's lifting her dress for the guys
And teasing their wide-opened eyes.
They like it a lot
To see what she's got.
Their praise flows as fast as it flies.

Couldn't resist stealing and taking it to where I thought they were looking

She's lifting her dress for the guys
And teasing their wide-opened eyes.
They like it a lot
To see what she's got:
The pink petals between her tan thighs

 

[sensualquills]

On It Suddenly Being 4:54 AM.

All at once the night, has slipped away
All ready tomorrow today
And I'll be hearing
From my endearing
Feline, who I've left to play

 

[FifthFlower]

Up it Goes 2

Couldn't resist stealing and taking it to where I thought they were looking

She's lifting her dress for the guys
And teasing their wide-opened eyes.
They like it a lot
To see what she's got:
The pink petals between her tan thighs

Oh, she knows why your mind is a mess,
Why your eyes shift from breast to caress
Her high hips, butt and thighs:
"Ah! No panties!" You rise
And she smiles as she lifts up her dress.

 

[sensualquills]

don't you want her skirts inched higher?
corset cinched a little tighter?
she wants your lift
beneath her shift
to ride the load you have to fire

 

[FifthFlower]

Dinner at Her Place

Once again, a guy's guiding her hips,
Leading back to the wall, kissing lips.
Up her skirt for dessert,
Whipped and coming, now squirt
In the cream and enjoy how it drips.

 

[sensualquills]

your voice echos sin and perversion
a devilish corrupt diversion
for innocent me
who's desperate to be
de-flowered, and no longer virgin

Once again, a guy's guiding her hips,
Leading back to the wall, kissing lips.
Up her skirt for dessert,
Whipped and coming, now squirt
In the cream and enjoy how it drips.

 

[FifthFlower]

The Devil's Choice

I like the image of the virgin tempting the devil, sensualquills. Here's the devil again.

"A young virgin is sweet but those wives,
Who've been used a few times in their lives,
Are the ones I prefer."
So the devil does her--
And the devil in heaven arrives.

 

[FifthFlower]

The Virgin and the Devil

Another one about the devil.

There once was a virgin in town
Who gave the sly devil a frown.
What he saw made him sigh:
Miniskirt high on thigh.
As he knelt to look up, she looked down.

 

[sensualquills]

she looked down to see him below
hello there, she said, sweet and low
and asked him, per chance
would he drop his pants
and do more than watching would know


does the last line work?

Another one about the devil.

There once was a virgin in town
Who gave the sly devil a frown.
What he saw made him sigh:
Miniskirt high on thigh.
As he knelt to look up, she looked down.

 

[FifthFlower]

Assisting the Virgin

she looked down to see him below
hello there, she said, sweet and low
and asked him, per chance
would he drop his pants
and do more than watching would know


does the last line work?

The "would know" sounds odd, but I understand what you mean. I might have said something like "for more fun than just watching the show", but I like the way you put things, especially the "hello there" in line 2, which is not what I would have expected the virgin to say under the circumstances. So I wouldn't change it.

And to continue the story:


"Please, excuse me." The devil is sweet,
"I'm just looking for something to eat.
You look fine under there.
What nice panties you wear!
Here, I'll drop them. Ah, yes, lift your feet."

 

[FifthFlower]

Hey, Bill, Look What They Want Your Baby To Do

Billy's girl is up dancing, hair flips,
While the guys urge her, hoping she strips,
But Bill's baby is good,
Cute and sweet--Oh! How could
She be showing them how it unzips?"

 

[tungtied2u]

there was a man with a young cock
which he stroked lovingly round the clock
one day it stopped growing
the next it stopped crowing
its foul limpness came as quite a shock

 

[sensualquills]

"Please, excuse me." The devil is sweet,
"I'm just looking for something to eat.
You look fine under there.
What nice panties you wear!
Here, I'll drop them. Ah, yes, lift your feet."

I offered that Devil of mine,
By spreading my legs, there to dine
On sweet inner lips
Grinding with my hips
So he'd taste of the utter devine

 

[FifthFlower]

The Devil Hesitates

I offered that Devil of mine,
By spreading my legs, there to dine
On sweet inner lips
Grinding with my hips
So he'd taste of the utter devine

After eating, he stares in her eyes
Whose beauty he could recognize.
She's a virgin, though, still.
Should he wait, or now fill
Her with more than his pretty love lies?

 

[sensualquills]

After eating, he stares in her eyes
Whose beauty he could recognize.
She's a virgin, though, still.
Should he wait, or now fill
Her with more than his pretty love lies?

She couldn't resist him for when
In intricate tongue he would pen
His corruption to her
'Gainst her pussy fur
She urged him to fill her right then

 

[FifthFlower]

The Devil Says, "What the Hell"

She couldn't resist him for when
In intricate tongue he would pen
His corruption to her
'Gainst her pussy fur
She urged him to fill her right then

He's the devil, he thought, so why should
He refrain since another one would
Not disdain such a chance
To give her this first dance--
So he pushed: "Oh, my God! That feels good!"

 

[FifthFlower]

Technique

there was a man with a young cock
which he stroked lovingly round the clock
one day it stopped growing
the next it stopped crowing
its foul limpness came as quite a shock

Grab the cock with your hand when you jerk.
If it crows, that is good, but don't smirk.
Slide the hand up and down.
If it's limp , well, don't frown,
You will then have more time for your work.

 

[sensualquills]

He's the devil, he thought, so why should
He refrain since another one would
Not disdain such a chance
To give her this first dance--
So he pushed: "Oh, my God! That feels good!"

And beneath her skirt he had found
The pussy he'd wanted to pound
And she loved the ride
His thickness inside
Made the most glorious sound!

 

[FifthFlower]

There Goes Another Virgin

And beneath her skirt he had found
The pussy he'd wanted to pound
And she loved the ride
His thickness inside
Made the most glorious sound!

While she's groaning, he pounds heaven's door.
The pure virgin's a virgin no more.
With his lust, stiff and blunt,
Shooting seed, you still want
To know what a cute virgin's good for?

 

[sensualquills]

reply: there goes another virgin

And a cute Virgin is good for a lot!
You'll get first dibs on her sweet spot
Untouched and unknowing
She'll go where you're going
And you'll be her stud when she's hot

 

[sensualquills]

and another thing

I like the image of the virgin tempting the devil, sensualquills. Here's the devil again.

"A young virgin is sweet but those wives,
Who've been used a few times in their lives,
Are the ones I prefer."
So the devil does her--
And the devil in heaven arrives.

the more men a lady can claim
is part of the fun, all the same,
men find their reward
in how many they've scored
and that's how she wins at their game

 

[FifthFlower]

The Devil Had a Good Time

And a cute Virgin is good for a lot!
You'll get first dibs on her sweet spot
Untouched and unknowing
She'll go where you're going
And you'll be her stud when she's hot

Since the Devil's a devil, he said,
"Gotta go. Hey, you're not bad in bed.
I'll be back when you've got
A sweet boyfriend who's hot,
Whom you love, and just might even wed."

 

[FifthFlower]

Explaining Her Husband's Peculiar Behavior to Her Female Therapist

My man is so wicked and bad,
Grabs my ass, sucks my tits, and he's glad
When I spread for delight
More than once in the night--
"And I think you're insane to be sad."

 

[denis hale]

Ode To A Paradiddle

I FEEL FREE

A three-fingered
thumper with dishpan
hands

joined him an all-girl
cover band:

"Ain't nothing
I can't play by ear,
my bass lines are timed
with y'all in mind,
sweet dears..."

And
his Jack Q. Bruce
technique for one week
produced a swell
demand.