Comments That Make Your Day

[PennyThompson]

@Actingup left just an incredibly kind and insightful comment on my new story, Full Moon Blues...

Oh my goodness, Penny. If that's your first First-Person (or First-Werewolf) story, you've well exceeded expectations. Five stars and a howl from me for that last line alone. A sad story of loss, but also some kind of closure. He's moving on. She's moved physically but needs to let go. When she makes partner, she'll eat the opposition for breakfast. She'll be fine.

And... I'm not usually into werewolf sex, but that was hot.

I think you might have understood the emotional arc of my story better than I did

Also, "I'm not usually into _____, but that was hot," is one of the nicest compliments an erotica writer can ever receive

 

[YmaOHyd]

I think you might have understood the emotional arc of my story better than I did

It is extremely cool when this happens.

 

[SinclairGroupLLP]

[Also, "I'm not usually into _____, but that was hot," is one of the nicest compliments an erotica writer can ever receive

I agree - this is probably the best one I got:

Oh Man! Oh man! This series has been really kept me cling on a daily basis and you have been justifying it too the core. This might be one of my lengthiest review so far here. I have been reading others' comment on previous chapters and I was also in favor of dodging it on first instance of Male to male action, I kept on reading just out of curiosity and here I am confessing first time that I have been Bi-curious and I am 35 yrs old and only One I had get my dick sucked by a male after reading your stories (although it fictional, but fiction is partial reality what goes around and inside us) it kept me thinking it, there are so many type of males alphas, the Pauls, Jacks etc. And some Day I might try too.

I'm turning men bi with my writing.

 

[dmallord]

JoJo Thought He Was a Loner has these two comments, which makes me smile.

by Bn2f

75 submissions and this member still has surprises in his story telling sleeves. Well done. Kept me on my toes with background history working with and into the plot twists.

by Davester37

I always have enjoyed reading your stories, and I’m glad to see that you have some great surprises. You always keep it interesting for your readers, and that is truly a sign of a real talent. Thank you for writing and sharing your work!

 

[YmaOHyd]

This anonymous comment is, so far, the most pleasurable one to receive that I've gotten.

Your story reminded me of my 1st date with my Wife...I KNEW who SHE was that first date night in 1963... but I was afraid she'd think I was nuts if I told her that at the time. We have been married ever since and she has brought meaning into my life that has never faded.

We are in our 80s now and she is still the prettiest girl I see that day. I am lucky.

 

[ChloeTzang]

"The amount of equine ejectulate is now permanently etched in my brain, thanks for that."

Okay, it was a review on Amazon for my Sci-Fi novella there, but I just saw it and I laughed so hard I was just about crying. Love it!!!

 

[Actingup]

@Actingup left just an incredibly kind and insightful comment on my new story, Full Moon Blues...



I think you might have understood the emotional arc of my story better than I did

Also, "I'm not usually into _____, but that was hot," is one of the nicest compliments an erotica writer can ever receive

Thanks Penny. Your story was a joy to read. Some of the happiest experiences that I've had so far have been when I've hesitantly written about something that's outside my experience, but then been contacted by somebody who had really resonated it with it because it was close to their own experiences... it's both humbling and validating when that happens.

So... extending that thought a little.... I'd like to point out that the next full moon is this coming Thursday/Friday, and coincides with a total lunar eclipse / Blood Moon, visible from the Americas, parts of Europe and Asia. Can I suggest that you leave out a plate of red meat for any new fans who want to get in touch in person?

 

[PennyThompson]

So... extending that thought a little.... I'd like to point out that the next full moon is this coming Thursday/Friday, and coincides with a total lunar eclipse / Blood Moon, visible from the Americas, parts of Europe and Asia. Can I suggest that you leave out a plate of red meat for any new fans who want to get in touch in person?

I'm not especially into werewolves myself, this was more a creative exercise that got out of hand...

But if a friendly one came sniffing around my door and I was confident I wasn't in danger... Woof

 

[onehitwanda]

I'm not especially into werewolves myself, this was more a creative exercise that got out of hand...

But if a friendly one came sniffing around my door and I was confident I wasn't in danger... Woof

A werewolf at the door is a bit of a knotty situation.

or so I hear.

 

[StillStunned]

On Life and Death of the She-Wolf, these very flattering words from @PadTy:

This is so good. One of my favorite stories on this site!

Thank you for reading and commenting!

 

[Publius68]

@Actingup deserves some kind of award for his recent work in comments.

I’m thinking that you did miss a trick, in that "Not the recommended pedagogy” would have been an awesome chapter title. Please consider it when you sell the film rights though.

I would consider that, but given modern Hollywood’s attitudes about the intelligence of its audience, the producers would immediately change it to something like, “Bad Teaching”, which of course would make zero sense.

Your details are always important: they lift the story. In this case, Al’s treatment of her chewing gum is hilarious but thoughtful, removing it and putting it under her desk (so that she can keep going with it later?), but also showing their mutual immaturity. She’s still in student mode herself: it’s really not very professional to fuck a student while chewing gum.

That last line in the quote has had me laughing since I read it yesterday. It is a good thing Hedley Lamar is not the Dean.
(Alright, kiddies, let’s see which of you get THAT reference!)

 

[Actingup]

@Actingup deserves some kind of award for his recent work in comments.

I would consider that, but given modern Hollywood’s attitudes about the intelligence of its audience, the producers would immediately change it to something like, “Bad Teaching”, which of course would make zero sense.

That last line in the quote has had me laughing since I read it yesterday. It is a good thing Hedley Lamar is not the Dean.
(Alright, kiddies, let’s see which of you get THAT reference!)

Nah, you've defeated me. Is this a Blazing Saddles reference?

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

@Actingup deserves some kind of award for his recent work in comments.

I would consider that, but given modern Hollywood’s attitudes about the intelligence of its audience, the producers would immediately change it to something like, “Bad Teaching”, which of course would make zero sense.

That last line in the quote has had me laughing since I read it yesterday. It is a good thing Hedley Lamar is not the Dean.
(Alright, kiddies, let’s see which of you get THAT reference!)

"This is 1874, you'll be able to sue her..." One of the absolute best movies ever made.

 

[Erozetta]

Uhh, I blushed at reading this comment. Far too much credit was given to me for what ultimately amounted to happenstance.

 

[PapaRomantic]

I had forgotten about this one. The Pink Orchid story I submitted was based on a porn clip I had watched at one time, and I decided it needed the full work-up treatment the clip didn't allow. I had this comment left and made me smile a lot -

"I'm familiar with the porn clip that inspired this story. You really did it justice."

 

[xtorch]

@Actingup left just an incredibly kind and insightful comment on my new story, Full Moon Blues...



I think you might have understood the emotional arc of my story better than I did

Also, "I'm not usually into _____, but that was hot," is one of the nicest compliments an erotica writer can ever receive

That's so true.

I've had a number of "I'm not into spanking, but Two Hundred Dollars may have changed that." sort of comments and I love them.

 

[Unblemished]

I laughed my ass off at my own expense the other day. Not the normal meaning of the thread but valid, I think.

So I recently uploaded a very old piece of flash-fiction, to tide things over until I got at least one of my WIPs in order. I gave it a quick once-over for typos, tweaked a few lines, and called it a day.

I also, for reference, have come to really dislike those cliches where people define themselves via breast size talk, or unreliable penis measurements, or what have you. Anyone who has had or dealt with either organ could tell you why.

And then I got this comment, courtesy of @ElectricBlue

Why oh why did you mention D cup breasts? Lost you a point, doing that.

And all I can say is fuck, fair play, I totally missed that line and I'd have judged another author's story exactly the same. I guess I was more susceptible to this sort of cliche back in the day

(I would have put this as a response to the specific comment but I'm not sure whether commenters on lit stories actually see the replies?)

 

[xtorch]

I laughed my ass off at my own expense the other day. Not the normal meaning of the thread but valid, I think.

So I recently uploaded a very old piece of flash-fiction, to tide things over until I got at least one of my WIPs in order. I gave it a quick once-over for typos, tweaked a few lines, and called it a day.

I also, for reference, have come to really dislike those cliches where people define themselves via breast size talk, or unreliable penis measurements, or what have you. Anyone who has had or dealt with either organ could tell you why.

And then I got this comment, courtesy of @ElectricBlue


And all I can say is fuck, fair play, I totally missed that line and I'd have judged another author's story exactly the same. I guess I was more susceptible to this sort of cliche back in the day

(I would have put this as a response to the specific comment but I'm not sure whether commenters on lit stories actually see the replies?)

Yes, citing a cup size isn't the end of the world, but if a story starts off with 2 or 3 women rhyming off their cup sizes like they're captured POWs from a Stripper Army, that does tend to shut me down.

I think it came up once, in one story, where one MC had to buy the other some lingerie, so he had find out her size. But at least it was a good 10 or 15 chapters in. Before that, she was just described as "slim".

 

[TarnishedPenny]

Ms Anon just made my date with her (I assume it’s her) comment on my Past, Present and Future, Chapter 1:

An oasis in the desert!

 

[Actingup]

This is a really nice comment just received on 'Semi-detached', which was written for the Halloween contest last year, but it also made me reflect.

Anon wrote 'Thanks for the story. I found it interesting, sexually enticing and with enough spooky content to keep me reading to the end'

Come for the sex, stay for the ghost story!

 

[ElectricBlue]

Ohhh K. You've got my attention. I suspect the following chapters will be even hotter.

I just found your works, and am happy to have done so. Writing skills, and a playful spirit evident.

Brooke Works at the Hardware Store

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Comments like this are extra special when you're pushing the bounds of what people expect of you.
The story in question; Consequence to Recompense, is a lot darker than what I usually write and most of my comments call me out on that. Fair enough.
It was a challenge to write in more ways that one. It tested my boundaries and well, @madelinemasoch kind of 'encouraged' me to write it like I did. I'm glad she did as I feel I wrote it well.
Thank you @Caseyjo for 'getting it.'

---

A favorite quote of mine is, "Just because you don't like it doesn't mean its no good."

Quite a few negative comments here and I don't understand them. Maybe I "got it", while others did not.

I thought the outcome is what everyone wanted or deserved. To include Stevie. In the end, she is happy. She genuinely needed structure, guidance, and to be subservient to others. But she also needed to be in control of what she wanted. She is happy being a woman and at the same time happy to be in chastity. She loves to be fucked, dominated, sucks cock and eats pussy. She also loves her ex wife and wants her to be happy in ways she couldn't.

Damon wasn't right for her and though he was good to her, he wanted her to be someone she didn't want. He got his reward via his own sissy.

Greg is the best friend a person can have and is a hero in my book. He supported Stevie the best he could until she broke too many rules and kicked her out to protect his family. It was the best thing that he could have ever done.

Poker buddy, Jeff, and the firied ceo got what was coming to them.



5 stars because the darkness was needed to propel Stevie to get to a place she was content and happy. I love it that you were able to step a bit out of your normal. That is a sign of a truly great writer.



Please keep em coming

Love Casey

 

[dmallord]

On a Train Bound for Nowhere
I met a woman who’d been rode hard and put away wet.
11/24/2023 in Humor & Satire Stories
4.44 / 163 votes, 4 favorites, 15.2k views, 5 comments

This is one of those stories that seems destined to remain just on the cusp of a red-hot rating. It was a fun story to write, and from the three comments below, others enjoyed it as well. Perhaps it’s the satire/humor aspects that hold its ratings back?

~~~

“Very clever lyrics. Loved the storytelling, too. I shed a tear at the end for the Loves we have lost in our lives.”

“Now I have to get the song out of my head!”

“I had a great time reading this and the best laugh I’ve had in a long time. Thanks for taking the time to write this.”

 

[Actingup]

On a Train Bound for Nowhere
I met a woman who’d been rode hard and put away wet.
11/24/2023 in Humor & Satire Stories
4.44 / 163 votes, 4 favorites, 15.2k views, 5 comments

This is one of those stories that seems destined to remain just on the cusp of a red-hot rating. It was a fun story to write, and from the three comments below, others enjoyed it as well. Perhaps it’s the satire/humor aspects that hold its ratings back?

~~~

“Very clever lyrics. Loved the storytelling, too. I shed a tear at the end for the Loves we have lost in our lives.”

“Now I have to get the song out of my head!”

“I had a great time reading this and the best laugh I’ve had in a long time. Thanks for taking the time to write this.”

Left a 5 for you... hope that helps. I think that in the humour and satire category, some readers might miss the other stuff going on here... they're expecting a cheap laugh and instead they get a story of grief and ending, wrapped up in a funny little tale. It's nicely done - thanks for highlighting it.

 

[SyleusSnow]

This comment by Anonymous on Skinny Dipping with the Bad Girl (which somehow has passed 1000 votes) definately made my day:

I’ve read hundreds of stories on Literotica, most are very good. However, this one is my favorite. You have managed to describe young love and a deep emotional connection between these characters. That is one thing that makes this story powerful. You have added mystery, humor, and danger into a nice compact story. This is my fourth reading. Every couple of months I circle back to refresh my faith in abiding love between two people and so thankful that I have such love with my spouse.