Challenge: The perfect ten.

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Raging Whoremoans said:
Confused amazement
brows knit
hard stare
if so
then what?

heaven hell bliss devastation joy hearbreak lust loss

love?

maybe
 
Sarcasm shudders
sending shivers,
scathing,
scalding stems
of
swamp rose
 
Self absorbtion
curls the yellow pages.
No one reads them.


barely dried ink
runs with fallen tears.
the words blur.


I see you -
heart leap
our eyes meet -
heart stop.
 
powers used
for common good
requires: powers
and common good



a bubblegum conversation
chewed
blew
popped
left sticky and unsatisfied
 
Young
Essoteric
Death Angel
Chases My
Fiery Spirt
Beyond Time




Big Bang
Dust Scattered
Magma Fused
Water Cools
Life Begins
 
you cheated

hindsight 20/20
phenomenon—
"i knew it all along"

~ ~ ~

man
less love

woman
more love

negative
correlation
 
Birdsong
bass beat
laughter
spills like
iceberg
run off
incessantly

and Mrs Morrow is
yelling at her
man
once more.

Dandelions grace our lawn
and Hennie glares.
says
"Seeds'll blow."
 
Hi, new here, hope you don't mind if I try this a couple of times

her duty,
never neglected,
was always
reminding me,
I'm crazy

She absconded
left bills
sad children
becoming
what she is

I like the premise of this exercise; 10 words should say it.
 
Welcome twelveoone!

Midday arrives
She's rubbing her eyes
I'm ready
for naptime!

* * *

white
black
ordered
spaced
caressed
stroked
fingered
played

piano keys

* * *

notes soar
drop low
soar high
merge to form
chords

~ R W
 
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