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Silly Rabbit
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Damn! Just damn. Nice!
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Another poetry site pissed me off.
Uh uh oh ..... oh oh ummm no
All the single ladies don't ever try that at home until after he puts a ring on it.
It's there before eyes open
Before conscious mind has engaged
At the ready
Poking at my core
Questing for release
Spooned, you feed it to me
And though I take it between my lips
Sucking up what it spews into my core
As a matter of course
I can always feel the foreign nature of it
Afterward, when I stand
Feel it drizzling out of me
Oozing down my leg
Waiting for me to clean it up
Wash it away
I sometimes think
I should stop
Change how I deal with it
Scoop it out of and off of me
Smear it on your face
So you can see it, feel it and taste it
Like I do
I wonder in those moments
How you would react
Would you laugh it off
Revel in it
Be disgusted by it
Would it feel strange and foreign
To you, from whom it came
Or would you recognize it
As a natural part of you
Accept it and clean up
The mess it's made
Of both of us
pissed is good, the edit is better. Interesting history.Another poetry site pissed me off.
It's there before eyes open
Before conscious mind has engaged
At the ready
Poking at my core
Questing for release
Spooned, you feed it to me
And though I take it between my lips
Sucking up what it spews into my core
As a matter of course
I can always feel the foreign nature of it
Afterward, when I stand
Feel it drizzling out of me
Oozing down my leg
Waiting for me to clean it up
Wash it away
I sometimes think
I should stop
Change how I deal with it
Scoop it out of and off of me
Smear it on your face
So you can see it, feel it and taste it
Like I do
I wonder in those moments
How you would react
Would you laugh it off
Revel in it
Be disgusted by it
Would it feel strange and foreign
To you, from whom it came
Or would you recognize it
As a natural part of you
Accept it and clean up
The mess it's made
Of both of us
and this is fucking brutal
quick now tell how am I using the word "fucking"
well...As a compliment! It's meant to make people feel it in their gonads.
I'm trying to write a poem after the title "Shiny Happy Feminists from Outer Space", but it's just not good enough. Oh well.
Says you.
We will be judge, jury and executioner.
I am sure you could take that title and elevate it to poetryvana. Remember to insert mentions to vagina dentata, castration and strap-ons.