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[Rob_Royale]

"Kevin and Sister Charlotte's First Time"

https://www.literotica.com/s/kevin-and-sister-charlottes-first

Catholic school virgin nerd Kevin is used by a depraved nun.

It's my first attempt at erotica so any feedback would be most appreciated

You had me at "depraved nun". The story was WAY too short, it was such a little tease. Some typos and punctuation issues, but when you switch to a PC that should fix itself. I think you've got some writing chops and you should certainly continue. As for sticking with it, or moving on to a new subject, this depraved nun lover has an opinion, but it's ultimately your decision.

On the subject of real-life encounters, I recommend you still write them as a standard story. Stories that feel autobiographical can come off as the writer bragging and might not do very well. But your results may vary.
Welcome to LitE. I think you'll do fine.

 

[Charlotte_Sin]

You had me at "depraved nun". The story was WAY too short, it was such a little tease. Some typos and punctuation issues, but when you switch to a PC that should fix itself. I think you've got some writing chops and you should certainly continue. As for sticking with it, or moving on to a new subject, this depraved nun lover has an opinion, but it's ultimately your decision.

On the subject of real-life encounters, I recommend you still write them as a standard story. Stories that feel autobiographical can come off as the writer bragging and might not do very well. But your results may vary.
Welcome to LitE. I think you'll do fine.

That's actually some really good advice about the life experience ones thank you.

As far as the shortness of the story I kind of wanted to get a feel for people's interest in it before committing to putting down more time on the ideas. Bc I do have a lot in mind for those 2....

 

[Rob_Royale]

That's actually some really good advice about the life experience ones thank you.

As far as the shortness of the story I kind of wanted to get a feel for people's interest in it before committing to putting down more time on the ideas. Bc I do have a lot in mind for those 2....

 

[CoyoteHoward]

I don't write linearly at all. In other words, I don;t make myself finish story #1 before I go on to #2 and so on. At any time I may have a lot of stories hanging around in various stages of completion, from almost done to never-will-be-done.

I'd say strike while the iron is hot and the juice is up. Go with the new one while it's screaming for you to write it.

---dr.M.

Nor do I.

I found myself burning out when I was writing just Star Trek stories in the RP section of my fleet.

Now I purposely skip around.

 

[CoyoteHoward]

Freeuse 03 is up.

Took 3 days in pending. Not too shabby.

 

[LIDiver]

Freeuse 03 is up.

Took 3 days in pending. Not too shabby.

Link it please.

 

[CoyoteHoward]

Link it please.

Edited for link, also here.

 

[LIDiver]

Edited for link, also here.

Thx, got it bookmarked for later.
please give ours a look too if you have the time:
https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

 

[WendyTrilby]

I've just dropped my first work in the FIRST TIME category. I'm on a quest to indulge in every category (this will be my 3rd) on Literotica to see if the readers can help me find my sweet spot.

This erotica entry is called MY VIRGIN SUMMER and tells the story of four teens who make a pact to lose their virginitys before heading off to college. It's a compact 3 literotica page read.

I love to deliver vivid sexuality in my stories, and this is no exception. Let your imagination wander as to what might happen when sexually charged teens have a house to themselves on the 4th of July. Then read the story, and hopefully, I took some unexpected paths to reach the climax. As always, your response (good or negative) is appreciated.

 

[LIDiver]

I've just dropped my first work in the FIRST TIME category. I'm on a quest to indulge in every category (this will be my 3rd) on Literotica to see if the readers can help me find my sweet spot.

This erotica entry is called MY VIRGIN SUMMER and tells the story of four teens who make a pact to lose their respective virginity before heading off to college. It's a compact 3 literotica page read.

I love to deliver vivid sexuality in my stories, and this is no exception. Let your imagination wander as to what might happen when sexually charged teens have a house to themselves on the 4th of July. Then read the story, and hopefully, I took some unexpected paths to reach the climax. As always, your response (good or negative) is appreciated.

Oh boy oh boy, Wendy’s at it again.
Bookmarked!

 

[MelissaBaby]

When Kitty Boyd was eight years old, her father, returning home from World War Two, gave her a pair of roller skates for her birthday. Her home life wasn't good and she didn't have friends. Skating became her life. When she grows and gets the opportunity to join a roller derby team, she fully realizes what had always made her so different, and that there are other girls like her...

Posted in Novels and Novellas
Lesbian themes
52.6k words.

Queen of the Roller Derby

 

[CurvySassyAJ]

My latest offering is up. It is a cuckqueaning story, with two Cakes and a wife who discovers a side of herself she did not know. It is one long, for me (20k), story.

https://literotica.com/s/donna-the-cuckquean

I am wondering how it will do as one long story and not chapters.

 

[CurvySassyAJ]

When Kitty Boyd was eight years old, her father, returning home from World War Two, gave her a pair of roller skates for her birthday. Her home life wasn't good and she didn't have friends. Skating became her life. When she grows and gets the opportunity to join a roller derby team, she fully realizes what had always made her so different, and that there are other girls like her...

Posted in Novels and Novellas
Lesbian themes
52.6k words.

Queen of the Roller Derby

I just started reading this, so well done. It will take me a few times to get all the way through it, thank you for letting me know it was out there.

 

[LIDiver]

My latest offering is up. It is a cuckqueaning story, with two Cakes and a wife who discovers a side of herself she did not know. It is one long, for me (20k), story.

https://literotica.com/s/donna-the-cuckquean

I am wondering how it will do as one long story and not chapters.

We’re on it…. or at least bookmarked!

 

[MelissaBaby]

I just started reading this, so well done. It will take me a few times to get all the way through it, thank you for letting me know it was out there.

I appreciate that very much. I hope you will enjoy it.

 

[LIDiver]

When Kitty Boyd was eight years old, her father, returning home from World War Two, gave her a pair of roller skates for her birthday. Her home life wasn't good and she didn't have friends. Skating became her life. When she grows and gets the opportunity to join a roller derby team, she fully realizes what had always made her so different, and that there are other girls like her...

Posted in Novels and Novellas
Lesbian themes
52.6k words.

Queen of the Roller Derby

Not entirely our theme but will still give it a look. And man, that IS a long one!

 

[MelissaBaby]

Not entirely our theme but will still give it a look. And man, that IS a long one!

Thanks!

I've written some very long stories. Next, I intend to write a series of loosely connected shorter works.

 

[LIDiver]

Thanks!

I've written some very long stories. Next, I intend to write a series of loosely connected shorter works.

Will give the rest of your work a look too! Wish I had more time to read sometimes, so much good stuff out there.
Maybe tell me what you think of our single submission to date:

https://literotica.com/s/torys-emergence

Cheers.

 

[LIDiver]

My latest offering is up. It is a cuckqueaning story, with two Cakes and a wife who discovers a side of herself she did not know. It is one long, for me (20k), story.

https://literotica.com/s/donna-the-cuckquean

I am wondering how it will do as one long story and not chapters.

It’s long but certainly reads fast and is quite arousing!

 

[BBlaketbv]

I just published the second part in my first series.
Hot summer of '22 Pt. 02

A 25 year old man goes on vacation in France with two of his sisters and two friends. Together they experience new and exciting things.
In part 2 the first brother-sister action appears.

The first part of the series can be found here
Hot summer of '22 Pt. 01

Because this is my first series I would like to hear your feedback and tips. I have some ideas for part 3, but I haven't started on that yet.
So if you have some fantasies that relate to this story, I may consider putting them in.

 

[Scarla]

Hi!

I recently had my first story published on Literotica. It's about a shy woman who dreams about being brave enough to give out her address for someone to stalk her, and take advantage of her as she sleeps. She meets a stranger online who brings her a little closer to making the dream come true.

You can read it here: https://literotica.com/s/sleeping-beautys-dream-came-true
Hope you'll like it! I'm also working on a part 2. Would love to hear your feedback.

 

[LIDiver]

Hi!

I recently had my first story published on Literotica. It's about a shy woman who dreams about being brave enough to give out her address for someone to stalk her, and take advantage of her as she sleeps. She meets a stranger online who brings her a little closer to making the dream come true.

You can read it here: https://literotica.com/s/sleeping-beautys-dream-came-true
Hope you'll like it! I'm also working on a part 2. Would love to hear your feedback.

Bookmarked to give it a read soon!
We’re first time authors too, though been a while.
Welcome and good luck.

 

[LIDiver]

Hi!

I recently had my first story published on Literotica. It's about a shy woman who dreams about being brave enough to give out her address for someone to stalk her, and take advantage of her as she sleeps. She meets a stranger online who brings her a little closer to making the dream come true.

You can read it here: https://literotica.com/s/sleeping-beautys-dream-came-true
Hope you'll like it! I'm also working on a part 2. Would love to hear your feedback.

Stunningly well written. Worth a read, even if it isn’t your thing.

 

[Scarla]

Stunningly well written. Worth a read, even if it isn’t your thing.

Thank you so much for your feedback, and for your comment. I really appreciate it!

I'm working on a part 2, which I'll hopefully finish this week. I've also got a different story I'm hoping to publish soon.

 

[nock]

Hi! I recently posted my first story on here: Tricked Into Her First Breeding

just read it, gave it five stars. You are a talented writer, I am sure you have a few more hot stories to tell