UnderYourSpell
Gerund Whore
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- May 20, 2007
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REFILL MY JAR
(a tritina)
You have run away so far,
That you seem a distant star,
But there's whiskey in the jar!
The content of yonder jar,
Is enough to drive me far,
Just to reach you, distant star.
Welcome me as your guest star,
Of the things we did so far,
Our collision was a jar.
Long far star, refill my jar.
Well it works with the words in the right place but IMO far too many 'ar' words to make it comfortable reading. What does anyone else think?