2010 Team Poetry Olympiad Extravaganza

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Theme: Narcissus and Echo, Death and Afterlife.

Objective: Write two, five stanza poems, where each team member is responsible for a stanza.

In the First Poem the A lines should be perfect or true rhyme(ex Death/Breath, Apple/Chapel, Rhyme/Time) So lines 1 and 4 of each stanza will rhyme, lines 2 and 3 are up to you and your team. This is the Narcissus perspective. Write the poem from the point of view of a man who has lost his wife and doesn't believe in the afterlife.

A
x
x
A

The Second Poem relies on the end rhyme you chose for the first poem, though the rhyme shouldn't be true rhyme, but half/slant/imperfect rhyme(ex Death/Deaf, Apple/People, Rhyme/Sign) This is the Echo perspective. Write the poem from the dead wife's perspective. She's with him, he doesn't know she's there.

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A/
A/
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The poems will be judged on how well each team conveys a unified work, the quality of the poems, and on how creative each team gets with the Greek or Ovidian myth.

http://rhymezone.com/ May have both types of rhymes you'll need, if you're the sort of poet who doesn't have a wealth of words stored away.

There are rhymes that are questionable like Apple/Grapple, Ear/Hear, Rhyme/Sign, you could make an argument for perfect or imperfect/improper. I'll let stuff like that slide for either poem. It's more important that you know that if the first and fourth lines of your first poem end with 'Apple/Grapple' the second and third lines of your second poem should be half-rhymes of 'Apple/Grapple'. So if you have 'Steeple' and 'People' as half rhymes of 'Apple/Grapple' you can have true rhyme in the second poem, it's up to you. Just think about the myth.

Good Luck. Any questions, just post them in this thread.
 
Holy Batfinks!

*excited/scared in equal measure -

drums palms on table top and squeaks -

shit. * :D

great challenge!
 
question!

lines 1 & 4 of the first stanza don't need to be match-rhymed by the following 4 stanzas do they, so each 5 stanzas have the same A rhyme? please tell me no.
 
question!

lines 1 & 4 of the first stanza don't need to be match-rhymed by the following 4 stanzas do they, so each 5 stanzas have the same A rhyme? please tell me no.

That is a good question. My intention was to force you into one rhyme for all of Poem One so you can really go nuts in Poem Two. So your A end rhyme should be consistent for all five stanzas of poem one.
 
That is a good question. My intention was to force you into one rhyme for all of Poem One so you can really go nuts in Poem Two. So your A end rhyme should be consistent for all five stanzas of poem one.

okies, thanks for that clarification
*double shit*
 
I think half our team is still in bed, nonetheless me and ChipButty are on it!

I feel serious rust, I don't think I've even attempted to write a poem from scratch this year.
 
That is a good question. My intention was to force you into one rhyme for all of Poem One so you can really go nuts in Poem Two. So your A end rhyme should be consistent for all five stanzas of poem one.

oh no. massa, not the briar patch! :devil:
 
okay I got the first kid on the bus...

I have been up since 4am when the littlest figured it was time to play.

:cool:

wont be my first semi-conscious poem whoohoooooo! eek



I think half our team is still in bed, nonetheless me and ChipButty are on it!

I feel serious rust, I don't think I've even attempted to write a poem from scratch this year.
 
okay I got the first kid on the bus...

I have been up since 4am when the littlest figured it was time to play.

:cool:

wont be my first semi-conscious poem whoohoooooo! eek

We're not on our game, Charley's team shouldn't even try that hard, they're sure to beat us. I heard EroticO's car is in a ditch in Iowa, he's gonna have to overnight his stanzas from a Motel 6 in Des Moines. Tzara's training for a body building contest.
 
We're not on our game, Charley's team shouldn't even try that hard, they're sure to beat us. I heard EroticO's car is in a ditch in Iowa, he's gonna have to overnight his stanzas from a Motel 6 in Des Moines. Tzara's training for a body building contest.

for real? is he ok? i suppose he must be if he's overnighting his stanzas but crikey :rose:
 
That is a good question. My intention was to force you into one rhyme for all of Poem One so you can really go nuts in Poem Two. So your A end rhyme should be consistent for all five stanzas of poem one.

Poem 2:

Do lines 1 and 4 in all 5 stanzas need to be slant rhymes for the same original rhyme from poem 1?

That is how I read it originally.
 
We're not on our game, Charley's team shouldn't even try that hard, they're sure to beat us. I heard EroticO's car is in a ditch in Iowa, he's gonna have to overnight his stanzas from a Motel 6 in Des Moines. Tzara's training for a body building contest.

ha!

I am off to the park and shall return bright eyed and ready to kick ass.

Just not Tzara's ass. It is too fine for kicking.
 
Poem 2:

Do lines 1 and 4 in all 5 stanzas need to be slant rhymes for the same original rhyme from poem 1?

That is how I read it originally.

Yes, in poem 2 your second and third lines should all be various slant rhymes for the rhyme end you chose for the first poem's first and fourth lines. So example: apple and grapple are your true rhymes in poem one, in the next poem all your slant rhymes should be variations on -pple, so you can have true rhyme within your second poem, but not true rhyme between poems. Not that you can't have all slant rhymes for your second poem either.
 
Team Awesome, don't muck up my Extravaganza thread with your tricks. There's nothing wrong with EO, AnnaSwirls is entirely competent in poetry when half-asleep, and Tzara isn't too busy to write poems because he's greasing up for a weight lifting competition.
 
Alright, there's nothing wrong with any members of my team. We're actually absolutely astonishing and will be sharing drinks in the sauna by noontime tomorrow.

As a side note, I just messed up these chocolate chip cookies. I left them in too long because I was busy thinking about all the sexy oblique rhymes Annaswirls is going to come up with.
 
Alright, there's nothing wrong with any members of my team. We're actually absolutely astonishing and will be sharing drinks in the sauna by noontime tomorrow.

As a side note, I just messed up these chocolate chip cookies. I left them in too long because I was busy thinking about all the sexy oblique rhymes Annaswirls is going to come up with.

awesome^ high5s

sauna? do i get to sit on the bubbles? forget i asked that :eek: :D
 
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