pic-a-thon II

[annaswirls]

hm. hope this makes sense

#L

all makes sense, third stanza makes me cry, very beautiful

 

[Liar]

Apogee

Seems I can only write with illustations these days.

 

[PatCarrington]

Seems I can only write with illustations these days.

i'm not a fan of illustrated poetry in general, but that is one hell of a good poem, Liar.

 

[Liar]

Descent

I dunno, not subtle enough, I think. Suggestions?

 

[The_Fool]

I dunno, not subtle enough, I think. Suggestions?

I usually get voted down but here are some thoughts...

these peaks for those peaks.

surrounded by creation, I hesitate. (would like to see a stop here)


as unafraid as the curious licks
of magma from a restless gorge

(I’m having trouble going from dark lakes to magma)

The ridge quivers, heaves.
I slip, plunge
to be lost.

 

[Liar]

I usually get voted down but here are some thoughts...

these peaks for those peaks.

surrounded by creation, I hesitate. (would like to see a stop here)


as unafraid as the curious licks
of magma from a restless gorge

(I’m having trouble going from dark lakes to magma)

The ridge quivers, heaves.
I slip, plunge
to be lost.

Thanks, le fool man. I can see your point. Will ponder and work onnit.

 

[Zanzibar]

My first illustrated work.

Just some simple silliness inspired by the queen of the house basking on her window-perch throne in the afternoon sun.

Enjoy!

 

[annaswirls]

Catching your Passion:

Strings fall to the floor.

 

[Guest]

Feeding the black dog

just illustrated this one earlier today...

 

[4degrees]

just illustrated this one earlier today...

so awesome.
rrrrruff.

 

[annaswirls]

just illustrated this one earlier today...

nice Neo,
good boy...

 

[BooMerengue]

just illustrated this one earlier today...

That should be a poster, Neo!

 

[Guest]

That should be a poster, Neo!

thanks 4, anna, and boo. so am I take this to mean that the lettering is easily seen? I haven't put as much text before on art. so this is good feedback. thanks!

 

[Angeline]

just illustrated this one earlier today...

you're such a font slut.

 

[BooMerengue]

.....

 

[Guest]

you're such a font slut.

I used 5 or 6 different ones.

 

[Guest]

I don't know where I should have put this. Here, or Passion Suddenly, a new thread. Hope its ok.

It's perfect where it is

 

[flyguy69]

A poignant story, Boo. Thanks for sharing it.

 

[Angeline]

I used 5 or 6 different ones.

So I noticed. It's good. It's very good.

I'll be *ahem* borrowing that idea from you.

 

[BooMerengue]

Thanks Fly and Neo.

 

[Bacteriophage68]

...

Will you stop the program?

 

[Angeline]

This is just an experiment. I think it'll be to small to read.

 

[Guest]

Not for me, Ange. It's perfect in every way, the font, the photo presentation. Lovely!.

I'm wondering where the poem is for the picture in the post above yours.

 

[wildsweetone]

This is just an experiment. I think it'll be to small to read.

Oh Ange that's a beautiful picture. I'm having trouble reading the words, I like that font but maybe resizing it might help...?

 

[Angeline]

Not for me, Ange. It's perfect in every way, the font, the photo presentation. Lovely!.

I'm wondering where the poem is for the picture in the post above yours.

He doesn't seem too interested in posting poems.