Recognition for New Poets

[Honey123]

Thanks Art...you make me want to keep writing, do you know that??

*grins*

es

 

[postobitum]

Thanks Art...you make me want to keep writing, do you know that??

*grins*

es

Yeah, me too! Thanks for the review oh encouraging one.

 

[impressive]

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reality: by impressive

okay this was impressive...of course...hehehe
no kidding this was creative and filled
with an impressive amount of wisdom...grin~

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Thanks, Art!

I feel like I'm tresspassing when I write poetry -- like I've no business being here -- but I'm compelled to do it, anyway.

The encouragement is very energizing.

~Imp

 

[The_Fool]

Thanks, Art!

I feel like I'm tresspassing when I write poetry -- like I've no business being here -- but I'm compelled to do it, anyway.

The encouragement is very energizing.

~Imp

Trespassing is good. I've felt like I've had no business being for almost two years but I still come back and say things that are fooooolish.....

 

[My Erotic Tail]

poems I read today

poems I read today~

The list seems to be pretty long...
I'll give it a go...

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society streak: by wickedeve

I swear wicked's better than a book
of cross word puzzles...hehehe

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gifts: by impressive

wow...I'm impressed...
this poem is original and unique
with impressives Literary Art~

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urber retriever by maria2394

what can I say...woof woof
I loved it...wistfull for me anyway~
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more than I am:by Du Lac

very easily read poem...
flowed like silk on skin...
pleasant and of course that Du Lac
witty charm wrapped up in a poem

thanks for the Anais Nin tip too~
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pendalus smothering :by sensuall

sensuall has a definete originality in poetry
erotic at literotica...excellent place for it,
always vivid and gripping~

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still life with mockingbird :by steve porter

I has a mockingbird once...
honest injun...ask templeminded
any way there noisey...
great poem and description of these birds
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okay thats a good start...
I'll settle in...to...the rain closet
and eat something and read a few more...

my erotic tale

ps post any poem you want..there's quite a few
<grin>

 

[robynwildchild]

hmmm

i'm an elementary poet.. if anything a rebel poet.. i'm not one for rules and structure through my expression.. i let it burst through in imagry and rhyme.... what else can a poem be if it starts in your mind and ends on the page for someone else to interpret?

 

[My Erotic Tale]

fri~

poems I READ today:

my search for poems top teach me poetry
continues...It's the way we view the world
that reflects in our poems!!!

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his love : by karie

touching and endearing poetry~
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stringing together letters: by Annora

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So read a writer you haven't read
Learn their inner thoughts
After all what better way
To spend a rainy day.
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wisdom words from the word wizard...
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stall : by Homerpindar

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"And where is my guest to whom I can tell
revealing truths to set my soul at ease?"
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mind bending~
questioning~
in Homer's unique style~

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let you hurt me: by tyralyn

touching and powerful poem~
drawn into the peots emotions quickly
and layed to the last line~

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12 naughty days (of Christmas): by ALSCOTSMAN

HO HO HO...ANOTHER X-MAS POEM
WOOHOOOOOO

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okay there's a start...
tathgatta did a few on the new poems
list...I tried to pick some not commented
on yet...give everyone a chance to be read!

later gator~

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Hello...

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.....(O) (O) ..........
Hello...(hello.)..hello...
....... ( ).......
<listening>
<grin>

 

[Du Lac]

smiles......

Hello .. hello.. hola, LOL.. reading ... writing.. melt down lol..
ha
du Lac

 

[My Erotic Tale]

a few poems~

words are journeys
in the mind~

here's a few Poems from
from the new poems list!
(~_*)
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this is a lesson poem~
of the utmost touching write...

Who will bear their Grandson by: Maria2394

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Perhaps a hundred years from now,
little boys, little boys
drowned like rodents, like unwanted cats-
Like little girls,

this poem is powerful
excellent topic and form~
gripping~

"any body did that while I was around
would get my..."<grin>... what they gave!
moving poem~ (a must read)
ATTENTION CLASS
"this is a Paramount Poem~"

100~(@)
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to the voyer by: HomerPindar

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Her head hanging off the side of the bed,
both of us watching you watching us,
each thrust rocking her in time to your own hand.
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erotic poetry at it's best...hehehe
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beyond the pecos by: postobitum

I sweare if I didn't know any better
I'd say Post~ wrote that for me...grin
I just got thru writing Pecos rose
and my goodness. I loved this...
gonna revamp my thinking on
aproach after reading this poem...
excellent post~
I loved the ... **** out of this poem too~
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Passion on the net by: Annora

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Brain kicks in endorphins pouring into our bodies
Numbness sweet oh so sweet release
Baby oh baby all I want to do is please..

Did I?
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I am suprised this didn't get a
green "E" or a red '"H" right off
the bat, erotic poetry at it's best
and with the growing number
of connections to the web these day's...
....well they should all read this poem...

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I hate it by: twelveOone

CLIP~
Notes and other stuff:
*adjusted for inflation
**Boer'd yet?
When I was but a wee lad, me Grandfather*** twood recite to me
in lilting melodie "The Face on the Barroom Floor" upon his bony knee
And hand me the cappe of his bier
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oh my... twelveOone has enchanted
us with a Weee bit o a tale with his poem
I hate it~

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edge of the day by: Du Lac

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Can you feel me now,
Though we’ve not met,
Swirling inside me,
My passion, your pet.
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oh the witty writes of
erotic poetry Du Lac has us spirraling
in emotions from words in her write
edge of the day~
awesome poem~

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one last kiss by: Seeker n Finder

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We are running late, half past eight.
Lunch? You need lunch? Just buy today!
Does it matter the hat don't match?
Permission slip? It's due today?

No playground today, I have chores.
I'm sorry my roast tastes different!
Time for bed, we both need our rest.
Kiss your dolly and say your prayers.
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oh this was sad...hehehe
and so true~
gripping and heartfelt~
honestly~

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disappear by: jessy19

oh the clever words this poem plays
hehehe...good one
short n sweet~

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rest by: doingmybest


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exaserbation, frantic flailing
and masturbation,
seeking peace a building roar,
sweet kiss imminent sore,
every last second is the best,
give me just a few more,
then at last, i can rest.

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interesting word useage~
witty word wizard~
just ... doingmybest~

 

[Du Lac]

Smiling huge....

Dear Art..
Thank you... can you tell which poems I write for My muse.. the voice that echoes the Creak.. in my mind?????????? MMMMM this was the second poem I wrote for him... most of the good (I think )poems are what he pulls from me.. my story Indian Summer.. is Creak... and excited I am.. I answered the phone.. and Creak... the rush of a waterfall breaking.. the voice that leaves me soaked.. calling out of the blue.. back... oh my.. some good writes coming darling... lol.......
creak...
Du Lac

 

[HomerPindar]

I'm glad you liked the poetry there, MET. It's the only good thing to come from not have company of my own...

HomerPindar

 

[My Erotic Tale]

Re: a few poems~

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to the voyer by: HomerPindar

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Her head hanging off the side of the bed,
both of us watching you watching us,
each thrust rocking her in time to your own hand.
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erotic poetry at it's best...hehehe
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HomerPindar

I'll get it right now I'm gonna write it 100 times..
does cut n paste count?


hey Du...
you been mused?
well go for it....
well you have several styles
or formates but yea the repetition
of passionate expression comes to life
from your muse...<grin>

...

 

[Du Lac]

wink wink

Just love you Art for seeing me in so many depths... and enjoying them all....
oh I do the love the swirling passions of anticipation.. and seduction ..........
wink..
du lac

 

[twelveoone]

Re: a few poems~

words are journeys
in the mind~


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I hate it by: twelveOone

CLIP~
Notes and other stuff:
*adjusted for inflation
**Boer'd yet?
When I was but a wee lad, me Grandfather*** twood recite to me
in lilting melodie "The Face on the Barroom Floor" upon his bony knee
And hand me the cappe of his bier
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oh my... twelveOone has enchanted
us with a Weee bit o a tale with his poem
I hate it~

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Art, you read the fucking notes, there was something on top of them.

BTW I highly recommend your "Haven't a Fucking Clue" two
case 1 bears looking into
case 2 I'm not going to use THAT phrase, not going there

case 1 I would have given an "E" to.
case 2 cries out (does it ever) to be reworked into a sonnet form and retitled "Ode to a 'do"

I like funny stuff, come to think of it stuff is a funny word.

 

[Du Lac]

wink wink

Just love you Art for seeing me in so many depths... and enjoying them all....
oh I do the love the swirling passions of anticipation.. and seduction ..........
wink..
du lac

 

[postobitum]

Thanks Art, I was hoping you wouldn't think I ripped off any of your ideas, it just kinda evolved towards the Pecos and took over, if that makes any sense! lol

 

[My Erotic Tale]

hey Du...I do I do~
erotic poetry extreme, literotica's pearls
been busy with work this week but I still
want to read more NIN'

hey twlveoone~
yep wasn't sure what to clip
from your poem so I tryed to intice
you some reads...with a lot of witty
STUFF to choose from...thanks for the
comments on HAVEN'T A FUCKING CLUE
3 just came out...grin...

postobitum...
oh I love across the pecos
inspirational...honest...I have a
series of 5 poems for a Pecos rose
that froze with other endevors but
fuels a fire to cook them right back up
but no way will they be as good as that
spin of words you delivered in your poem.
I am becoming a fan of your clever wit in
poem and comment~
great poem...(~_*)

I'm not posting any poems tonight so feel free
to post one for me to dabble in....grin

 

[doingmybest]

w0w

seriously. recieving critiques of my work is the bEST, thanks so much! i had no idea that someone could appreciate all this drivel besides little ole me...

much love, and more poems to you all

 

[postobitum]

postobitum...
oh I love across the pecos
inspirational...honest...I have a
series of 5 poems for a Pecos rose
that froze with other endevors but
fuels a fire to cook them right back up
but no way will they be as good as that
spin of words you delivered in your poem.
I am becoming a fan of your clever wit in
poem and comment~
great poem...(~_*)

Oh my *seriously blushing* thank you very much, that means a lot to me!

 

[Du Lac]

Three picks of the day......

Hi all!!! Some wonderful reads out there so many talented writers. I like poems that make me feel and twist me mentally...
here are my three I found did just that.....

Beyond Naked.... annaswirls

alluring.........
vulnerabilty, flowing, seductive, revealing truth of enticing love.....
beautiful
Anna uses the senses in this poem... cries of what our basic desires scream from naked truths......
thank you annaswirls for this trice of truth....

Dry... Lustheart

Edging of insanity.....
I felt this poem.. that is so good!!! Painfully my skin swims in the frustration of this visual and sensual write!
I feel the passion and that is what I look for.. this is great!

Bone Poetry.. wicked Eve

This is a learning poem for all to read!!!
swirling violent turmoil with delicate gentleness, false veils fall aside and Naked truth stands before all...slam dancing into a waltz Eve takes us from hell to heaven ..Wow..

There are so many others.. just no time to read...all.. I just wanted to make these known. I am not one for perfection in poetry I want the sensation.. seduction in to the mental bedroom of the writer... these three did it for me... thank you to all the great writers here.. you teach me so much!
Du Lac

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Three picks of the day......

Bone Poetry.. wicked Eve

This is a learning poem for all to read!!!
swirling violent turmoil with delicate gentleness, false veils fall aside and Naked truth stands before all...slam dancing into a waltz Eve takes us from hell to heaven ..Wow..

Hey, Du. Thanks! Do you know that what you said about my poem could be a poem?

 

[WickedEve]

Since a lot of new poets come to this thread, does anyone know a poet called mistress ruby or a similar name?

 

[Du Lac]

Re: Re: Three picks of the day......

Hey, Du. Thanks! Do you know that what you said about my poem could be a poem?

That is good poetry Eve.. when one poem inspires another poem.... lol... happy you noticed!
du lac

 

[Daisy May]

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