UnderYourSpell
Gerund Whore
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- May 20, 2007
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Hopefully these are better:
Deviance
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As you kneel right here, I show you my love
And give to you, such a delightful pain.
Beautiful you are, when viewed from above
As you kneel right here I show you, my love.
Because I'm the left and you're the right glove
Our bodies will sing, to a shared refrain.
As you kneel right here I show you my, love?
And give to you such a, delightful, pain.
Together
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Your words haunt me, taking over my mind,
Those marks on a page, to which I add sound,
Comfort my heart making me feel complete.
The pictures you paint, in prose so complete.
Those imagined scenes, your words bring to mind,
Fill me with warmth so I feel safe and sound.
So let me repay you with my own sound.
Please give me the chance, to make you complete.
Together we'll write, with thoughts from one Mind.
One mind, one sound and together, complete.
now you've got it well done