repressedlips
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Thank you, I appreciate it!just read it, gave it five stars. You are a talented writer, I am sure you have a few more hot stories to tell
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Thank you, I appreciate it!just read it, gave it five stars. You are a talented writer, I am sure you have a few more hot stories to tell
Book-marked!I recently posted my second story: https://literotica.com/s/a-promise-fulfilled-2
It's about a woman who leaves a sexless marriage. She meets a man online and he promises to give her everything she's ever wanted if she meets him at a hotel.
I'd love to hear your feedback
Read and replied! We liked.Book-marked!
Sounds perfect to me - I seem to have this tendency tootendency to write dangerously descriptive interactions. That means vivid descriptions of sex, bodily functions, and raw carnal erotica.
Congratulations on your first Story, I read the story and voted. Normally I prefer slower build up but it was entertaining.New here so promoting my story for the first time - one story published - 5 Haikus (& more coming) - 3 art pieces under moderation
My first story on Lit - all feedback good & bad welcome (about the writing, not the morals).
I also don't know how it works here but please vote/rate my story if you like it
It's raw eroticism with very little character building but that was my aim - a pure sex fantasy of 2K words - some prefer
It's about a girl who attends a rock concert of her favourite band, The Grateful Dead, and is groped by a stranger and how she deals with it.
The name of the band may give a clue to the debauchery at play in this story & it is a homage to Anaïs Nin's story "La Petite Mort", the little death which is a phrase referring to an orgasm
It's in two parts with the second part to come shortly, I hope
Thank you. I appreciate you reading the story & taking the time to vote & comment.Congratulations on your first Story, I read the story and voted. Normally I prefer slower build up but it was entertaining.
Not so sure that I agree with that advice. I often write in that category and have read dozens(100's?) more in that category, and the reluctance level can be pretty high. The mostly anon. comments although can be quite brutal when you go the noncon-reluctance route.Thank you. I appreciate you reading the story & taking the time to vote & comment.
Yes, I am getting the feel for the stories on this site & see that they tend to be longer, with character building & backstory as the main focus.
Two (among many) of my writing weaknesses is exactly that - character building & backstory - maybe this will make me focus more on improving that aspect. This was my first fictional story that I wrote and I took out a lot of the reluctance aspect of the story on the advice of a seasoned writer on another forum as they suggested the mods were sensitive to anything close to rape. I didn't feel it did - in fact I felt it conveyed the emotional & psychological stages that a female might go through in such a situation.
In hindsight, I'm sorry I didn't leave those paragraphs in place but I'm a writing newbie & it's all part of the learning experience
Glad you found it entertaining, however.
One question: Other than promoting a new story here, what other techniques are acceptable on this site to bring people's attention to a story - I would like some more readers as the reading hits seem to have gone static?
Yes, I don't agree with it now, either - I wouldn't follow that advice now & would simply submit the story as-is & see if it is rejected or not. The begrudgers will also begrudge, I guess?Not so sure that I agree with that advice. I often write in that category and have read dozens(100's?) more in that category, and the reluctance level can be pretty high. The mostly anon. comments although can be quite brutal when you go the noncon-reluctance route.
Link would be helpful.The first few chapters of my new series, "Working in Real Estate" have been publish, with more to come in the next few days. While they are still mostly sex-filled, I have tried to include more story elements in this series then in my previous works.
And just for the record, I like stories revolving around hot real estate saleswomen. I've known one or two, and am reasonably sure they utilized their 'assets' to quickly reach the annual, Millionaire's Club. Of course with inflation, it's more likely the 100-Million Club.Link would be helpful.
Same here! I might have a slight obsession.And just for the record, I like stories revolving around hot real estate saleswomen. I've known one or two, and am reasonably sure they utilized their 'assets' to quickly reach the annual, Millionaire's Club. Of course with inflation, it's more likely the 100-Million Club.
Can’t read it now but gave it the obligatory look-see (read-see?) and immediately got pulled in, again, with your captivating , flowing style. I happily bookmarked it for later….How appropriate that my latest story was published on a Sunday. It is my first story in the Humor and satire Category. Let me know if I stuck the landing.
https://www.literotica.com/s/coming-to-know-god