The New Poems List

[Senna Jawa]

I think "Chamomile Tea" by daughter is really good. It is sad and intimate. After that I liked Senna Jawa’s “Copernicus Passenger” Even with passenger misspelled.

Chamomile Tea
Copernicus Passenger

Thank U for kindly mentioning my poem.

I can't believe that error! Morally I am fine . I mean that, believe it or not, I had spent quite a while on checking this "passenger" word in the dictionary, to make sure that I don't misspell it (I am a poor speller). And I did anyway! I'll correct it.

Once I post my text, I don't see it as a sequence of letters, I see only its meaning, and often I am not able to see even a glaring typo or error. Karmadog was making fun of me in his thread, calling my mistake a "neologism". Cute

Thank you Camille & Karmadog for correcting me.

Regards,

 

[Sera Shine]

New Poems

I hope you all don't mind a few comments from a newcomer on other poems in the New Poem List. I've really enjoyed reading so many wonderful and erotic poems! Here are just a few highlights from me:

The ones that made me smile:
A Game for Loving - by weed

A Little Tail - by beastmaster

Incredible Edible Male - by WickedEve


The one that really touched me:

disconnect by nakedangelina


The one I had to share with someone else:

Master's Touch by MotW_toy


The one I had to save for myself:

Sue Ling by WickedEve

Thank you!

Sera

 

[WickedEve]

Sera Shine, I'm glad you enjoyed the tasty men.

And I'm very pleased that you liked Sue Ling.

Thank you.

 

[Sera Shine]

E-Nymph

i'm still very new to this an actually feel a bit intimidated being surrounded by so many talented writers.

I meant to include you in my list a post or two ago - your string of poems posted 6/13 was very enjoyable reading. I particularly liked Venus.

Sera

 

[nakedangelina]

Re: New Poems

The one that really touched me:

disconnect by nakedangelina


Sera [/B]

Thanks, Sera. I have gotten some good feedback on that one, although the sadness of it is always mentioned...

One day I will learn how to put links into my posts and then I can comment on the new poems that I enjoy. (someone PM'ed instructions, but it looks so complicated ) I read the new list each night, I look forward to it and often reread the ones I bookmark. I love this site and the poetry I find here.
Welcome, Sera.

 

[E-Nymph]

thanks Sera that's very nice to mention.

 

[FuckDoll]

Re: Fuckdoll

This poem surprised me a bit because lately I haven't been very impressed by many wrtings. This one takes the cake for sure; Rapturous Lust by Fuckdoll

.... thank you...

 

[daughter]

Chamomile Tea

Thanks, Camille.

I'm not prolific like many of the poets here. I'm better known on the forum than I am among the reading population.

Chamomile is a personal favorite. I am glad you could appreciate both the sadness and intimacy of the piece.

Peace,

daughter

 

[JUDO]

New - 6-16-02 & 6-17-02

A few that caught my eye. - Judo
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Another lost to the lady.

and he, in her possession
shines me a lethal smile
where fish dance in darkness
and love lingers in muddy joy

lake rings in my ears
by Sera Shine©
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And, behold, he descended from the mountain...

he longed to worship
her heavenly beauty
with a passionate prayer
spoken in tongues
to her parted flesh

her soft-as-sand body
by poetboy824©
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A request for rewrites(by a first timer)

The great, defeated, marked in the sand
tread carefully, the ever damned.
A precarious state to be marked
but for a memory we embark.

Strife and conflict follow time
in this passage we are sublime.
Forever remembered, the story told
while in stillness only cold.

Walking on Time
by oasis665©
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A double-ended splash of sauce

Bookended
Speared right through .

Casual culinary
by Nebula33©
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Romp-a-rosey!

pumping
hot breath
against the skin between the hairline
and the neck
while sensing closed eyes

listening
to small sounds
escaping mouths
we - undulating
your body into mine

Touch
by Sweetwood©
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A bird flown best

The lights are red as they snap their visors
And as the lights go green, the volume rises
Like plunging dragons with pipes aflame
No fear, no dread just thoughts of fame

The first corner approaches at some speed
Its dab the brakes, lean off, down knee
Then power on making the back wheel snake
Its time for glory and a name to make

The Last Race
by Shady_Lady©

 

[Sweetwood]

Thank you for the mention

Being featured at Lotus and getting your mention, Judo, all in the same day, may have irreparable consequences. I have begun to develop a comb. Also, my gait has gotten somewhat roosterish, and Sweetwife has taken to running after me with a hatchet claiming supper will be ready in two hours.

Sweetwood

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Thank you for the mention

Being featured at Lotus and getting your mention, Judo, all in the same day, may have irreparable consequences. I have begun to develop a comb. Also, my gait has gotten somewhat roosterish, and Sweetwife has taken to running after me with a hatchet claiming supper will be ready in two hours.

Sweetwood

That's how I've always pictured you, sweetwood.

 

[Sweetwood]

Wicked Eve imagined:

That's how I've always pictured you, sweetwood.

...Uuhhmmm, Thanks, I think......

Sweetcockadoodle - do

 

[oasis665]

A few that caught my eye

Thanks Judo

I appreciate the mention here on the boards. All writing is an obsession for me, I am glad to know it is enjoyed. I am very new to posting, or replying here, hope this response reaches you.

oasis

 

[Sweetwood]

my latest picks

daughters "chamomile tea".

The whole piece is liquid introspection: inversion. It is like the warmth that comes from being under a blanket with another person on a cold day.

Chamomile tea

Cordelia' Sonnet

Relinquish every preconceived intent,
And paint my face with violet crystal tears.
I cannot take them back, so I relent,
And let the brushstrokes cover all my fears.

this is a wonderful poem. The density with which she writes and all in good form and measure is quite an accomplishment. I love those fourlines quoted. Note this poet.

abstract

Wicked Eve's:

In the frozen section I find boxes of guys,
with sticks up their asses--
good to lick on hot nights.

This sounds like Salvadore Dali making words in Alaska. The surrealist scene painted by Wicked is as always true to form. I just love this woman: she makes my brain tingle with intellectual electricity.

the incredible edible male

Pleasurable reads on a night the world knocked on my door

Sweetwood

 

[Cordelia]

Thank you, Sweetwood!

I am studying poetic forms and find that sonnets are my favorite way to express myself.

I hope to post more.

Thank you for the kind words.

~Cordelia

 

[daughter]

Thank you

Sweetwood--


Glad you enjoyed the read. Who knows I may get a few more reads thanks to your support.

Peace,

daughter

 

[WickedEve]

Re: my latest picks

Wicked Eve's:

This sounds like Salvadore Dali making words in Alaska. The surrealist scene painted by Wicked is as always true to form. I just love this woman: she makes my brain tingle with intellectual electricity.

the incredible edible male

Pleasurable reads on a night the world knocked on my door

Sweetwood

Thank you sweetwoody! By the way, I adore Dali!

 

[WickedEve]

I haven't had a chance to read all of today's poems, but I wanted to make sure to mention The Sweet Smell of Supper by JUDO ©

Art is our cousin and the Muse, our goddess,
But Sarcasm and Wistful stamp through the halls
Demanding attention so loudly
That the echoes of Inspiration can barely be heard.

This is really well written. In my opinion, meter, rhythm, everything is very good! And I love "Sarcasm and Wistful stamp through the halls." Great images!

 

[karmadog]

Saints

Check out the slant rhymes in this one by JUDO. Very cool.

The Stress of Sainthood

Also a Great Title! Good work JUDO!

 

[WickedEve]

Re: Saints

Check out the slant rhymes in this one by JUDO. Very cool.

The Stress of Sainthood

Also a Great Title! Good work JUDO!

I missed this one! Thanks for letting us know about it, karma.
Judo, good poetry! We want more! Now!

 

[JUDO]

Thanks WE and Kdog. "Saint" came to me after a musing on a huge project I finished a couple years ago. It's probably one of my first poems inspired by a truth that I ponder almost daily.

"Supper" was inspired by the local poets' musing over whether we get the attention deserved at Lit. The "bulldogs" are the story authors, "stepmother" is Laurel, the "stains" left by our negative feelings as we feel slighted by the site and yet the "soft pillows" is how I see the wonderful place we call our home that has been prepared for us by L & M.

The metaphor of tummy "rumbles" before dinner points to the feast to come of great poetry.

And the ink shall run from our mouths...


- Judo

 

[Sweetwood]

Today's Picks

rain by Senna Jawa

the gray curtain hangs from the sky

don't be sad
in your pad
get back
to the book you've left
on the beach

The perfect poetic snapshot.

Sorry nothing else caught my attention.

Sweetwood

 

[WickedEve]

One I think is worth a mention for the 20th

Department of Dating
by OT ©

come here, you
big beautiful bureaucrat

go down
during lunch

linger in my long slow
undulating lines

 

[OT]

RE: Department of Dating

Thanks, WickedEve.

And since I seem to have bureaucracy on the brain,
I'd be remiss if I didn't mention that your "save an apple, eat me"
line lacks a Recommended Daily Allowance disclaimer.

O.T.
Peekable Prose

 

[WickedEve]

Re: RE: Department of Dating

Thanks, WickedEve.

And since I seem to have bureaucracy on the brain,
I'd be remiss if I didn't mention that your "save an apple, eat me"
line lacks a Recommended Daily Allowance disclaimer.

O.T.
Peekable Prose

This serving of Eve contains 100% of the Recommended Daily Allowance of wickedness.