Challenge: The perfect ten.

[minsue]

How frightening, Min........am I a big girl now?





a rose at the grave of Michael
Hot Blood

LOL

I wouldn't know about that, but you can have an AV now! (I just didn't want to hijack the thread to tell you that so I had to make it 10 words...)

 

[Maria2394]

night candy

swamp candles
mesmerize
flicker, fire flies
tantalize
snuffed at dawn

 

[tarablackwood22]

LOL

I wouldn't know about that, but you can have an AV now! (I just didn't want to hijack the thread to tell you that so I had to make it 10 words...)

LOL

Hijack away....I'm tired and looking for any excuse to stop writing! Tath is formatting one for me, or doing whatever those computer guys do....It's beyond my capabilities!

a rose at the grave of Michael
Hot Blood

 

[Maria2394]

stars fell

stretch of sand
ocean's hand
outstretched and offering
starfish hello's

 

[tarablackwood22]

decelerating roll,
semi-circle trace
of foolish hearts
and hands

 

[tarablackwood22]

rope tight,
toes curled,
pole parallel
for poise and symmetry

 

[tarablackwood22]

crowd gasp,
something wrong
no net

 

[Maria2394]

rope tight,
toes curled,
pole parallel
for poise and symmetry

free form
floor dance
exercise of motion
devotion

 

[tarablackwood22]

only
cement and elephants
to break the fall

 

[tarablackwood22]

free form
floor dance
exercise of motion
devotion

god talks
with a drawl,
shiny,
dipped in crisco

 

[minsue]

I love this thread

Tara & Maria,

http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/diverse/fm_clap.gif

edited due to emoticon technical difficulties...

 

[Maria2394]

jimson weed,
julip tea
monkeys dance
with scarlett,
not me

 

[tarablackwood22]

jimson weed,
julip tea
monkeys dance
with scarlett,
not me

night music!
look in my eyes,
ask me to dance.

 

[Maria2394]

glitter eyes

night music!
look in my eyes,
ask me to dance.

you hypnotize
paint me into
your starry night
word dance

 

[tarablackwood22]

Re: glitter eyes

you hypnotize
paint me into
your starry night
word dance

run crazy with me,
share thoughts,
tear me a moonbeam

 

[Maria2394]

midnight

rest would be random
wiggling,
giggling
snuggling
in tandem

 

[tarablackwood22]

Re: midnight

rest would be random
wiggling,
giggling
snuggling
in tandem

alone and together
they touch,
blessed children
of many angels

 

[Merrymaker]

monotonous work drive
heart beats faster
fleeting glimpse of her

 

[Lostdriver1964]

Une vie sans toi.
C'est là que me conduit l'amour.

(A life without you.
It's there that love leads me)




Sad but fits in both languages

 

[Tathagata]

watering her garden
sunflowers bow to kiss her
summer elf

 

[Merrymaker]

"Does hers wuv her widdle man?"
adult spewing insipid babble


I overheard a phone call at work, OMG I wish I hadn't! He was serious and talking to his girlfriend lol

 

[Tathagata]

opulent comfort
can't fill
those ragged holes
in your heart

 

[Tathagata]

"Does hers wuv her widdle man?"
adult spewing insipid babble


I overheard a phone call at work, OMG I wish I hadn't! He was serious and talking to his girlfriend lol

should have thrown up on him

 

[fawnie]

should have thrown up on him

what's the rules with this form of poetry..ten words..thats it??
tath..let me know would ya..or someone..i might build the courage to try..

 

[Merrymaker]

should have thrown up on him

I still haven't worked up the courage to eat lunch yet. I keep having flashbacks, it's on a friggin loop in my head ...make it stop!