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New here so promoting my story for the first time - one story published - 5 Haikus (& more coming) - 3 art pieces under moderation
My first story on Lit - all feedback good & bad welcome (about the writing, not the morals).

I also don't know how it works here but please vote/rate my story if you like it

It's raw eroticism with very little character building but that was my aim - a pure sex fantasy of 2K words - some prefer

It's about a girl who attends a rock concert of her favourite band, The Grateful Dead, and is groped by a stranger and how she deals with it.

The name of the band may give a clue to the debauchery at play in this story & it is a homage to Anaïs Nin's story "La Petite Mort", the little death which is a phrase referring to an orgasm

It's in two parts with the second part to come shortly, I hope
 
Hello everyone, I'm a brand new guy to the site. I'm a self published author with two novels available on Kindle, one erotica and the other more of a super-steamy romance. I've been working on a new novel that was originally going to be erotic horror, but so far it's just not turning out that erotic. There are two chapters published and three more that are currently pending. Chapter 3 was originally rejected for snuff/vore, even though it wasn't my intention to eroticize those elements - It was more a pure horror chapter. I've resubmitted under non-erotic, which the first two chapters should be categorized as well. New guy mistake, I'm hoping it can get accepted. My last two novels were written a chapter at a time on a forum, so it's a format that works for me and I'd love to be able to post it here.

Blurb: The Renfield Syndrome is a queer-oriented tale of personal horror. David is an ordinary man struggling to make a living in the city when a chance encounter will change him mind, body, and soul. Suddenly he is caught up in a world of blood and passion with his own humanity on the line. Bloody horror and gore, violence, and psychosexuality abound. LGBTQ+ (Bisexual)

https://literotica.com/s/the-renfield-syndrome-ch-01
https://literotica.com/s/the-renfield-syndrome-ch-02

Thanks to anyone who takes the time to read! It's great to meet you all!
 
A few stories ago, I decided to embark upon my Tour De Literotica (my Erotic version of the Tour De France) where I am attempting to write one story in each category on a quest to find my sweet spot. So far, I’ve written in the Erotic Couplings, Incest/Taboo, and First Time categories.

My current story falls in the Fetish category and tells the story of an FBI Agent who tracks down a grifting Romani (Gypsy) queen who cons men by using their fetishes to seduce them.

It is called: IN THE SERVICE OF MY ROMANI QUEEN

A word of notice: my writing style has been called “third rail” a term I absolutely adore. To me, it defines my tendency to write dangerously descriptive interactions. That means vivid descriptions of sex, bodily functions, and raw carnal erotica. My characters tend to go further because they live in the moment, which doesn’t always mean good judgment (admit it, you’ve been there and taken risks). In addition, I do not sanitize sexuality. Bodies sweat, nipples have errant hairs, noises happen, and so do accidents. These real moments of any erotic interlude are part of the big picture I make sure to include them in my writing to bring a modicum of realism to my tales.

If you choose to read this installment, please remember it is in Fetish, implying something somewhat out of the norm regarding sex. The story alone is compelling, so if Fetish is not your thing, you might still find this one enjoyable.

Let me know your thoughts. Did I go too far? Not far enough? Should I revisit Fetish? Lastly, please share your thoughts on where to go next.
 
Always a pleasure (literally not figuratively) to read another of your works, Trilby.
Bookmarked for soon.
 
New here so promoting my story for the first time - one story published - 5 Haikus (& more coming) - 3 art pieces under moderation
My first story on Lit - all feedback good & bad welcome (about the writing, not the morals).

I also don't know how it works here but please vote/rate my story if you like it

It's raw eroticism with very little character building but that was my aim - a pure sex fantasy of 2K words - some prefer

It's about a girl who attends a rock concert of her favourite band, The Grateful Dead, and is groped by a stranger and how she deals with it.

The name of the band may give a clue to the debauchery at play in this story & it is a homage to Anaïs Nin's story "La Petite Mort", the little death which is a phrase referring to an orgasm

It's in two parts with the second part to come shortly, I hope
Congratulations on your first Story, I read the story and voted. Normally I prefer slower build up but it was entertaining.
 
Congratulations on your first Story, I read the story and voted. Normally I prefer slower build up but it was entertaining.
Thank you. I appreciate you reading the story & taking the time to vote & comment.

Yes, I am getting the feel for the stories on this site & see that they tend to be longer, with character building & backstory as the main focus.
Two (among many) of my writing weaknesses is exactly that - character building & backstory - maybe this will make me focus more on improving that aspect. This was my first fictional story that I wrote and I took out a lot of the reluctance aspect of the story on the advice of a seasoned writer on another forum as they suggested the mods were sensitive to anything close to rape. I didn't feel it did - in fact I felt it conveyed the emotional & psychological stages that a female might go through in such a situation.

In hindsight, I'm sorry I didn't leave those paragraphs in place but I'm a writing newbie & it's all part of the learning experience
Glad you found it entertaining, however.

One question: Other than promoting a new story here, what other techniques are acceptable on this site to bring people's attention to a story - I would like some more readers as the reading hits seem to have gone static?
 
Thank you. I appreciate you reading the story & taking the time to vote & comment.

Yes, I am getting the feel for the stories on this site & see that they tend to be longer, with character building & backstory as the main focus.
Two (among many) of my writing weaknesses is exactly that - character building & backstory - maybe this will make me focus more on improving that aspect. This was my first fictional story that I wrote and I took out a lot of the reluctance aspect of the story on the advice of a seasoned writer on another forum as they suggested the mods were sensitive to anything close to rape. I didn't feel it did - in fact I felt it conveyed the emotional & psychological stages that a female might go through in such a situation.

In hindsight, I'm sorry I didn't leave those paragraphs in place but I'm a writing newbie & it's all part of the learning experience
Glad you found it entertaining, however.

One question: Other than promoting a new story here, what other techniques are acceptable on this site to bring people's attention to a story - I would like some more readers as the reading hits seem to have gone static?
Not so sure that I agree with that advice. I often write in that category and have read dozens(100's?) more in that category, and the reluctance level can be pretty high. The mostly anon. comments although can be quite brutal when you go the noncon-reluctance route.
 
Not so sure that I agree with that advice. I often write in that category and have read dozens(100's?) more in that category, and the reluctance level can be pretty high. The mostly anon. comments although can be quite brutal when you go the noncon-reluctance route.
Yes, I don't agree with it now, either - I wouldn't follow that advice now & would simply submit the story as-is & see if it is rejected or not. The begrudgers will also begrudge, I guess?
 
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Part 10 of my Proclivities series just posted
For anyone who has managed to stick with it, I'm curious to know if the heroine's experience in part 9 (even earlier episdoes could be seen as germain to her development) is naturally reflected by her evolution in part 10. LMK
If not, I hope you enjoy the story.
Regardless, I'd love to hear from you.

https://literotica.com/s/proclivities-pt-10
 
The first few chapters of my new series, "Working in Real Estate" have been publish, with more to come in the next few days. While they are still mostly sex-filled, I have tried to include more story elements in this series then in my previous works.

Working in Real Estate
 
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And just for the record, I like stories revolving around hot real estate saleswomen. I've known one or two, and am reasonably sure they utilized their 'assets' to quickly reach the annual, Millionaire's Club. Of course with inflation, it's more likely the 100-Million Club.
Same here! I might have a slight obsession.
 
How appropriate that my latest story was published on a Sunday. It is my first story in the Humor and satire Category. Let me know if I stuck the landing.

https://www.literotica.com/s/coming-to-know-god
Can’t read it now but gave it the obligatory look-see (read-see?) and immediately got pulled in, again, with your captivating , flowing style. I happily bookmarked it for later….
 
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