Challenge: The perfect ten.

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The_Fool said:
that I can make you laugh
fills me with happiness

I laugh your happiness away.
Now you are hopelessly confused.


love your writing, cigar-hombre...
 
foehn said:
I laugh your happiness away.
Now you are hopelessly confused.


love your writing, cigar-hombre...

Confusion
Only makes the ignorance
More interesting
I’m hopelessly confused

Thanks for the kind words
 
never again after this, i promise...

five-fingered
and fanned,
each hand
has lingered
in sand
~~

heart stirs:
she takes.
it breaks,
and aches
for hers.
~~

her grace
with air,
her hair
and face —
are where?
~~

Bumbly,
but fun!
Humbly
I bow,
for now
I’m done.
~~
 
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