~Zen Mountain~

I think

My Erotic Tale said:
the worlds shortest poem?
or an event? mmmmm got the wheels turning on this one.
IHO...she was saying hello sad cowboy...hurricane blues stuff..please let us hear how you come out..you may be without power for a while...finding a gas station even open after a hurricane is like a pig fuckin a football..oops did I say that...any way hope all will be well...your buddy/blue
 
bluerains said:
IHO...she was saying hello sad cowboy...hurricane blues stuff..please let us hear how you come out..you may be without power for a while...finding a gas station even open after a hurricane is like a pig fuckin a football..oops did I say that...any way hope all will be well...your buddy/blue


well that's too cool.

thanks blue...


blue rodeo.....I like that
 
ZMP~ Still water

the water is still
smooth as glass
reflecting the sky
and clouds that pass

no ripples or waves
on the surface sway
it's still water
wet as a rainy day​
 
My Erotic Tale said:
ZMP~ Still water

the water is still
smooth as glass
reflecting the sky
and clouds that pass

no ripples or waves
on the surface sway
it's still water
wet as a rainy day​

The view you portray are always vivid in you ZMP writes,
for that I thank you.
 
quasar said:
The view you portray are always vivid in you ZMP writes,
for that I thank you.

thank you!

I generally try and touch nature several times during my day and living out in the woods...that is not hard to do. Which usually spawns a poetic moment that I simply turn into a poem.<grin>
 
Sabina_Tolchovsky said:
hey Art...how close are you to all the action?

if the eye of Rita would have hit galveston it would go right over my head, as of now it moved closer to louisiana and the eye will be near lufkin 40 miles east of me, I suspect I'll get a blow job out of it <grin> they predict 20 inches of rain for the lufkin area tomorrow...and the rivers a stones throw from my back yard so flooding is gonna be a bitch....I got a boat so I can get around <grin>
 
ZMP ~ Butterfly in a Hurricane


butterfly butterfly
sitting on a flower high
here comes a storm
please come inside

what will you do?
butterfly butterfly
a hurricanes coming
and your alone outside

you show no fear
as the storm draws near
butterfly butterfly
just sitting there

I watched the wind
blow you away
butterfly butterfly
in a hurricane​
 
My Erotic Tale said:
ZMP ~ Butterfly in a Hurricane


butterfly butterfly
sitting on a flower high
here comes a storm
please come inside

what will you do?
butterfly butterfly
a hurricanes coming
and your alone outside

you show no fear
as the storm draws near
butterfly butterfly
just sitting there

I watched the wind
blow you away
butterfly butterfly
in a hurricane​

Beautiful Art. I see, hear and feel this one.
Pure poetry in action. No bones about it,
your a poet my friend ~!!! *Grins*

Just so ya know. I realllly do like this one. Hope you do something with it.
I can see this as an Ill. poem or even an ongoing poem about this butterfly
or other animals caught in tha storm so to speak. Just thinkin'

Me~

:rose:
 
RhymeFairy said:
Beautiful Art. I see, hear and feel this one.
Pure poetry in action. No bones about it,
your a poet my friend ~!!! *Grins*

Just so ya know. I realllly do like this one. Hope you do something with it.
I can see this as an Ill. poem or even an ongoing poem about this butterfly
or other animals caught in tha storm so to speak. Just thinkin'

Me~

:rose:


thanks RF

I submitted it, I don't have to tell you what made me write that poem, the poor butterflys in the back pasture had no idea it was coming. Watch for it to surface (~_*)
 
My Erotic Tale said:
ZMP ~ Butterfly in a Hurricane


butterfly butterfly
sitting on a flower high
here comes a storm
please come inside

what will you do?
butterfly butterfly
a hurricanes coming
and your alone outside

you show no fear
as the storm draws near
butterfly butterfly
just sitting there

I watched the wind
blow you away
butterfly butterfly
in a hurricane​


I see the changes from this point to the final outcome that bring this poem to life. A very good read that draws one's emotions to the surface.
 
quasar said:
I see the changes from this point to the final outcome that bring this poem to life. A very good read that draws one's emotions to the surface.

Thanks you Q~

feel free to post a poem here if you like.
I saw your poem posted <grin> I like the chnges and it flowed excellent.
 
Master Cho went to the mountains to be enlightened but found it not on the highest point of the earth but rather found it in the deepest valley when a butterfly made love to a flower
 
My Erotic Tale said:
temple of passion
in streams of emotions
through a body of water
feeling


missing my temple to which
I worship knees bent, head
down ... praying the prayer
of the sinners sin.

wanting to feel you all
around. distant paths
we both have traveled.
now I am alone, to do
battle, for both of us.

emotions running deep.
tempers flare high. nothing
to wish for, but you
... by my side. lonesome
nights bringing midnight
wishes for you, my one.

days break, slices the sky,
wanting to catch a sun ray,
and fly to you, through the
silken skies.

dripping water paces the
moments, counting down
drip by drip. days pass,
months too, longing for
my passions promise,
to be with you.

feelings run rabid, like a dog
with a bone. chasing, tails
round ... round. So many
what ifs, why nots. now
just wishing and hoping
our dreams will come true.



:rose:
 
RhymeFairy said:

missing my temple to which
I worship knees bent, head
down ... praying the prayer
of the sinners sin.

wanting to feel you all
around. distant paths
we both have traveled.
now I am alone, to do
battle, for both of us.

emotions running deep.
tempers flare high. nothing
to wish for, but you
... by my side. lonesome
nights bringing midnight
wishes for you, my one.

days break, slices the sky,
wanting to catch a sun ray,
and fly to you, through the
silken skies.

dripping water paces the
moments, counting down
drip by drip. days pass,
months too, longing for
my passions promise,
to be with you.

feelings run rabid, like a dog
with a bone. chasing, tails
round ... round. So many
what ifs, why nots. now
just wishing and hoping
our dreams will come true.



:rose:


woohooo a ray of sunshine come today <bigrin>
great write...thanks for sharing (~_~)
 
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ZMP~ A River runs
while a mountain stands
the wind will blow
while the water sways

a rock will sit
while a tree bends
a cloud floats
and a grass blade waves

a leaf will fall
while a bush shakes
a babbling brook babbles
about natures ways
 
through the portal of time
with words that rhyme

poetry shines

told now typing
of past feelings

touched by reading

like falling leaves
from swaying trees

living poetry
 
butterflies are free...

This magnificent butterfly finds a little heap of dirt and sits still on it; but man will never on his heap of mud keep still...
- Joseph Conrad.
 
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