Comments That Make Your Day

[Erozetta]

I'm riding a high that 8 people actually trudged through my "chapter" of the chain story and five left comments on it. And only two of them had to trudge through it!

by AlinaX  on 03/08/2025
What the fuck am I doing?
What a cruel ending!
Very nicely written, though. Loved it.

by Bluesea00  on 03/08/2025
intense, a,plot that's looking for more at every turn . last chapter far way focussed
Congrats.Not my kink but couldn't stop reading.

by ProfPate  on 03/15/2025
Wow that's an intense ride. Lucy, were is she going, not back to Richard I'd say. What's happening with Mina? Bathroy's Blood - is the Hungarian possessed? A reincarnation or just over the top method actor. Really looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks to all contributors.


by AwkwardMD  on 03/19/2025
On the one level, this story gets more interesting with every entry. On the other hand, this chapter is just sooo good. The twists hit hard, the dialog is fantastic and the sex scene lands like the fist of an angry god.


by Omenainen  on 03/20/2025
I’m suspecting everyone at this point! Perched on the edge of my seat to find out what happens next. Or how this all ends

 

[StillStunned]

I'm riding a high that 8 people actually trudged through my "chapter" of the chain story and five left comments on it. And only two of them had to trudge through it!

I'm going to have to read it at some point!

 

[26thNC]

Just some appreciation to @26thNC, who I've previously clashed with. Two story comments, on "Crapshooting" and "The April Fools' News Story". I appreciate *both* because you make a clear distinction between what you enjoy and what you think of the writing (and writer). Many comments, particularly in LW, seem to blur the critical lines between the actions of the characters, the story themes and the author. It's the ones that have a go at the author because they didn't like the story that really set me off! And obviously I'm glad that you really liked the April Fools' one. There are flaws in it and it most likely won't win anything, but I'm glad that it connected.

26thNC
Very well written, but I just don’t care for stories about swingers, cheating, or cuckolds. I see all three in this one.

26thNC
Actingup has done wrote hisself an amazingly good, even great story here. I seldom praise his stories, but I really enjoy seeing a bastard burn just a much as a good bitch burning. AU gave us a homerun here with this great new way to expose some cheaters to the world. I don’t know how anyone can top this in the April Fools writing contest, as this sets a high bar for everyone.

Acting up, I enjoy reading stories posted by authors such as yourself, and the inestimable Lifestyle66. I don’t like most of the characters, or subjects of your stories, but both of you can damn sure write and both will take criticism without taking it personally. In short, a couple of intelligent individuals who can take it, as well as give it out. To my surprise and delight, we occasionally get a story like “April Fools’News Story”. This one makes me wish some of the other good authors could leave the cheating wife, cuckold,and swinging behind occasionally and throw the Moralist Mafia a bone. Appreciate you.

 

[THBGato]

I've had some really lovely and detailed comments on my latest "Forty". Given it's nearly 82,000 words long, I'm just chuffed anyone made it to the end, let alone had any energy left by that point to comment, but 16 people so far have, which is wonderful.

I could share them all, but I think my favourite is probably from our old pal Anonymous:

Me: "Wowee, 23 pages! Okay, I'll break it down to three reading sessions..."

2.5 hours later.

Me: "Oh no... last page already?? Ohmy neck, my eyeballs... so worth it, though..."

On one hand, sad the parents never replied to the emails, but, on the other hand, I was worried it would trigger backlash from Ramona's trust issues the moment Liz hit send with the first email (though I don't think it was mentioned Liz eventually told Ramona she started and is still actively seeking communication, so I guess that can o' worms remains unopened).

The story is quite long, but there have consistent and plentiful moments that were moving and so tender as their relationship developed. Little reactions, little gestures, little offerings. It was wonderful how you moved the long journey of their relationship, from acquaintance to friends to lovers to wives, with these little meaningful moments. Quality slow burn, for sure.

Such a wonderful read and brought a lot of characters you've created together. (Huzzah! Molly in her AA meetings!) I'm not sure how ptsd works with self-defense, but going by this story, glad that, despite Ram's intimate space issues, she will kick ass and chokehold a perp without hesitation.

The Lugandan HOT teasing at the end is *chef's kiss* Really reflects how these two are so into each other, and are, fortunately, in a place where Ram's close to almost healed.

My brain isn't functioning as well right now. It feels like I just feasted and gorged on a heaving plate of wonderful and am in an equivalent of a food coma. Suffice to say, twenty and plenty stars, THBGato.

So rewarding to see some of the little details I'd included be noticed and appreciated.

 

[Actingup]

Acting up, I enjoy reading stories posted by authors such as yourself, and the inestimable Lifestyle66. I don’t like most of the characters, or subjects of your stories, but both of you can damn sure write and both will take criticism without taking it personally. In short, a couple of intelligent individuals who can take it, as well as give it out. To my surprise and delight, we occasionally get a story like “April Fools’News Story”. This one makes me wish some of the other good authors could leave the cheating wife, cuckold,and swinging behind occasionally and throw the Moralist Mafia a bone. Appreciate you.

Cheers mate - I'll take 'damn sure write' any day of the week. I might even post it to Stacnash one day. I'm still learning to write about people or behaviours that I don't personally like - it's much easier in Romance when you can be rooting for them unconditioningly! But I'm happy to be part of Team Rebecca in supporting her plot to stick it to the lot of them in the April Fools story.

 

[Bazzle]

Ooh Bazzle, this was a great tale. You pick the readers across a frenzy of flashbacks, each one pealing away a new slice of reality. it changes for us how we reading the present plot how we feel about them. Then back to the past with a new sadder feeling, even though describing their happier momments (in one they even forgot to smoke!!!).

The end is sadly the more fit for the story. Leaves a taste of a bittersweet pastry, the last one of the dish....
Magical , congrats you have outdone yourself.

This from @Bluesea00 made my weekend.

https://www.literotica.com/s/the-perfect-wedding-day

They totally understood the story

 

[kitmarlowe]

I published Purple Lace Bra this morning and honestly wasn't sure how it would be received, but @PennyThompson just left a great comment that's put me immediately at ease:

Holy cow Vibrant descriptions all the way through, fast and efficient, you don't waste a single line on this! Great sensory writing, I can literally feel his tongue on the fabric of her bra

Similarly @Nynah has absolutely made my day with this:

The only complaint I have about this piece is that I want it to be about thrice as long. However, what you did give us is superb and delightfully sensual. One of the best descriptive episodes of getting eaten out I've read on this site. Really looking forward to more!

 

[Rob_Royale]

This one was kinda fun. Admittedly the story isn't one of my best.

Why the hell do you have to write that your story is a work of fiction at the very top? It's really annoying puts me and Im sure many others off from reading your stories. 99%. of stories are fictional. also your storu is too long and you really dont know how to build up your stories plus who has the time to read such long and boring stories. Keep it shorter max two pages and then maybe people might read it

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

This one was kinda fun. Admittedly the story isn't one of my best.

I find that comment ridiculous. Almost all of my ten bets stories are in the 15K +/- range. My single blue W is almost 30K and the most common comment I get across the board it, "You need to make this longer."

As for the 'work of fiction' comment, Who wants to waste the time counting all the comments on their stories calling them out for something not being "realistic?" Not me.

Keep doing what you do.

 

[TheLobster]

Ah, the irony of a comment that says the story was too long by repeating the same thing three times when once would suffice.

 

[Trionyx]

“PS: I am going to read more of your stories. You write very well and your story lines are wonderful.”

It’s nice to know that my older ones will see a little traffic.

 

[Rustyoznail]

I had a thoughtful comment from Stacnash on https://www.literotica.com/s/it-was-just-a-joke-2.

"I’m smiling as I’m writing this because you made me laugh so many times.
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Gordon was hilarious. Obviously, he’s a dork, but he’s a proud one and his scenes were easily the best on offer here. So much of this was made better by the fact that you never took things too seriously, but whenever Gordon showed up to offer some insight, I couldn’t help but laugh. Even at the very end, when he went for the high five, I laughed out loud. Your sense of humour is a real asset. When I read this - "Maybe it's a coincidence, maybe not. There must be another logical reason. Could it be a TikTok trend?" – I concluded that you’re a comedy genius."

She (?) then made a comment about my rough writing of sex scenes, which I agree with. They're definitely not flowery, and usually wording is on the crude side, but that's an area I'm trying to improve on.

Overall, a worthwhile comment that made my day. "Comedy Genius".

 

[Actingup]

I'm really stoked to still be getting comments on 'A Crack In The Glass', which was written to be a quietly reflective coming of age story without much sex in it, as part of the Pink Orchid 2025 event. It's set in Japan and I did a bit of work to refresh myself on places, cultural practices and words - still I was a bit nervous about it due to the foreign culture and imposter syndrome (as a guy writing for Pink Orchid). The work seems to have paid off (memo to self - it's okay to show restraint in the story!). Some comments from the past couple of weeks ('konyoku' bathing is mixed nude bathing in the onsen, which has declined in popularity since the post-WWII occupation):

Anonymous
I loved this more than any other stoty3 on here I have found (yet). Thank you!

Kurichan
Story told well. I’ve lived in Japan for more than 25 years and have experienced many of the things you’ve mentioned, although I also speak Japanese. I think you reported this well and true to life, even if you didn’t experience each part personally. I can even imagine the 101 year old obaachan leading the way to the rotenburo. I hope that konyoku bathing regains popularity.

nighthawk22204
Thank you very much for taking the time and effort to write all of this story and share it with those of us like myself who have had only short excursions through small parts of this beautiful nation. I think Japan has a beautiful country and culture, very hospitable, and your story displayed that wonderfully.

Anonymous
Thank you for a really great story. You daw wonderful characters in these stories and I am always impressed with your style.

Omenainen
What a lovely tale! I especially loved the old Japanese women. Old women are the *best*. I also really enjoyed the attempt to save her mother, I agree with the above that it was a really nice note on which to end the story. Thank you for posting this in my event.

 

[StillStunned]

Two comments from different readers on very different stories!

@Bluesea00 on Upstream:

Well StSn
That's another great delivery. I loved the detailed description of the hike, how his feelings fit with the story and deliver us to the perfecto poiint where you find this small secluded lagoon. Those who like me love to get lost in the mountains enjoy this mix of freedom, fear, adventure and the hope/desire to find one place still untouched, naturally beatifull....
Then what happens then is a natural outcome with some hint of magic and sex.
Beautiful..Congrats

And @thepinkbishop on Dungeon of Desire: Level 1:

Enjoyed this. Looking forward to reading level 2. I found it a bit slow to get into but then where else would you start. Once I was there I liked it. These stories might be a dime a dozen but the genre is a little new to me. What's not to like ? A promiscuous and horny elf and a (new to me) tiefling (that tongue surely is worth its weight in gold). Must take up D&D again - things have clearly moved on since AD&D first came over to the UK.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

 

[Publius68]

Lots of cool comments on Alistaire’s latest that make my day in different ways.
I really found myself leaning into the meta nature of the story with this chapter, and I’m glad that lots of readers seem to get it.

@Alberto_MBF
You have to give us Tish. That is one Chekhov Babe you cannot leave unfired.

This one remains to be seen, dude. BWAHAHAHA.

@RickJavic
Kind of like Al himself, this one was much longer than average, but very satisfying!!!

@DwarfLord50
Ok, that whole chapter was a lot of fun. The big Sisterhood reveal to Dave was hilarious. The poor guy will never be the same. And yes, your comments about erotica writers had me snickering. Very clever.
RickJavic, your comments about Al actually made me snort laugh. Well played.

Good to see other commenters appreciated the joke of others.

There are lots more. It was a brutal chapter to write, but I’m glad it seems to have landed, and landed the way I wanted it to.

 

[LustyScribe]

This is a little different because my favorite comment today was neither on one of my stories nor was it a comment made BY me. On @ZathuraStarshine 's work "In the Cold and Dirt," @Rw43 finished his compliments with this: "I am thankful I took the time to read your tale. It is still lingering with me a day later." I can’t think of a more gratifying and inspiring comment. I'd love to have that effect on a reader.
(It really IS a great story, if you take the time to read.)

 

[designatedvictim]

Re: Rob_Royale

"Max two pages"?

I'm way too wordy for most of the readers here. I like to build up.

Both of my works got 'took too long for the sex'-types of comments.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Thank you @tex4tg for your kind words on Tomorrow's Problem

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Wonderful!!! As always made me cry with happy tears. Thank you

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And from @SuddenlyMaddie

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I came looking for something sweet and soft and you didn't disappoint. I love the raw emotions going back and forth between Carly and Derrick. As always, you leave me wanting more, but in a good way.

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Mission accomplished.

 

[TheLobster]

Not quite a comment, but nevertheless it seems that the user really liked this one particular story:

 

[MillieDynamite]

Wow, a stuttering follower.

Not quite a comment, but nevertheless it seems that the user really liked this one particular story:

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[WCSGarland]

anonymous comment on Counterfeit Rose

Tons of raunchy fun! I really enjoyed Polly’s voice as a narrator here — how awesome to find a fresh, tough-talking, immediately engaging character. It was also super charming that her manager stands up for her even after he’s seen her in porn his wife filmed — what a fun, endearing twist that is! Also, the bus scene was crazy hot.

 

[SouthernCrossfire]

I received a new comment today on As Big as the Moon, my 2024 Valentine's contest story, which takes place primarily in a couple of very small but real towns in the American south and focuses on a classic southern treat. Member vsweeney said:

You are an amazing story teller. Nothing in the different scenes seemed forced. I cried and laughed at the right places. All I can say is Thank You from the bottom of my heart. Please continue to write like this.

That made me feel really good and then I got another smile when I recalled an old but very humorous comment from member librertin shortly after the story came out:

Μister I ain't close on being a southerner myself but your story made me wish I were! I know it's a Valentine Romance that would inevitably mash on a bad streak of events before a happy ending but still followed through like a prize gelding on the fair show field! 5 stars not close enough to show how I enjoyed yer story, only bad thing was that was so immersing, that I couldn't "take things at hand" in the most steaming parts and ended embarassing myself when wife asked why i keep arranging my pants! I don't know if my last part of the comment is criticism or congratulating to be frank!

Thanks, folks!

 

[Smuttyandfun]

I'm thinking this reader really got into my latest story, 'My Sleeping Beauty.' I laughed when I read her parting shot, wondering how many of us could relate to it.

I adored the connection that these two felt right from the onset. You did a fantastic job at creating something special and incredibly hot between them. I love the sweet story, but the sex is so good that I just wanted more. I loved the way he licked up her legs to her clit, gave her a great ride, and in the shower…when he made her shiver to her toes while fingering her before turning her around. I absolutely LOVED it when he made love to her from behind and kissed her spine while she came and held his body to hers. Yes fuckin please. Totally wet.

By the way…I knew she was going to get pregnant when he came in her in the shower…super fun story. Fuck these critics!

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

Sometimes it's the quantity as well as the quality...

It's probably not a record, but I think it's a personal best: Eleven comments in the last couple of hours on my latest, Tomorrow's Problem -

And true to form, anonymous left the longest one about why eh didn't even read the story...

 

[Actingup]

Sometimes it's the quantity as well as the quality...

It's probably not a record, but I think it's a personal best: Eleven comments in the last couple of hours on my latest, Tomorrow's Problem -

And true to form, anonymous left the longest one about why eh didn't even read the story...


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I love that rush when the moderation queue on comments is being cleared and you find out whether the story struck a chord or not!! Apart from Anon 'I quit reading halfway down the first page' of course, but he can get stuffed with something unpleasant. Congratulations!