So...today is Arpil 10.2009

[nyminus]

Today is the 15th of April and guess what...THerrrreee back. The writers of pure stupidity on the site must have to wank often. Oh yes and their dicky poo drips precun like a dog's dick. There's more coming but right now I wan't to get this posted. I read it witle bitting my tongue . I just knew it would be dumb and that husband would wank over the thought of his wife getting felt by another (man?)

Yes they should divorce and yes the story was
04/15/09 by nyminus
dumb as hell. We are suppose to believe that #1 The wife didn't know that the foot that was rubbing her bare pussy had a sock or show on. Now it's easy to get a shoe off without the husband sitting right next to him but the sock would require some movement that even the dumbest of husband would notice...also the man had only fifteen minutes to do it. #2. Thew husband quit because the punk next to him dropped his napkin. #3. You stated that all the women were sitting across the table from thier husbands. Does this mean that the young guy was also married and that he mistook your wife's pussy for his own wife's? Your story is so full of holes. You led the readers to believe that your follow up story would have the husband wanking his cock while he watches the young lawyer fuck his wife at the next conference. Last you make it like the husband and wife were not respected#1 because the young guy felt that he could get away with it. What if the husband had tried to put his foot back up and found the young's foot there. If the wife was there then she would have noticed something. #2 Now call me dumb or something but let's see. The seating wasn't like economy on an airplane. The chairs would have been well spaced and the young guy would have had to stretch his leg over and actually rub against the husband's leg to reach the wife's spread legs. Let see if I forgot anything...oh yes...We are supposed to believe that a man that was smart enough to become a lawyer is stupid enough to throw it all away to rub some older woman's snatch...I think not...any way you indicated that another story is in the making..Please don't. You can check my thread on STORY FEED BACK and you can bet that you'll be there,SILSKA.that name sounds a lot like SILKLVR who I panned in yesterday's installment. Oh bye the way the name of this abortion is "Thhe Company Retreat" NYMINUS

 

[krastner]

Hey Nym..Give em hell. They need it...Bye the bye when are you going to start on the moderators...I want to see that for now KRASTNER

 

[miwoodsman]

OK, nyminus, I'll play your little game...

So, I read "Company Retreat" by slksca and I didn't like it. While the premise of the story was fine I found it to be poorly written. It seemed the author was in a rush, some paragraphs were way too long, the buildup non-existent, the descriptions were poor and the writing was juvenile, to be frank. I didn't rate the story as I don't vote on anything I consider to be a 2 or lower and didn't bother to leave feedback. It was obvious the author was just doing a short wank story.

To sum up, the premise was good but the story was poorly executed.

 

[nyminus]

lgreenwood Thanks for your feedback Neither of us liked the story, but for different reasons. I appreciate your candor. I have to say that my comments still stand. I could care less about punctuation and grammar and such. We write as we talk and for me to do otherwise is dumb, so I write as I talk. I guess that I don't talk good grammar and neither does most people I know. You actually have to think when you write about whether or not is was gramaticaly good. That meand that in order to make it good grammar you have to change the content. I find my self using a different word because the red underline stays there no matter what I do. To change it because of grammar is to change the thought. If we all talked good grammar and had to look it up to see if we were gramatically right ( see what i mean) then all communication would cease except for the well versed people who speak good grammar. I like it just the way it is, as fucked up as the world is. I usually go over my stories to make sure spelling is right and still get rejected for GRAMMAR and such. I sure hope the moderators who approve the stories are reading this. They wished they could censor me like they do the content of my stories.They probably wish that they could erase me from the site to keep me quite but here I have a few options.

Have to say that i am not playing a little game though I am dead serious. I realize that I am different from most people today. You see I went into the army at fifteen ( NG called into active service) and the years that I was supposed to learn all the social graces I was learning how to kill people. Actually before i went to Korea as a Ranger my ranger company was locked down and we were tigerized. I'm not kidding that's what it was called. They were supposed to make killers of us. From the time we got up we yelled kill...kill. Even when we slept we dreamed about killing. When I left Korea I was temped to another outfit for repaitrating our guys and ride herd on Chinese who wanted to go to Formosa. By the time I rejoined my airborn outfit in Japan they had already been de tigerized. Not me. I wonder if that's the reason for my anger. I know that i have it but I have learned to put it to good use like writing post such as this. So if you read me then remember this. I was the victim of your freedoms. I learned to kill instead of dating. I know a lot of the stories I hate are about immature people that never grew up past their high school days and i ake it out on them but ,,hey I got a life to live too. I don't kill anyone ( although I wish i could say that I never have) except in my post. That's God's truth and I hate to see people difile his marriage. If they want to fuck then fuck but not marry. If they want to have kids them good. I saw a country that was fucked up with kids being born with out know who their parents were and that Country did fine and those kids are fine now. So you tell me what's best.KIds borne without the benefit of marriage or kids that have their little worlds torn apart by thoughtl;ess drippy cunted drippy dicked parents who have never grown up

 

[krastner]

Het Nym...man I never would hjave thought that about you
I just thought you were a dirty ole man like me Kras

 

[cloudy]

lgreenwood Thanks for your feedback Neither of us liked the story, but for different reasons. I appreciate your candor. I have to say that my comments still stand. I could care less about punctuation and grammar and such. We write as we talk and for me to do otherwise is dumb, so I write as I talk. I guess that I don't talk good grammar and neither does most people I know. You actually have to think when you write about whether or not is was gramaticaly good. That meand that in order to make it good grammar you have to change the content. I find my self using a different word because the red underline stays there no matter what I do. To change it because of grammar is to change the thought. If we all talked good grammar and had to look it up to see if we were gramatically right ( see what i mean) then all communication would cease except for the well versed people who speak good grammar. I like it just the way it is, as fucked up as the world is. I usually go over my stories to make sure spelling is right and still get rejected for GRAMMAR and such.

That's what an education is for. Try it. You might like it.

 

[nyminus]

Krastner. I am a dirty ole man just like you are and a lot of the members of this site. It's just that I hate wimps and I hate cheating wives. I also do not like creatures like cloudy who exist soley for the purpose of using other peoples threads to extend her own numbers. You warned me about her but since I never went through the social training I also didn't learn that their are sluts like her around that do nothing but make trouble for people. I wish she would go away and hang herself. She might be...hung that is. It's hard to believe that a woman supposedly from Alabama. She/ he/ it sounds more like a real flaming faggot to me. So forget the hung part. If it is a man then you can bet that it has a very diminutive penis that has a problem of secreting too much lubrication, boy some of us men that's already hung could do with that. Tellme why, if you can, do little dicked faggots have so much when theu shoot their loads in their faggot partners mouth in several seconds, Real bad tasting spew too. all watery and taste like shit. Do you suppose that Cloudy eats it. Shit that is. It wouldn't be the only shit eater around. Oh the avatar she uses if a stripper that specializes in animals. Go figure. NYMINUS

 

[cloudy]

You are so incredibly stupid that it's really hard to believe you aren't putting everyone on.

Keep it up; great job!

 

[Guest]

I just want to know what Arpil is.

 

[miwoodsman]

lgreenwood Thanks for your feedback Neither of us liked the story, but for different reasons. I appreciate your candor.

You're welcome.

... You see I went into the army at fifteen ... I was the victim of your freedoms.

First, thank you for your service. While I have never served in the military, members of my family have and I know of the sacrifices that are made, both by those who serve and by their families.

Second, I find it disheartening for you to think you were "a victim of my freedoms." Certainly you are a product of your training and experiences but for you to feel you are a victim makes me think we, as a country, failed you in some way, and for that I am truly sorry.

... So you tell me what's best.KIds borne without the benefit of marriage or kids that have their little worlds torn apart by thoughtl;ess drippy cunted drippy dicked parents who have never grown up

I've met way too many people who shouldn't have kids but do, but I also know plenty of parents who are loving, responsible adults who raise their kids with plenty of guidance and support, regardless of whether or not they are married. I'll always prefer the latter.

 

[nyminus]

I think it only fair to say that not many of the younger crowd today has served in the military. That's a shame. Other countries have a compulsory service act. America doesn't have one and that's a shame. One thing is would do is to make the person aware. When you serve you get a dose of awareness. When you don't you get a dose of media propaganda. I notice that your writings seem sincere but are you arare. Or have you just taken a laa dee daa liberal politically correct course in awareness and think you are.
I am not chastising you but am adressing this post to all and sundry. Most people take life for granted , but that will soon change. The world is becomming more and more populated and there will be less food for people to eat. Then when that happens the real dog eat dog will come out. What also will change is the concept of marriage. Couples will no longer get married as a social thing but as a real " let's help each other thing" . It is too far and few between now. That's why I trash the writers of infidelity so much. I am hoping that the fuckheads will just dissapear. I plan to use more pshchology in my comments instead of raw anger. I find that most of the writers on Lit are just aching for pain and humility.

 

[sr71plt]

I find that most of the writers on Lit are just aching for pain and humility.

Ah, then, you've actually met and gotten to know most of the writers on Lit. That's quite a feat in itself. Congrats.

P.S.: You have inspired me to take another crack at the LW and Incest categories here. My incest one will post tomorrow and the LW should post a week from tomorrow. Thanks for getting to thinking on what could be written in these catagories.

 

[Guest]

Ah, then, you've actually met and gotten to know most of the writers on Lit. That's quite a feat in itself. Congrats.

P.S.: You have inspired me to take another crack at the LW and Incest categories here. My incest one will post tomorrow and the LW should post a week from tomorrow. Thanks for getting to thinking on what could be written in these catagories.

Why that's just plain devious, sr. Evil. Sneaky, even.

Cool.

 

[Shawn14316]

nyminus you are going about this the wrong way...

While I agree a lot of these cuckolding stories do not belong in the Loving Wife section(Tons of them don't have any love in them at all...) Nyminus you seem pretty extreme and you are not being constructive. Just suck it up and avoid the Loving Wife section...It really should just be renamed Cuckold section, but whatever.

 

[nyminus]

You are right Shawn I am extreme. I have my way of showing my hate for certaim people and you have yours, just let it go at that. Today is the 18 and there aren't that many LW stories but this one takes the cake. Here are the actula comments on it.



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2ugh
04/18/09 by cippy2k in uk
if I were a moderator I would take your fingers, than with a bread knife SLOWLY very SLOELY saw your fingertips off..to serve as a reminder to NEVER EVER write here again..oh Id leave the bone on JUST TRIM YOUR FLESH OFF!!!!

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1DO THIS QUICKLY
04/18/09 by Anonymous
Take a glass of water and drown yourself into it. You SICK creature. You burden on earth.

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1My nomination for Worst Story of the Year
04/18/09 by Anonymous in USA
What a despicable pile of shit. Is there a point to this story other than to describe an adulterous slut wife and a wimp husband? The Ct. Yankee

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2Is he married to her or ar they related?
04/18/09 by Anonymous
he sounds more like he's her brother than her husband. Give this guy some emotions...No wonder she's cheating on him, he has the emotional depth of a carrot.

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2I Can't Imagine Why
04/18/09 by Anonymous in SoCal, CA
they would stay together. She seems to want to be with her lover and not her husband. Why he wants to observe them is sick and not erotic at all. The writing is good but the subject matter sucks...

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1Gay
04/18/09 by Anonymous
and not for FEmales. he just wants to check out cocks. check the bio. he likes it in the ass.

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2HOW ARE YOU GOING TO END THE STORY
04/18/09 by Anonymous in USA
YOU JUST STOPPED WRITING. FINISH IT

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1You commentors so far are stupidos
04/18/09 by Anonymous in Obamanation
Commentors are big time stupid! Y'all haven't realized this and other stories like it are written by FEmales, NOT males! Get a life dummies! Written not for you to jerk off to though it IS for FEmales who luv to put males down - androgenists to their core !

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1Fuck You
04/18/09 by Anonymous
Your a little boy, no wonder she needede a man, yuck.

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1You know what dkmywife??
04/18/09 by Anonymous
You are a queer faggot piece of shit and your story is for masochist nancy boys.

I can't really add much to the above except to say that the (writer?) thinks that he is on so clever at writing. He is a wimp, that we know and he probably has a widdle bitty dicky poo that is always dripping . Perhaps he has a disease. His hands have to be a mess of thin wattery slime cause he wanked his wittle buitty while he was scribbling the abortion down. Good thing he can use the two smallest fingers on one hand while he types with the other. If you don't like what i said about you dkmywife then feel welcome to respond here if you have the nerve and if you can leave widdle bitty alone for a few seconds. That about all the time you have that you can say something about your barff barff gag gag story

 

[cloudy]

keep it up, you little short bus rider. Hilarious.

 

[michchick98]

keep it up, you little short bus rider. Hilarious.

It is quite humorous to watch. Although he still hasn't answered the two of the questions presented to him, one by me and one by SSS:

From me:
If you clearly don't like the stories, why bother reading them?

From SSS:
I just wanna know what Arpil is.

Mabye his head will explode before he can actually answer. I mean, he seems awfully angry today.

 

[michchick98]

You are right Shawn I am extreme. I have my way of showing my hate for certaim people and you have yours, just let it go at that. Today is the 18 and there aren't that many LW stories but this one takes the cake. Here are the actula comments on it

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I can't really add much to the above except to say that the (writer?) thinks that he is on so clever at writing. He is a wimp, that we know and he probably has a widdle bitty dicky poo that is always dripping . Perhaps he has a disease. His hands have to be a mess of thin wattery slime cause he wanked his wittle buitty while he was scribbling the abortion down. Good thing he can use the two smallest fingers on one hand while he types with the other. If you don't like what i said about you dkmywife then feel welcome to respond here if you have the nerve and if you can leave widdle bitty alone for a few seconds. That about all the time you have that you can say something about your barff barff gag gag story

I felt your message, minus the copy and pasted comments, was worth quoting. I found a good online translator and it actually has "TRANSLATE FROM IMBECILE TO ENGLISH" on it, so I was able to actually understand what you post here.

And while I'm here, I have a couple more questions for you, diaper boy.

Do you actually proofread your own work? I mean you sit here and tear apart other people's work and yours looks as though it was written by a nine year old. I couldn't get past the third paragraph.

Are you that much of a coward that you turn comments off on your stories? Seriously, you spew your filth and hatred all over everyone else but then refuse to allow anyone to comment on your trash. Makes you a coward in my book.

Now go run and cry to mommy, tell her the mean lady from Michigan called you names. Oh and have her change your diaper while you're there.

 

[sr71plt]

I think of it as performance art.

 

[cloudy]

I think of it as performance art.

Exactly!

A bit over the top, but hysterically funny.

 

[nyminus]

Well the most aggravating story? that was posted today (19th) IS ONE BY A CHARACTER NAMED JOHNTHOMAS221 CALLED LOST PROPERTY. It's all about a dumb ass couple that goes on the dance floor and leaves her purse with their passports and return tickets in it. We are supposed to feel sorry for these idiots that#1 take a purse out partying with them on vacation , evidently in another country. Now the finish dancing and so carried away with having fun the come from the dance floor to find the club deserted and the purse gone...OH MY GOD,IT'S GONE...DUH. They go to the office where the wife gets fucked by the club owner and a security wannabee and ends up screaming as she is raped and loves it. The husband likes to watch hius wife get fucked...OH MY.

Then the writer?dopes not leave a space for comments so we can all( the civilized people on the site) can't say nasty things to him. I imagine it was a lot. Well JOHNTHOMAS221 I'm gonna say it here. You are a rapist at heart or you wouldn't write rape stories. You are a wimp or you wouldn't know how to write wimp stories. So I guess you are a wimp rapist then. You are also dumb and an idiot to write about dumb idiot people. I think that sums you us.Oh I forgot, you are also a coward cause you didn't allow for comments to intefere you jerking your pathetic little drippy pecker.

Then there's the abortion by tripleg25 about a pathetic scardy cat wimp the drinks and looses his job. But he get's balls and finally goes into the room where bully boy is fucking wife and ends up getting cowed by 11 inch cock of bully. Tripleg14 you are shit. All this comes from your mind when you write about bullies with big cocks fucking your wife and you are also the wimp coward also. I thimk you need help from a shrink. Why don't you stor writing ...just to be honest I will post comments

but then you don't allow them like johnthomas ( another word for cock so I'll call him prickface) you are also a coward. So come on and answer me. Oh perhaps you are with all these other idiots who can lick my asshole.

 

[Darkniciad]

Oh I forgot, you are also a coward cause you didn't allow for comments to intefere you jerking your pathetic little drippy pecker.

 

[cloudy]

Sorta what I was thinking.

Hey, nym...I know its really hard for you to comprehend, but you know....people who live in glass houses really shouldn't throw stones.

What were your oh-so-eloquent words on the subject? Oh, yes..."you are also a coward cause you didn't allow for comments to intefere you jerking your pathetic little drippy pecker."

Takes one to know one, I suppose.

 

[sr71plt]

I think it's part of the performance art.

 

[Reshbod]

I love it when idiots get hoisted on their own petard.