So...today is Arpil 10.2009

[michchick98]

Then the writer?dopes not leave a space for comments so we can all( the civilized people on the site) can't say nasty things to him.....Oh I forgot, you are also a coward cause you didn't allow for comments to intefere you jerking your pathetic little drippy pecker.

...just to be honest I will post comments

but then you don't allow them like johnthomas ( another word for cock so I'll call him prickface) you are also a coward. So come on and answer me.

So you're calling them cowards with pathetic little drippy peckers because they have comments turned off. Do you lump yourself into that category also? Both of your stories have comments turned off. So who's the coward now, huh?

And how come you haven't answered any of my questions? Do you have me on ignore? Aww, I'm really upset about that

Just to refresh your memory:

If you don't like the stories, why read them?
Why do you have comments turned off on your stories?
Does the minus in your name mean you have no penis? (You seem so obsessed with others not having one, must be to drag attention away from your own inadequacies)

 

[nyminus]

Since you don't allow for comments I will write this instead. I cant understand you scribblers, writer is too good for you. You have to scribble a (story?) about a cheating wife that has no respect for her husband, After reading the story I can understand why . He is a wimp and women, even cheating skag wife's never respect wimps. If he had balls he would have...oh well he don't have them. Like you he has a drippy little pee pee just go away and don't scribble anymore. NYMINUS

This is an email I sent to surfdial33 who scribbled thei peice of cheating wife/ wimp husband humility, shit He didn't allow for comments. Perhaps he got caught up like I was long ago when I was allowed to puiblish I checked for voting and comments, however when my stories were published the vote and comments weren't there I don't give a shit who believes me but some poster should shut their stupid mouths. Hopefully you are either in gloomy England or some place in the US that is either hot of cold. I am enjoying living in Hawaii myself so fuck you creeps that don't like it Oh MY hat's off to MONTANNA JACK who wrote a real loving wife stroy. As far as you other creeps...fuck you

 

[Darkniciad]

This is an email I sent to surfdial33 who scribbled thei peice of cheating wife/ wimp husband humility, shit He didn't allow for comments.

All you've got to do is click the little buttons to turn them back on

 

[michchick98]

All you've got to do is click the little buttons to turn them back on

I think penisminus has us on ignore. Aren't you upset?

 

[jomar]

Hey, how'd I miss this? Any popcorn left?

 

[nyminus]

I will say this one time only. The wri...no scribblers are cowards and little drippy pathetic pee peed creepsNOT because the turned off comments but because they are little pathetic little dingused creeps and wimps because of the kind of wimp/ humility stories they write. Not because they turn off comments. I love comments and when some wimp mother licker answers me I can bash him. I love that. I thought that the mods turned off my comments because they knew this but I clicked on them. Now sut your faggot face up before you get a cock in it and get so excited that you piss all over your self...

 

[michchick98]

I will say this one time only. The wri...no scribblers are cowards and little drippy pathetic pee peed creepsNOT because the turned off comments but because they are little pathetic little dingused creeps and wimps because of the kind of wimp/ humility stories they write. Not because they turn off comments.

So you didn't write this post:

Then the writer?dopes not leave a space for comments so we can all( the civilized people on the site) can't say nasty things to him. ....Oh I forgot, you are also a coward cause you didn't allow for comments to intefere you jerking your pathetic little drippy pecker.

...just to be honest I will post comments

but then you don't allow them like johnthomas ( another word for cock so I'll call him prickface) you are also a coward.

I love comments and when some wimp mother licker answers me I can bash him. I love that. I thought that the mods turned off my comments because they knew this but I clicked on them. Now sut your faggot face up before you get a cock in it and get so excited that you piss all over your self...

If you love comments, why are comments turned off on your stories? The moderators don't turn them off, dipstick, the authors do.

Maybe you oughta get your head out of your ass before you post more of your imbecilic nonsense, huh?

You really do have an obsession with small penises, too. Perhaps you should seek help for your feelings of inadequacy and inferiority.

 

[manyeyedhydra]

You really do have an obsession with small penises, too. Perhaps you should seek help for your feelings of inadequacy and inferiority.

Nah, he'll be okay once he reaches 13.

 

[nyminus]

Today is the 23rd ans theres a good way to handle a cheating wife except be a wimp by WOODMANONE called What Would You Do Now. It seems like he already did it. I am sure that the wimp/humility/whore wives freaks on the site are mad as hell. The mods didn't stop this one. Here are some of the comments from real people on the site. Gee all the wimps are dissapearing...You hear that you miserable fucks like the ones on this thread.

What Would You Do Now?
by woodmanone ©




5I like this
04/23/09 by Anonymous in Erehwon
Story as it is subtly different from many of the others on this site.What to do next? my idea is kick her out of the house,then first flight(one way)to Antigua see local realty agents,buy new house and get private health care.By the way he was not a Navy Seal to finish when he retired,he was the leader of a Navy Seat team.Looking forward to future chapters.

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5If only
04/23/09 by Anonymous in USA
That's all I am waiting for, an income that will allow me leave a sexless marriage. No cheating, but no sex either. They say money can't buy happiness. Hah, it would sure buy the opportunity to find out.

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4Great story
04/23/09 by Anonymous in USA
Great story. Heartbreaking but beautifully written. 60 year old George

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4Good story,,,,but
04/23/09 by Anonymous in USA
I thought your story was "good" some more character developement for the wife would be good. There were some errors in spelling and grammer. The are medical procedures for men with performance problems beyond viagra and the like, there are prosthisis available to be grafted into the penis that will enable an erection so that the man can perform normally. As to the story line in this article as well as most of the ones I have read is that the characters do not act as real people would. When William over heard his wife making a date over the phone with "someone" and later caught her in the lie. A real person would have challenged her right then, demanding to know then, why she lied and why she had made a date with "someone". As to the incident at the party where William caught his wife with Henry, while almost no one carries a digital camera, most do carry cell phones that are digital cameras so I see no problem there except to refine the story a bit. However I do have a problem with him just taking the pictures and then leaving. Why not have William walk over to his wife and Henry, hand Henry $5.00, tell him to go get a "good fuck" turn, face his wife, spit on the floor and walk away. Also, in these stories the wife says something to the effect that she "will do anything" to make it up to the husband. Just what does she plan to do to make it up? Lets see her make some real plans to "make the husband whole" as they say in legal documents. What does she plan to do, kill the other guy, go to management and make a sexulal harrassment complaint? As to what does William do now? What does he want? If he could wave a magic wand and create the best situation possible, what would that be? figure that out and work to make it happen. As to William being an ex-SEAL COME ON! Been done to death, and anyway most real people are not ex-SEALs. Also, lets see, as Paul Harvey would say "the rest of the story."

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4...Talk some more with her then leave
04/23/09 by mcwiii in US
I think this was written ok, with no editor it survives better than the grammar by some of the posters below. I like the plot line, and I can imagine his pain. There are some misses like the Seal pension and full medical care, but an editor would have caught that. In general this is not some fantasy (cuck or otherwise) or jerk off material. The main character's problem is that he is not moving on, too long in the feeling sorry phase. He needs to get better answers from the wife, then cut her loose and see whats out there in the world. SEALS don't quit. I can see her being a full flushed out character and potentially coming back into his life after he refinds his self esteem. This whole issue actually deals with why I read and like stories about cheating wives. I do not understand what would let a long term spouse think its ok to toss away their life mate, someone they have grown together with, for some sexual romp. So I would like to see him work on answering those questions.

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5Feel sorry for all the wimps...
04/23/09 by APeacefulPlaceTx in Texas
or rather those who call anyone who doesn't go postal a wimp. I suspect their wives cheated on them and left them for a real man, and they try to pretend they're men by blowing up at any story that doesn't do what they didn't have the guts to do. Sorry for the rant, but they're sooooo tiresome.

You do need to get a good editor, not just for the small mistake (typos that spell won't catch, (seat for seal for example) but also to help you with the logic of the story. It will still be your story, but all writers need someone to use as a sounding board.

In this case the whole Seal thing is so overused, especially when you aren't going to use the training. Ex military would be normal for anyone that age and it would be enough. It makes the point that he's had some training and isn't a physical coward. It would also be better if he made his own threats rather than "I'll get my seals to do it for me." That's what someone who is afraid. Mr. Colt will equalize folks not in good health too.

You could also make it clear that he didn't retire from the service, and without injury he wouldn't have VA coverage (family income would probably be too high based on the story.)

Having said all that, you've made some interesting characters and a very interesting situation. I do hope you'll continue the story, I don't think a first story should be open ended. Let us see how your mind works as you figure out a solution for your characters.

I also think we need to see a bit more of the wife's thinking. I believe she had fully justified what she was doing in her mind. Having done that, she's going to be slow to understand the magnitude of her betrayal. Thus she doesn't say she's sorry for cheating. I don't think that he should just walk away, folks who've been married that long have a lot of tools to deal with problems, and you don't show those in play.

Then there is the money. That hasn't been handled well. There are all sort of problems with "giving" it to his son... not the least are gift tax problems. Then there is the whole moral aspect of cheating her. If he's going to take the high road, he can't do that. I'd like to see him wrestle with all of that in the next chapter. He also needs to work on the his perception that he is no longer an equal partner in the marriage. He has issues in depending on his wife for support, and I suspect that has caused her problems too. I doubt she minds working, but having her husband now take a more subordinate role would be a strain and probably another reason for her affair. Most women don't cheat just for sex. However, if her husband was acting like less of a man due to his dependence, it would be hard for her not to see him as less of a man, and that could lead to an affair with someone who she sees as confident and powerful. That is acting in a way her husband no longer acts.

Yes, you've got the elements of a good long story. Don't rush the time period and avoid the trap of a quick fix (like a death bed scene--- it's fine to use his health as part of the story and a reason for movement, just don't make it dramatic.) Show us how the characters grow and change as a result of this. Finally, you do need to have a happy ending. It doesn't have to be a reconciliation, but in hard times we don't want to read tragedy for fun. Good Luck

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5lol
04/23/09 by roadbird
toos the bitch out....tell her you cant get over what you saw and her disrespect and hit the pavement...take your 6 million and find another wife or companion paid or otherwise that will be totally devoted to you...jenny is 60 and youre 64 which is not that old for a man but at 60 what will she find...another old guy who may start out healthy or like you have medical problems .....you thou get off the drinking and find a new companion as even as long as you have been together and yes she is your childrens motherfind someone you can trust again....do you really think you can trust her ever again after this and as you said all her co workers know what was happening and said nothing.....id use the pics and still take down arrogant henry also as he needs to be taught some humilitation just as you were ...it may help him in the long run...if you want sue the company and add to the millions you already have as what they were doing is now against most company policy...my opinion lol but you asked get a younger prettier companion and learn to trust again ....it may be a divorcee or at your age a widower but im sure a 64 year old millionaire can find a nicely perserved 40 to 50 year old just dying to be with a man like you.

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5good firt story writing
04/23/09 by Anonymous in California
This, your first story, is good but is incomplete as it stands. You do have redundancies in stating your case about whether to stay with her or leave her after her infidelity: how you would miss her, that she didn't say that she was sorry about her cheating, and you needed her medical insurance, etc ...... The story line is very good and the ending quite surprising. But -now- what happens? Continue your story and include your son and grandson. Also, I know that medications for certain aliments have improved nowadays to stages in which there are less serious side effects. I don't know about heart conditions but suspect that this holds true in those cases in which a man's libido decreases. Heck, if his sexual drive where to improve sufficiently, he could keep his "semi-loving wife" and also find a young girl friend! He could have the 2 women compete for his attention. But seriously,do continue your story. RAG

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4Good first story
04/23/09 by lancewm
Writing is good, need to work on character development to bring out a complete story. Thanks for sharing. Like to see more!

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1dumb
04/23/09 by Anonymous in canada
dumb story told by an idiot,read it yourself and if you think it's a good story.Anyway what she done is unforgiveable she lied,she planned it,she done it in front of all her frieds rubbing his face in it,she no more loves him then you would a pet.I UNDERSTAND HIS ATTACHMENT BUT SHE HAS NONE TO HIM.The best thing for him is to get rid of her now before she causes his health to really go down hill.

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[krastner]

Hello Nyminus. Good to see that you are your old asshole self. Got a PM from GW66 and he said that he is a supporter of yours. That dude writes good stories. Keep on giving them hell........Kraster

 

[Reshbod]

Wow...just wow. I'm one of the scribblers (I don't consider myself a writer yet, but maybe someday) this drippy dicked moron is ranting about. I do admit, I do like cheating wife stories for whatever reason even though in real life I find cheating beneath contempt. If one is unsatisfied, get divorced.

I do find it extremely amusing that assholes such as nyminus get so worked up on fictional and many times stereotypical or 1 dimensional characters that they go completely ape-shit. Many times I have started stories and got to the final few paragraphs when it goes in a direction that doesn't do anything for me or turns me off completely. I simply move on rather than fume and threaten people.

To paraphrase the old roadshowmen who travelled around the country with exploitation movies: the audience can leave satisfied, can leave angry, but the one thing you cannot do is bore them. That is a pretty good motto to go by.

I will say that nyminus (a dick) and the more cowardly anonymous is that they have inspired me to keep on writing what I like to write. I had been trying to write in other genres, but just can't get it going. Seeing the vitriol it can bring out amuses me so much I want to try to write something that will cause their tiny little heads to explode.

So nyminus and other drippy dicked cowards. Rant all you want, I will continue to write what I like.

 

[michchick98]

Wow...just wow. I'm one of the scribblers (I don't consider myself a writer yet, but maybe someday) this drippy dicked moron is ranting about. I do admit, I do like cheating wife stories for whatever reason even though in real life I find cheating beneath contempt. If one is unsatisfied, get divorced.

I do find it extremely amusing that assholes such as nyminus get so worked up on fictional and many times stereotypical or 1 dimensional characters that they go completely ape-shit. Many times I have started stories and got to the final few paragraphs when it goes in a direction that doesn't do anything for me or turns me off completely. I simply move on rather than fume and threaten people.

To paraphrase the old roadshowmen who travelled around the country with exploitation movies: the audience can leave satisfied, can leave angry, but the one thing you cannot do is bore them. That is a pretty good motto to go by.

I will say that nyminus (a dick) and the more cowardly anonymous is that they have inspired me to keep on writing what I like to write. I had been trying to write in other genres, but just can't get it going. Seeing the vitriol it can bring out amuses me so much I want to try to write something that will cause their tiny little heads to explode.

So nyminus and other drippy dicked cowards. Rant all you want, I will continue to write what I like.

You're a brave one to write in the Loving Wives category, although from the tone of your post, you don't mind the trolls. (nyminusadick included)

It is quite amusing to see him accusing others of being cowards for turning off comments, then he has comments off on his own stuff, but blames the moderators of the site for turning them off. And of course, he has the writing skills of a 4th grader. I have to use an imbecile translator every time I read one of his posts.

Oh well, whatever gets his needle dick to inflate a bit.

 

[sr71plt]

I have some fodder for him posting on Saturday. I wouldn't have written it at all if I wasn't looking forward to his performance art take on it.

 

[jomar]

This is good stuff. Kind of like a bizzaro-scouries.


I know.

 

[nyminus]

Wow...just wow. I'm one of the scribblers (I don't consider myself a writer yet, but maybe someday) this drippy dicked moron is ranting about. I do admit, I do like cheating wife stories for whatever reason even though in real life I find cheating beneath contempt. If one is unsatisfied, get divorced.

I do find it extremely amusing that assholes such as nyminus get so worked up on fictional and many times stereotypical or 1 dimensional characters that they go completely ape-shit. Many times I have started stories and got to the final few paragraphs when it goes in a direction that doesn't do anything for me or turns me off completely. I simply move on rather than fume and threaten people.

To paraphrase the old roadshowmen who travelled around the country with exploitation movies: the audience can leave satisfied, can leave angry, but the one thing you cannot do is bore them. That is a pretty good motto to go by.

I will say that nyminus (a dick) and the more cowardly anonymous is that they have inspired me to keep on writing what I like to write. I had been trying to write in other genres, but just can't get it going. Seeing the vitriol it can bring out amuses me so much I want to try to write something that will cause their tiny little heads to explode.

So nyminus and other drippy dicked cowards. Rant all you want, I will continue to write what I like.

Boy did I pull your chain. The other posters to this thread are, for the most part, justtrools that attach their little sucker mouths to a thread to boost thier number of post or some such bullshit, But you seem to be genuine. Not that that's good, but you are real. I have to ask you do you like writing wimp husband stories too, do you write stories where the husband just has to wank his little pecker while he watches a big cock boff his old lady. If you do then you are definately one of the scribblers that I don't like. Cheating wife stories...I just pass them over. A cheating slut is a cheating slut and there is nothing interesting there but when the husband catches her and divorces his ass and beats the shit out of her lovers ass then I LOVE them. Somehow I don't think you have to worry about these. If you do write stories like these then I'll see you.

Got to give credit to scorpio for his " Marrying you was a mistake" GW has a nice one in the making. GO...

 

[sr71plt]

Cheating wife stories...I just pass them over.

Apparently not. This is what several have suggested you do. But, instead, you seem to be going postal off them.

 

[michchick98]

Apparently not. This is what several have suggested you do. But, instead, you seem to be going postal off them.

He forgets what he says from one post to the next then when he's called on his bullshit, he goes ballistic. Kinda like someone else we know.

Definitely fun to watch and fun to poke him with a stick, but not as much fun as he who's name shall not be mentioned.

 

[Reshbod]

Boy did I pull your chain. The other posters to this thread are, for the most part, justtrools that attach their little sucker mouths to a thread to boost thier number of post or some such bullshit, But you seem to be genuine. Not that that's good, but you are real. I have to ask you do you like writing wimp husband stories too, do you write stories where the husband just has to wank his little pecker while he watches a big cock boff his old lady. If you do then you are definately one of the scribblers that I don't like. Cheating wife stories...I just pass them over. A cheating slut is a cheating slut and there is nothing interesting there but when the husband catches her and divorces his ass and beats the shit out of her lovers ass then I LOVE them. Somehow I don't think you have to worry about these. If you do write stories like these then I'll see you.

Got to give credit to scorpio for his " Marrying you was a mistake" GW has a nice one in the making. GO...

You can say you "pulled my chain" when you left this comment on my last story:


Hope that her baby is a girl.
03/12/09 By: nyminus
That way she could teach her to be a slut skank, just like her mother. She could also make money with the baby by hiring her out to pedophiles and the dumb ass husband would not be the wiser till he found his wife and little daughter in an orgy with all the creeps from the neighborhood. I don't know a real man seems to know when his wife cheats on him. Sort of like telepathy. RESHBOD welcome to the site now go away before you get hurt.

Delete the above comment.

Now I don't care that you didn't like it and get quite a laugh from comments such as yours and the rest. However, the last sentence could be taken as a threat. That is where you crossed the line.

Since you asked, I will answer. I do not like stories where the husband is cuckolded, humiliated or turned on by watching his wife with other men. To me it is not realistic. I realize it is a fantasy but it is just not my thing and when I come across a story going in that direction, I move on. I don't get angry, rant and rave and let it ruin my day.

I prefer stories where a partner does stray, but the other is unaware, at least in the story. I'm not interested in the consequences of cheating but how someone can be tempted and give in. Maybe someday I'll write about the consequences of adultery, but since this is an erotic site, I don't find anything erotic about tossing "the skank" out on her ass and beating the dude she gives into.

 

[sr71plt]

I realize it is a fantasy but it is just not my thing and when I come across a story going in that direction, I move on. I don't get angry, rant and rave and let it ruin my day.

Well, I guess that's where you go wrong and step out of nyminus's world then. For shame.

 

[sr71plt]

OK, my nymimus-inspired Loving Wives story is up ("The Quality of Love"). Looking forward to the nyminus rant on it. The site editor liked it--gave it a green "E."

 

[freshface]

OK, my nymimus-inspired Loving Wives story is up ("The Quality of Love"). Looking forward to the nyminus rant on it. The site editor liked it--gave it a green "E."

So is trolling you the trick for getting more stories like that? I'm sure we could arrange something.

Congrats on the green E; it's very nicely done. Can't wait to see what the LW crowd make of it.

 

[sr71plt]

So is trolling you the trick for getting more stories like that? I'm sure we could arrange something.

Congrats on the green E; it's very nicely done. Can't wait to see what the LW crowd make of it.

Thanks. So far they've been quiet, but have been clicking away on the "1" button. But that happens with most "E" stories, I've found.

I wasn't going for an "E"--just something for nymimus to rant on.

 

[nyminus]

You can say you "pulled my chain" when you left this comment on my last story:


Hope that her baby is a girl.
03/12/09 By: nyminus
That way she could teach her to be a slut skank, just like her mother. She could also make money with the baby by hiring her out to pedophiles and the dumb ass husband would not be the wiser till he found his wife and little daughter in an orgy with all the creeps from the neighborhood. I don't know a real man seems to know when his wife cheats on him. Sort of like telepathy. RESHBOD welcome to the site now go away before you get hurt.

Delete the above comment.

Now I don't care that you didn't like it and get quite a laugh from comments such as yours and the rest. However, the last sentence could be taken as a threat. That is where you crossed the line.

Since you asked, I will answer. I do not like stories where the husband is cuckolded, humiliated or turned on by watching his wife with other men. To me it is not realistic. I realize it is a fantasy but it is just not my thing and when I come across a story going in that direction, I move on. I don't get angry, rant and rave and let it ruin my day.

I prefer stories where a partner does stray, but the other is unaware, at least in the story. I'm not interested in the consequences of cheating but how someone can be tempted and give in. Maybe someday I'll write about the consequences of adultery, but since this is an erotic site, I don't find anything erotic about tossing "the skank" out on her ass and beating the dude she gives into.

You wouldn't know a threat when you see it...for instance if I had said that you were going to die...so that's not a threat. Now if i said I'll kill you. Now that's a threat. But you are going to die isn't...you are going to die and so am i and so is everyone on earth now. It's just a matter of when but YOU ILL DIE...so .So you don't rant...I do and I love it. My replies to your stories aresimply to let you know what i think of it and you. I seem to have done that. Your story sucked and so do you...Now take that asshole.

 

[Reshbod]

Don't hurt yourself backpeddling nyminusadick.

I am thrilled that my stories move you so much that you feel you have to contact me and tell me what you thought. However, since you are unable to recognize that the events never actually happened and the characters are not real people just proves to me that you are an intellectual midget.

Your story sucked and so do you...Now take that asshole. Really, now is that the best you can do? If you can't make a rational argument or have an actual discussion, then I guess name calling and pointless insults are all you have. While my stories may not be great art, at least I'm not some brain addled moron who can't handle the fact that some people are interested in things that you do not care for. I wonder if you're such an asshole to people who have different views on politics or religion?

My stories may suck and in some regards I may suck as well, but compared to you I am a single cell while you are an entire universe of suckage. So go hold your drippy little dick and fume all you want. I'll just sit hear and laugh at you.

 

[dkmywife]

NimbusNuts?

So far my first submission was assaulted by nimbusnuts or whatever his name is. Based on what I have gleaned in the study of these postings there is a clear hostility against erotic material. There are several possibilities that may contribute to this individuals hostility. First he was likely raised to be a sexual phobic and raised with such strict moral codes that he is now unable to comprehend the fact that some of these stories make him horny, thus contributing to his going to hell. Second he is clearly drawn to such sites and he 'reads' these stories, indicating that he is interested in the subject matter which creates a self loathing, because it contributes to his going to hell.

He is likely in his late teens and early 20s living at home, is still in high school or attends a local junior college, eats voraciously due to the burning pain in his guts caused by the perpetual state of anger he generates in loathing himself, contributing to the fact that he is either grotesquely overweight or on his way to being obese, which is likely why he is so pissed because he can't find his dick.

So instead of bantering with this poor fellow have sympathy for him. He is starting out on a sad, sad road of perpetual misery...which apparently he enjoys.