Challenge: The perfect ten.

[myxomatosis]

slip up
slip in
would be unfortunate

 

[Guest]

roller coaster
vomit
I am now
getting off.

 

[Angeline]

i will
is not
supposition
nor preposition
but a possibility

 

[Honey123]

I cried for you last night ~
you never heard me

 

[Tathagata]

my silent night offerings to love
could fill a book

 

[Honey123]

A book, a diary
filled with poetry
in your name...

 

[Guest]

I cried for you last night ~
you never heard me

It could be God,
man or woman.
Does anyone hear?

~~~~~~~~~~~

Drowning in tears,
screaming for help,
never heard
or understood.

~~~~~~~~~~~

I stomp my feet,
shout
someone love me
I'm dying.

~~~~~~~~~~~

I am loved
so they say
but live in disbelief.

 

[Tathagata]

A book, a diary
filled with poetry
in your name...

perhaps a cathedral
dream spider spun glass altar
to her

 

[Honey123]

It could be God,
man or woman.
Does anyone hear?

~~~~~~~~~~~

Drowning in tears,
screaming for help,
never heard
or understood.

~~~~~~~~~~~

I stomp my feet,
shout
someone love me
I'm dying.

~~~~~~~~~~~

I am loved
so they say
but live in disbelief.

And so I drown
in my tears,
scream in vain,

I bury my face
deeper into a
wet pillow case

My fists pounding
the mattress in
frustration,
hiccups between
cries

 

[Remec]

I cried for you last night ~
you never heard me

I cried for you also...
or was that for me?

 

[Guest]

I have to edit words;
always regret it
afterwards.

 

[average gina]

I cried for you also...
or was that for me?

i cried
for you
for me
and
not us

 

[Guest]

silent treatment hurts
but it's better than screaming.

 

[Remec]

silent treatment hurts
but it's better than screaming.

I have to be silent.
I've screamed
my heart
raw.

 

[The Mutt]

Nothing so strong,
nothing so gentle,
as my Mother's hand.

 

[Guest]

Days of promise
roll by like an
endless freight train

 

[Guest]

The roller coaster won't stop.
It's making me ill.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Thinking the ride was over,
I spin
sick with confusion.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Racing thoughts,
rapid heart
so distraught;
I now fight.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Lucy; fucking bastard
leave me alone.
God is near.
Goodbye.

 

[Luv2PleasureF]

The Perfect Ten
Summed up in three:
Love: Manic Depression.

mine.

 

[Man Ray]

Promised days of happiness?
Will one come?
Well, one has...

 

[Guest]

Daddy pays his bills,
mama's a harlot
teaching him well.



Pity the fool.

 

[Guest]

Promised days of happiness?
Will one come?
Well, one has...

It's so nice to have
a positve ten words
Thanks.

 

[Guest]

Promised days of happiness?
Will one come?
Well, one has...

Remembering your pain
Longing her voice
Everyday isn't joy.

 

[matriarch]

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[Man Ray]

It's so nice to have
a positve ten words
Thanks.

Its easy to be positive,
when you find such love...

 

[Man Ray]

Remembering your pain
Longing her voice
Everyday isn't joy.

Pain is still with me
but now soothed by love...