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Really?If I Didn't Care
A shallow layer of control
buffers thoughts about
what life would be like
if knowledge remained
locked inside exhaustion
and despair instead
Allowed out to hold
the moral high ground
above confrontations
brewed in the muddy
churn of guilty metaphors
of swine and cattle
at the trough of maybes
Happiness should help
expand that shield bubble
and keep the stench
of the herd locked outside
of this now and forgotten
in the flow of this moment.
(Thanks twelvio and Joseph Campbell)
I’m too old for this
you rooting in my head
convinced there is evidence
of my infidelity
someone else’s fingerprint
who dared to touch my heart
or worse, some stray pubic hair
caught between my teeth
a Polaroid photo
tucked inside my head
of some hot naked Latino
with her butt against my lens
you search in my dark corners
to catch me in flagrante delicto
with some hot black girl
who just can’t get enough
even the supermarket checkout girl
is under your suspicion
as you check the receipt
for the price of sex between milk and bread
woman, I’m happy with your limbs
wrapped around my body
I’m just not in the mood
When Liverpool lose
see how easy. good going!!!I'm in lust with the mix of disgust, sarcasm and humor....this is great!
see how easy. good going!!!
look everybody will tell you I'm the most arrogant prick on the planet (alright, I lied, merely a distant third) but very early on, you should have a list of people that do something better than you the more you are here, the better you get, the list may change, but it will not get shorter it is about discovery.Hehe thanks. I just said how I felt. There are many on here where I envy the talent.
look everybody will tell you I'm the most arrogant prick on the planet (alright, I lied, merely a distant third) but very early on, you should have a list of people that do something better than you the more you are here, the better you get, the list may change, but it will not get shorter it is about discovery.
Talent is OK, work and thinking is better.
Ok this impresses meOk, I already have four favorites, with the first two heavily at the top. Here is the first poem I submitted - if you wouldn't mind critiquing it? No worries about arrogance, as long as it's matched with honesty...
Know that when you whisper
of sweet love in the moonlight
You vanquish my innocence
And I am defenseless against your desire
For your white, hot desire will have
even the purest of hearts
Dropping to their knees
Beseeching a night without end
And the dizzying madness in the night
Urges yearnings of forever
Towards dawn's cold light
Taking maybes, ifs and mights
and spinning them into hopes and dreams
Ok, I already have four favorites, with the first two heavily at the top. Here is the first poem I submitted - if you wouldn't mind critiquing it? No worries about arrogance, as long as it's matched with honesty...
Know that when you whisper
of sweet love in the moonlight
You vanquish my innocence
And I am defenseless against your desire
For your white, hot desire will have
even the purest of hearts
Dropping to their knees
Beseeching a night without end
And the dizzying madness in the night
Urges yearnings of forever
Towards dawn's cold light
Taking maybes, ifs and mights
and spinning them into hopes and dreams
Ok, I already have four favorites, with the first two heavily at the top. Here is the first poem I submitted - if you wouldn't mind critiquing it? No worries about arrogance, as long as it's matched with honesty...
Know that when you whisper
of sweet love in the moonlight
You vanquish my innocence
And I am defenseless against your desire
For your white, hot desire will have
even the purest of hearts
Dropping to their knees
Beseeching a night without end
And the dizzying madness in the night
Urges yearnings of forever
Towards dawn's cold light
Taking maybes, ifs and mights
and spinning them into hopes and dreams
actually, guys, if we disagree, it wasn't by much, but possibly for different reasonsdizzying, spinning < anytime you suffix a word, it weakens it, unless you have a good reason for doing it, avoid.
actually, guys, if we disagree, it wasn't by much, but possibly for different reasons
We haven't heard back from Matryoshka. I doubt the criticism killed her, something else? Your fault, tso pointing her to the shadow.
mine is made out of glassSee? You never wander into Carcosa. Things happen, there.
...and yeah, rereading what you said, I now notice we're pretty much saying the same thing. Between reading your comment and posting mine, it somehow got corrupted in my mind. Organic brains. Such imperfect machines...
mine is made out of glass
we are diverging in this thread.
Sheesh - kaboom!or
Sheesh - kaboom!
that is all.
move along, nothing to see
here
Sheesh - kaboom!
ah boom shaka lacka lacka
I'm surprised anyone remembers that song
ah, the distant days of yore
when everything was such a bore
and I was such a teddy boy
and you, my rubbermaid-en
Sheesh - kaboom!
whenever i think
of whips snap-crackin'
the thing i recall
is Rawhide, back in
the old black an' white
days past trackin'
and things were all a li'l rowdy
fer sure
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AKC8pSFg1Vw&hd=1
Bah. That video was such a turn off.