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[meg1]

Hello all!

Thanks so much for the nice words and feedback. I posted my second story today! woot!

Now the long wait begins, again.

good luck. keep us posted on when it gets put up so we can go look and vote.

good luck on it.

meg

 

[meg1]

yssej,

How did your day go today? Didn't get a chance to see you, hope everything is well.

 

[yssej]

yssej,

How did your day go today? Didn't get a chance to see you, hope everything is well.

Good, I felt sick in the morning ended up sleeping in til 2pm gave me chance to reconsider my story's ending.


I am mulling over how the love scene will be. And whether it should have a happy ending or a sad ending. Alot of people do the, oh we ran off in the sunset, but i kind of thought out how to write my first 3 stories.

Story 1: First person, Woman. Forceful loving happy ending
Story 2: First person, Man. Gentle, sad ending.
Story 3: third person, Undecided.

 

[FunwithRyleigh]

good luck. keep us posted on when it gets put up so we can go look and vote.

good luck on it.

meg

Thanks! And - I will for sure. I submitted this one under erotic couplings - I hope it stays in that category.

 

[FunwithRyleigh]

Good, I felt sick in the morning ended up sleeping in til 2pm gave me chance to reconsider my story's ending.


I am mulling over how the love scene will be. And whether it should have a happy ending or a sad ending. Alot of people do the, oh we ran off in the sunset, but i kind of thought out how to write my first 3 stories.

Story 1: First person, Woman. Forceful loving happy ending
Story 2: First person, Man. Gentle, sad ending.
Story 3: third person, Undecided.

Well - I haven't read the story - yet - but I love to go for the unexpected. So - whatever you think most people would do - see if it works going the other way.

Of course - this is literotica - and eventually most of the characters here are going to end up doing certain 'expected' things - but - still - nice to have a surprise when you can.

Just my 2 cents.

 

[yssej]

Well - I haven't read the story - yet - but I love to go for the unexpected. So - whatever you think most people would do - see if it works going the other way.

Of course - this is literotica - and eventually most of the characters here are going to end up doing certain 'expected' things - but - still - nice to have a surprise when you can.

Just my 2 cents.

Thanks, for letting me read your story and you reading my story as well. I look forward to the feedback.

Also I'd like anyone reading this to know that Ryleigh and Meg are some really nice people and good writers.

Ryleigh, had me using my imagination during her second story that kept me trying to place my self in that situation and understand just how things would have happened. What would be my reaction, and all these other things. It was really a refreshing thing to become an "active reader"
I dont want to ruin the story but, one part I was sitting here not reading trying to imagine the scenario that was being said to me. It was so good, I tried to imagine the toy in the story, what color/shape/size/texture it was and how it was being used and the responses of its usage. I never got these answers, but that is a good thing to me I was to ultimately decide and this freedom I really enjoyed.




Meg's, stories are great to. I wont pretend to understand all of the details of them, But I kept reading her stories wanting to know what is next. She made me feel what the characters felt, I even started to want revenge for some of the characters and a happy ending for the main character. It really drew me into the plot.

Hope I didn't say to much about either story.

Anyway, thanks both of you. But I am off to bed I really am fighting some painpills.

 

[FunwithRyleigh]

Thanks, for letting me read your story and you reading my story as well. I look forward to the feedback.

Also I'd like anyone reading this to know that Ryleigh and Meg are some really nice people and good writers.

Ryleigh, had me using my imagination during her second story that kept me trying to place my self in that situation and understand just how things would have happened. What would be my reaction, and all these other things. It was really a refreshing thing to become an "active reader"
I dont want to ruin the story but, one part I was sitting here not reading trying to imagine the scenario that was being said to me. It was so good, I tried to imagine the toy in the story, what color/shape/size/texture it was and how it was being used and the responses of its usage. I never got these answers, but that is a good thing to me I was to ultimately decide and this freedom I really enjoyed.




Meg's, stories are great to. I wont pretend to understand all of the details of them, But I kept reading her stories wanting to know what is next. She made me feel what the characters felt, I even started to want revenge for some of the characters and a happy ending for the main character. It really drew me into the plot.

Hope I didn't say to much about either story.

Anyway, thanks both of you. But I am off to bed I really am fighting some painpills.

Thank you! You are making my day!

I was too tired last night to make comments on your story - but I did get to look over it. Very nice. I'll get back with you this evening.

Hugs all around!

 

[Grayson_James]

Thank you! You are making my day!

I was too tired last night to make comments on your story - but I did get to look over it. Very nice. I'll get back with you this evening.

Hugs all around!

Don't you just love a good compliment?

 

[yssej]

Thank you! You are making my day!

I was too tired last night to make comments on your story - but I did get to look over it. Very nice. I'll get back with you this evening.

Hugs all around!

If you only knew my friends. You would know what it was like for my imagination to be sparked in a story. They do anything for attention, so I have seen and heard nearly everything that could be said and done. And they aren't afraid to offend anyone at all.

Really, they don't even get me interested in something they are telling me anymore.


anyway, take your time with the feed back. I know I wasn't nearly finished with the story, but the most meaningful piece is where it stopped. Honestly, I don't think its a good story for a guy to read and get off to. So really, thats why i needed some womanly feed back

 

[sethp]

I need an editor. meg you in today?

 

[meg1]

Good, I felt sick in the morning ended up sleeping in til 2pm gave me chance to reconsider my story's ending.


I am mulling over how the love scene will be. And whether it should have a happy ending or a sad ending. Alot of people do the, oh we ran off in the sunset, but i kind of thought out how to write my first 3 stories.

Story 1: First person, Woman. Forceful loving happy ending
Story 2: First person, Man. Gentle, sad ending.
Story 3: third person, Undecided.

It's certainly unorthodox to have a less that happy ending, that could possibly work in your favor. I will also tell you that most people don't like first person as well. I know I am not the biggest fan of it. Think of it like this...you are a man, you are writing in first person, about your penis, and how good it feels, yada yada yada.....well, as a woman, who has no penis, I will feel more awkward reading it. Vice versa if I, as a woman, were to write a first story person I wanted you, a man to read. Just something to keep in mind when you are making your decision.

Good luck trying to decide, and I certainly hope you feel better today. I hope it's not the flu, they say that's been horrible this year.
meg

 

[meg1]

Well - I haven't read the story - yet - but I love to go for the unexpected. So - whatever you think most people would do - see if it works going the other way.

Of course - this is literotica - and eventually most of the characters here are going to end up doing certain 'expected' things - but - still - nice to have a surprise when you can.

Just my 2 cents.

you are right, ryleigh, there are so many stories here, that being able to surprise your readers usually leads to some very happy results.

 

[meg1]

Thanks, for letting me read your story and you reading my story as well. I look forward to the feedback.

Also I'd like anyone reading this to know that Ryleigh and Meg are some really nice people and good writers.

Ryleigh, had me using my imagination during her second story that kept me trying to place my self in that situation and understand just how things would have happened. What would be my reaction, and all these other things. It was really a refreshing thing to become an "active reader"
I dont want to ruin the story but, one part I was sitting here not reading trying to imagine the scenario that was being said to me. It was so good, I tried to imagine the toy in the story, what color/shape/size/texture it was and how it was being used and the responses of its usage. I never got these answers, but that is a good thing to me I was to ultimately decide and this freedom I really enjoyed.




Meg's, stories are great to. I wont pretend to understand all of the details of them, But I kept reading her stories wanting to know what is next. She made me feel what the characters felt, I even started to want revenge for some of the characters and a happy ending for the main character. It really drew me into the plot.

Hope I didn't say to much about either story.

Anyway, thanks both of you. But I am off to bed I really am fighting some painpills.

oh, i'm so sorry, i really do hope you feel better

 

[meg1]

Don't you just love a good compliment?

yes, grayson james.....it takes to much bravery to submit a story, we all need some encouragement.

 

[sethp]

yes, grayson james.....it takes to much bravery to submit a story, we all need some encouragement.

yes the first story does take a lot of courage.

 

[meg1]

I need an editor. meg you in today?

as a matter of face, seth, i've read, made corrections, and suggestions, and returned....i know you don't have to say it, i'm more awesome than can even be expressed...


no really, i went to pm before i came here. i wanted to get it read while i was still fresh....hope you liked the edits
meg

 

[FunwithRyleigh]

yes, grayson james.....it takes to much bravery to submit a story, we all need some encouragement.

Well - the great thing here is that so far - EVERYONE has been so friendly and helpful. What a wonderful group of people.

Makes this big step a lot less scary.

*Hugs and a smooch to you all!*

 

[sethp]

as a matter of face, seth, i've read, made corrections, and suggestions, and returned....i know you don't have to say it, i'm more awesome than can even be expressed...


no really, i went to pm before i came here. i wanted to get it read while i was still fresh....hope you liked the edits
meg

you are totally awesome. ...you are the greatest woman in the whole world! how's that!

 

[meg1]

ok all...my own updates now....wow, we were hopping today, sorry i didn't stop in earlier, had class all day. and, just to give you heads up, i'll be out for the most part until sat night at the earlier, more likely sun. have to take care of business......i'll stop by and check in, but won't be around for chat, or updates.

 

[sethp]

Well - the great thing here is that so far - EVERYONE has been so friendly and helpful. What a wonderful group of people.

Makes this big step a lot less scary.

*Hugs and a smooch to you all!*

funwithryleigh I invite you to the other thread meg and i frequent the freedom to be you and me .....you will get some horrible people say some horrible things to you ..it just happens..just know that there are good people here!

 

[meg1]

Well - the great thing here is that so far - EVERYONE has been so friendly and helpful. What a wonderful group of people.

Makes this big step a lot less scary.

*Hugs and a smooch to you all!*

It does help to have a place that gives support. Many of us are writing without even telling our family and friends, and it takes a lot of trust to let people you don't know read what you've produced, and hope they have something good to say about it. The people here are wonderful and everyone tries to be helpful without being critical. As a new writer (and ryleigh, i know you are with me here), that means a lot.

you are totally awesome. ...you are the greatest woman in the whole world! how's that!

oh, stop it, you are makeing me blush

 

[sethp]

It does help to have a place that gives support. Many of us are writing without even telling our family and friends, and it takes a lot of trust to let people you don't know read what you've produced, and hope they have something good to say about it. The people here are wonderful and everyone tries to be helpful without being critical. As a new writer (and ryleigh, i know you are with me here), that means a lot.




oh, stop it, you are makeing me blush

meg it's true. if I had a trophy I'd give it to you.. if I was making a porno..you'd be my staring lady....you'll be the star of my next story! you make me smile everytime I see you online1

 

[meg1]

meg it's true. if I had a trophy I'd give it to you.. if I was making a porno..you'd be my staring lady....you'll be the star of my next story! you make me smile everytime I see you online1

ok, now taking away the porn offer makes more sense

 

[sethp]

ok, now taking away the porn offer makes more sense

lol! ok my posting doesn't always follow logical paths! sorry. so that means you will be my leading lady???

 

[yssej]

It does help to have a place that gives support. Many of us are writing without even telling our family and friends, and it takes a lot of trust to let people you don't know read what you've produced, and hope they have something good to say about it. The people here are wonderful and everyone tries to be helpful without being critical. As a new writer (and ryleigh, i know you are with me here), that means a lot.




oh, stop it, you are makeing me blush

their is no way I would tell any of my friends I have a thing for reading incest stories. Especially not my family I couldn't imagine telling my mom/dad/sister to sit down and read one of my stories I have written.

Meg, you and Ryleigh have been kind enough to read my stories and tell me what you thought. It means a lot to me. Its nice to find helpful people, I for one hope you two wont be strangers to me even tho i dont browse these forums much.

It's certainly unorthodox to have a less that happy ending, that could possibly work in your favor. I will also tell you that most people don't like first person as well. I know I am not the biggest fan of it. Think of it like this...you are a man, you are writing in first person, about your penis, and how good it feels, yada yada yada.....well, as a woman, who has no penis, I will feel more awkward reading it. Vice versa if I, as a woman, were to write a first story person I wanted you, a man to read. Just something to keep in mind when you are making your decision.

Good luck trying to decide, and I certainly hope you feel better today. I hope it's not the flu, they say that's been horrible this year.
meg

seriously? I never really care what perspective the story is in. To be 100% honest, I don't notice the differences. I try to understand what its like for the character being described. I guess 3rd person is more preferable, but it makes no difference to me.

In my first story, I tried to write from a first person-woman's perspective. I am not sure how exactly good it was(meg read it.) I do recall she expressed an opinion on a part of the story, but I can't relate to this feeling that the Female was feeling. And I'm not sure if its appropriate to ask Meg or Ryleigh about it. Its kind of personal and stuff and I don't want to offend the only two helpful women I have met on this site.

And I guess I understand what you mean that its hard to try to understand a sensation that you are not capable of feeling. To be honest, I don't think I could imagine losing my virginity as a girl or how it feels to have something inside of my non-existent vagina.

you are right, ryleigh, there are so many stories here, that being able to surprise your readers usually leads to some very happy results.

Ryleigh is/has read my story that is going to have a surprise. I asked her opinion on which she might prefer to see and some other things to. If it goes the way I am leaning towards(she might be a big factor.) Then expect a shocking conclusion.



on an off topic note, how do i add an avatar to my forum name? I have been looking but this site is much different then most forums i visit.