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tarablackwood22 said:
Can you get it through the door?


it's not the door I'd be worried about me getting it in.....if you know what I mean
; )
 
You and me equal,

You and me equal,
braids and tangled salty
summer cut,


oh yeah - I know this girl
 
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annaswirls said:
ah ha!
maybe tomorrow you get to see the back of my head
cut corners and pieces
pasting onto a mango
make your own anna peel......


er.. editted to actually add a post this time instead of submitting nothing

Anna peeled... ;)



- neo
 
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neonurotic said:
er.. editted to actually add a post this time instead of submitting nothing

Anna peeled... ;)



- neo


ripe mango...take 2

( a famous line from an old porno movie...don't ask why I remember it)
 
~


eastern swallowtails are all flying
downstream today
pausing, distracted
by the glow of my white paper


~
 
itty bitty poem thinggie

~

some come to the forrest
watching for wing flash, listening for bird call
binoculars in hand, waiting to cross
another species off their life list


me I come watching for poems
that land on my paper
before flying away


~
 
annaswirls said:
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eastern swallowtails are all flying
downstream today
pausing, distracted
by the glow of my white paper


~

I keep wanting to change that last word to panties....but that's just me
:D
 
Tathagata's AV

You promised us penis
then gave us the freeze
but the hot new pic
makes me weak in the knees

Why didn't you tell me you were so sexy?

And a man? Not that I'm choosy that way.

Grinning wildly runs laughing to the bedroom for a nap.

Syn :kiss:
 
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Syndra Lynn said:
You promised us penis
then gave us the freeze
but the hot new pic
makes me weak in the knees

Why didn't you tell me you were so sexy?

And a man? Not that I'm choosy that way.

Grinning wildly runs laughing to the bedroom for a nap.

Syn :kiss:


A nap she says
:D
 
What this thread was not started for was posting new poems in it, and especially not

lighten up lauren for fuxx

only tweaking you..........only

getting yet another excuse to look down your bra.......as I

drift slowly into death
 
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Tathagata said:
ripe mango...take 2

( a famous line from an old porno movie...don't ask why I remember it)

Nice dress.

:p
 
I keep wanting to change that last word to panties....but that's just me

is death from straining at laughter better or worse than death from straining at stool
 
if Tatha's pic can induce

moist receptivity in the women of the group I know that there is hope for this aging roue--I know that there is a God

and you can get away with murder you bad boy--you are simply incorrigible

heh!
 
in an effort to put an end to the penis thread and

the wild lubricity it has spawned, I am

posting an image

entitled:

"Semi-erect penis--lightly constrianed by black bikini panties with a lacy bandeau around the waist"

carl
 

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to replace a program advertised earlier--entitled

"Young (18 yrs plus one nanosecond) Japanese girl - bound, gagged and being whipped while molten candle wax is dripped on her nipples"

That previous program has been removed at the request of "Daughters of the Meiji Restoration"

(yeah <constrained> was mis-spelled - sowwy!)
 
Tath!! Prick or penis is no matter... you're still a DollBaby!!

pssttt... here's the pic you sent me a while back- need it back??

graphic5.gif
 
BooMerengue said:
Tath!! Prick or penis is no matter... you're still a DollBaby!!

pssttt... here's the pic you sent me a while back- need it back??

graphic5.gif

;) :rose:
 
Does anyone here read charles Bukowski

I know he's not a pretty sight but we all have our bad half centuries.

I like his poetry book

PLAY THE PIANO LIKE A PERCUSSION INSTRUMENT UNTIL THE FINGERS BEGIN TO BLEED A BIT

because I always played it that way and thought I was the only one - although it's a sign of a not very accomplished pianist and I found out later it could be cured with a manicure anyway

one image of his has stayed with me

"she was prettier than six white horses runnin' over a low green hill" I can rarely get that out of my mind

Carl
 
MS WORD glitch

I know there's a really boring place on literotica where I could discuss this question with total strangers but I'm asking it here

MS Word automatically capitalizes the first letter of each line when I'm writing poetry (with some exceptions)

I have tried and tried and tried and tried to turn this off globally--to bend the fuxxing thing to my will - to make it faithful to what I type

but to no avail - and the years pass

it means there's nearly always mistakes in poetry because no matter how much I edit it still replaces the odd lower case with yet another cap so...........

like does anyone know how to fix this--or has anyone else felt that impotent anger?

Carl
 
Well, I'm reading through here, trying to see what I've missed. Is there suppose to be a penis on this thread somewhere? I see that jc attached penis... you know what I mean (jpg attached) Is that tathagata's tent? Or is he suppose to show the goods on his AV. Why is he still using a girl av? Where's the penis? I'm waiting for a penis.
 
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