The New Poems List

[FriskyVagina]

Re: See my profile

There is even more of me there.

I checked. Hasn't anyone ever told you that you resemble Dennis Franz?

 

[PAUL C]

Who is he?

Who is he?

I live in England remember.

There are a large number of Megastars in other countries that don't get a mention here.

I hope he isn't somebody important.

 

[FriskyVagina]

Re: Who is he?

Who is he?

I live in England remember.

There are a large number of Megastars in other countries that don't get a mention here.

I hope he isn't somebody important.

http://abc.abcnews.go.com/primetime/nypdblue/bios/dennis_franz.html

 

[KatPurrs]

Gamblin' Man - Paul C

Hey Paul C,

I gave it a thumbs up.

I found it thoughtful and I liked the way the question changed from the 2nd stanza to, "Do you THINK they're in your favour?", to the last, "Are they EVER in your favour?"

I found it typical of your sensitive style of writing which I love so much. Well, discounting "Pushada", that is, which could hardly be called "sensitive". LOL.

I am also fond of, "You have the pace, but can you stay the distance?" So many get into the race of desire discounting the possibility of dying in the back stretch. And "All you can hope for is a run for you money." Chasing one's desires is a true gamble at times and I liked the analogy.

I didn't find it corny in the least. It gave me pause, as much of your poetry does. Thanks for the read.

Kat~

 

[WickedEve]

Hi katpurrs. Hi Paul C.
Paul C, you do kind of look like Dennis Franz!

I like the poem. But there is one part that's kind of... corny. I don't know if that's the right word for it. Thinking...

Anyway this part:
Say hello to the bookmaker of desire.

The one with whom you wager,
when you gamble with your heart.

 

[JUDO]

Re: Rainy Friday morning reads let's you feel sunshine

Slide It In Slow by JUDO

Oh baby where? when? Shall I bring the sex towels? Except, if I make you squirm, it sounds like someone made a dirty joke. Gorgeous poem, very explicit! Loose the squirm.

Is that "lose" or "loose?" Shall I not squirm or shall I really let the squirm loose?

Don't worry, I do my own linens. Kind of a girl thing I have. Although, I would imagine sweetwife has already practiced the "amore al leggerio" with you a due. No?

Thanks for the mention, SW.


- Judo

 

[Sweetwood]

uuuhhhmmmm

JUDO said:

Although, I would imagine sweetwife has already practiced the "amore al leggerio" with you a due.

We have done it. A due? Hmmmm might take a little longer. One might need a traffic cop though.

oh and lose would be better.

Sweetsquirm

 

[WickedEve]

Interesting new poems from the past week

Some new poems that made me laugh or go "oh my goodness!" I'm really not making fun of these poems. Good or bad, they simply caught my attention! Below is a taste of each one.

Am I An Ice Cream Sundae
by Blue Dolphin ©

Am I an ice cream sundae
something for you to lick
is that a cocktail cherry
that you placed upon my dick

I can see that Blue Dolphin was having fun. I think he was hungry and horny when he wrote this.

sleepy sex
by nakedangelina ©

Zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
(snoozing)
Mmmmmmm
(body heat)
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
(hard dick in my back)
Ahhhhhhhhh
(rubbing right)
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

I can relate! That's about all I'm capable of saying when I'm sleepy.

What woman are made of
by debbiexxx ©

Tantalising tastes, smells and yummy nibbly bits

Or kitty cute, fluffy and cotton candy nice

Others come with nipple clips and dildo in hand

Or leather clad whilst packing a cracking whip

Above are some of the things debbiexxx says women are made of.
I'm kitty cute and I'm packing a cracking whip. Beware this pussy!

Vaginal Fisting ( a how-to )
by leatherdykeuk ©

A few random stanzas:
You may not make it all the way
But over days and weeks
She'll stretch further every day
Till she with pleasure shrieks.

Fisting can be very hard
On cunt tissue and muscle
A little pain is on the card
Do not attempt to hustle

Now you've got to knuckle point
This is the painful bit
Add some lube around the joint
And hope your hand will fit.

Now you're in, her cunt is full
You may begin to fuck
She may not like this: as a rule
Be guided by her look.

This one made me say, "oh my goodness and ouch!"

wet
by feeona ©

i then slip into a negligee,
go downstairs, take out a jar of mayonnaise from the friddge,
like a butterfly,i float outside to the lawn.
i lie down on the grass and its wetness turns me on even more.
dipping the vibrator into the mayonnaise,
i insert it into my driipping pussy with a moan...

This one also made me say, "oh my goodness." But I am thinking of trying salad dressing with my dildo.

All the worse in verse
by Gregg Dean ©

Haiku – (Japanese 3 line poem)
She left me all alone and my heart’s broken.
It’s hurt so much.
But not as much as a kick in the testicles.

(okay I know about the syllable thing in Haiku but who's counting?)

"oh my goodness."

The Bearded Clam Blues
by Tom Mandy ©

*Oh yeah,
yeah, we all got the blues.
From these hoochie coochie mamas,
yeah, the Bearded Clam blues.
Always with the cold shoulder, turning away;
well excuse me Ms. Prudish for wanting a lay.
Maybe I’ll try a hooker, lovin’ slips on by,
loosin’ money and mind, who needs the lie?
Repeat *



On Learning My Ex-Wife's New Lover
by coaster12345 ©

He's wrong! I was rigid!
She's fructuous, not frigid!
She’s dry? Hell, her crack's like a chasm!
She's a juicy loose goose,
She has horns like a moose,
And she honks when she has an orgasm!

Now that's different! lol

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Re: Interesting new poems from the past week

Some new poems that made me laugh or go "oh my goodness!" I'm really not making fun of these poems. Good or bad, they simply caught my attention! Below is a taste of each one.

Am I An Ice Cream Sundae
by Blue Dolphin ©

Am I an ice cream sundae
something for you to lick
is that a cocktail cherry
that you placed upon my dick

I can see that Blue Dolphin was having fun. I think he was hungry and horny when he wrote this.

Smiling at Eve
You got it right on the nail darlin
a fun poem
for fun people

and me
lol
am ALWAYS horny
hugs
and thank you for the mention love

 

[Sera Shine]

My picks from the new poem list 7/6

The one I puzzled over:

Rise and Fall of the Roman Empire - Tom Mandy

Having recently mistaken WickedEve's terzanelle Sue Ling for a villanelle, I am now on the look out for twists on the form. So it sort of walks like a villanelle and every third line or so quacks like a villanelle, but I think it still might not be a duck.

The one that will make you remember:

No, mommy..... no!!!! by intrigued. I also wrote a poem about this subject, but I couldn't locate it.


The one I thought was fun:

claimed by Kluless70

The one I have to mention even though it's already been done:

Am I An Ice Cream Sundae by Blue Dolphin

The one I had to share with someone else for a smile:

Sleepy Sexy by nakedangelina

(ok I admit it, I shared the Sundae too)

 

[Blue Dolphin]

Re: My picks from the new poem list 7/6

The one I have to mention even though it's already been done:

Am I An Ice Cream Sundae by Blue Dolphin

The one I had to share with someone else for a smile:

Sleepy Sexy by nakedangelina

(ok I admit it, I shared the Sundae too) [/B]

Smiling
if I made you smile love
I am happy
and,
Thank you for the mention
BD

 

[nakedangelina]

Thanks for the mention, WE & Sera...

I really enjoyed these two off of the 7-8 list:

-alcoholic requiem- by E-Nymph

I woke up too sick to get out of bed.
I was up too late dancing with the ghosts in my head.
drank too much wine and wished I were dead-
I was up too late dancing with the ghosts in my head.
I always enjoy E-Nymph's work, this one sounds very much like my Sat evening and my Sun morning


Under the Magnolia by just pet

I.
Under the magnolia
voluptuous with summer
seeking a bed of leaves
and fragrant white
each open to the possibilities
of moment to moment
filled with desire
find me there
naked under the trees
Her words create such a beautiful scene in my mind, I love that about her poetry

 

[E-Nymph]

thank you

nakedangelina ~ thanks for your sweet words. it makes me smile when people find a poem that touches them.


your own work is beautiful.

 

[just pet]

nakedangelina, how very sweet you are
I am honored with your comment

pet

 

[WickedEve]

I know Angeline is a capable of some very good poetry. And I do like her new poem Te Adoro But one of her stanzas outshines the rest of the poem, and makes me long for the rest of it to be on this level.

The world slides away.
The universe shrinks to the tip of your tongue.

If limericks are your thing, then you may want to check out A Subjective A to Z
Penelope Caesar gives us limericks from Accounts to Zen.

 

[JUDO]

New - 07-10-02

A few that caught my eye. - Judo
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Read twice aloud to appreciate.

drum hum, strummed rhythm rum'd
sipped with guzzle grunting glower row
I beg to ameliorate my improvement now
but with godless amending my efforts at best

anserine in blanco
by dark stranger©
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Glowing from within.

should/could we dare our eyes bed this thought
of haptic dance in fate met entwine
you as my slave of servile bond possessed
and would/could I be your maestro of sublime

luxeria aurorae
by dark stranger©
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In the country under the hangin' moss, man.

she'll make the eddys swirl in their undersides
make the chokedamp panting want more breathe
she'll get the reverine magnets in her lady wine
like voodoo rags and bones she'll get naughty bad

rowdy dow now
by dark stranger©
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Simple is almost always better.

Take what you need.
The supply is endless.

Give what you can,
but take what you need.

Simply Put
by Angeline©

 

[Angeline]

Thanks for the Mentions

Judo and Wicked Eve, you bad girls, thank you both for citing my poems here.

WE, I am reworking Te Adoro to try to get the rest of it up to the power in those last two lines. I knew it wasn't there yet when I wrote it. Maybe will repost in a thread here after the edit to get more feedback. And I suppose I should be honest and admit that the last line ("The universe shrinks to the tip of your tongue") was in fact NOT mine, but was er said to me by someone (swoon). Ah well, at least I had the good sense to steal it!

Judo, thank you. I was sure that Simply Put would be universally hated (and if I go by the votes it's getting, I may be about right), but I couldn't see any other way to express this sentiment than in the most basic terms. Thank you for seeing that, too.

And thank you, thank for putting up the work from Dark Stranger! It led me to his page and got me reading. I second your review: he writes some wonderful stuff. Some of those images are just Wow!

Here's The Angeline Page:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=92566

 

[karmadog]

angeldust by angeldusted

someone once told her the sex would be good
so she swallowed her pride and hung around
and immersed herself til she almost drowned
young and dumb, reckless and selfish
but what a ride..

From a newcomer. Check out this poem. She uses a refrain very nicely in this one.

Naughty Nurse Kevorkian by WickedEve

He said not to thrill him,
because of his condition.

That won't stop this naughty nurse.

Final Concerns by WickedEve.

Will Mother choose my final dress?
She knows black is appropriate
and slimming.

This isn't a subject that gets much humor, but Eve sneaks some sly stuff in here. Eve is getting so good, she won't even speak to us soon.

Please read these, they are terriffic.

 

[WickedEve]

How are you kdog? I mean, how are you really feeling? Do you need a visit from the naughty nurse? She makes house calls.

 

[karmadog]

Well, there is a certain...

...ache.

But never an achey breaky.

 

[nakedangelina]

Great av, WE

just a few that I liked from 7-12 and 7-13:

Passion Fruit by Blue_Dahlia
Torment
break me open
pulverize indiscretion
spread me on tongue
breathe me in
breathe me out
out
bruise and wrack
the fragile queen
into herself
unto you.

razor blade smile by E-Nymph
'my heart is too fragile
for someone sharp like you.
if I loved you
I could risk being cut
into a thousand glittering pieces
by your beauty and your wit.

Naughty Nurse Kevorkian by WickedEve
He said not to thrill him,
because of his condition.
Spiked heels sunk deeply
into the softness of his bed.
With weary smile, he told her
that she would be the death of him.

 

[E-Nymph]

Thank you Nakedangelina

there's a quote on the past dreams page of my journal that says 'i fell in love with a boy with a razorblade smile~e-nymph' ...
it's been there for months but i never wrote about the feeling until this piece. that fear of letting someone get close enough to cut you but knowing that you will miss something magical if you walk away.

i guess i just don't want to spend my life walking away.

 

[WickedEve]

Like your new poem, nakedangelina.
Paycheck Hell

Here's a preview:
Estrogen and Testosterone run this office.
You are stripped of your Sanity
at the front desk when you sign in.
Valium is served with the coffee,

 

[Rybka]

I like it too!

But I first read:

Fake breakfast smiles are abundant

as: "Flake breakfast smiles are abundant"

and I think I like my misread better!

Regards, Rybka

 

[nakedangelina]

Like your new poem, nakedangelina.
Paycheck Hell

Thanks, WE. I actually work in that madhouse, I have decided it is just "Hell in a Downtown Dallas Skyscaper." It is no wonder I am looney tunes.
Rybka, *lol* I like your misread better, too!!