Creative Minds Unite...For Two Lines

[lucky-E-leven]

Damn this story, damn this page, damn this cursor flashing
I started a tale and things went well but halfway through, I'm crashing.
I've read it and read it, again and again
Yet the words will not conform and mesh to win.
The idea, I love. The story, I adore.
And each time I read it I yawn from the bore.
Why does this happen? How could it be?
I know what I want and still it eludes me.
Typing and swearing and starting again
On the verge of tossing it in the scrap bin.

~lucky

 

[NoJo]

I've great characters, intricate plot
but I've I've spent the day doing doodly squat

I've ten minutes left, to go to the bank,
Bollocks. I think I'll just have a wank.

My wife when she sees me later, will say,
How's it all going? A productive day?

I chose this profession, in a fit of delusion,
Now I sit in dismay and confusion

While real life is complex, at least it's exciting
A hell of lot simpler than writing.

 

[destinie21]

You want stories I've got a ton
I'll write them out one by one
line by line
if only the mrs would give me time


I just got over the big block
but she keeps me busy around the clock
one day I'll write another story under my name
but for right now I won't complain

 

[lucky-E-leven]

I've great characters, intricate plot
but I've I've spent the day doing doodly squat

I've ten minutes left, to go to the bank,
Bollocks. I think I'll just have a wank.

My wife when she sees me later, will say,
How's it all going? A productive day?

I chose this profession, in a fit of delusion,
Now I sit in dismay and confusion

While real life is complex, at least it's exciting
A hell of lot simpler than writing.

Agreed, Sub Joe, writing is a bitch
I sit and glare like a wart-nosed witch

The screen seems to say, "Please fill me with words!"
And for the life of me, all that comes out are blurbs.

I sit and I listen to cartoons on the tele
but I can't find direction and it is just smelly

This rhyming is good and I feel inspired
Maybe a poem is what is desired

I'm opening Word and the images spring
From my mind they will fly, like a bird on the wing.

Cross your fingers, for me, and say a prayer
As, once again, I enter the dragon's lair.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Agreed, Sub Joe, writing is a bitch
I sit and glare like a wart-nosed witch

The screen seems to say, "Please fill me with words!"
And for the life of me, all that comes out are blurbs.

I sit and I listen to cartoons on the tele
but I can't find direction and it is just smelly

This rhyming is good and I feel inspired
Maybe a poem is what is desired

I'm opening Word and the images spring
From my mind they will fly, like a bird on the wing.

Cross your fingers, for me, and say a prayer
As, once again, I enter the dragon's lair.

I want to help and not be a prick
I often get inspired from some music
So find a tune that fits your mood
Turn off the tele stay away from food
Listen to the words and see how it fits
Then inspiration arises like nipples on tits

 

[Dingus Guy]

A day and a half gone bi
Where is the lesbian troupe?
Maybe together at last without the guy

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Wishful thinking Mr. Dingus Guy
But this eve, all alone am I.

~lucky

good to see you back
even if under construction...

 

[Dingus Guy]

Wishful thinking Mr. Dingus Guy
But this eve, all alone am I.

~lucky

good to see you back
even if under construction...

Alone it seems my dear lady, but I am here
Together we are two, one straight the other queer

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Alone it seems my dear lady, but I am here
Together we are two, one straight the other queer

Easy there, Sir Dingus, I'm not one for a label
Besides, who doesn't want to kiss a woman under the table?

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

Easy there, Sir Dingus, I'm not one for a label
Besides, who doesn't want to kiss a woman under the table?

~lucky

I did not mean to put you in a group
But your a chicken who lives with your coop
Get away from the hens and in with the rooster
You need a little something that will boost ya

 

[minsue]

I did not mean to put you in a group
But your a chicken who lives with your coop
Get away from the hens and in with the rooster
You need a little something that will boost ya

Not speaking for Lucky, speaking only for I,
But Dingus, haven't you heard of Bi?

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Not speaking for Lucky, speaking only for I,
But Dingus, haven't you heard of Bi?

Thank you m'dear, and my what a nose
How about you come around and we'll strike a pose?

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

Penis envy is one thing but whats with the nose?
A honker like that is for loving, but not with clothes

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Nose, eyes, fingers, toes...
All can be sexy in or out of clothes.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Nose, eyes, fingers, toes...
All can be sexy in or out of clothes.

Legs parted, hips flexed and thrust
My tongue arousing your undiscovered lust
Fingers, hands gently exposing your need
Satisfying the hunger in which I feed
Eyes closed, ears alert to the sensations
Feeling the desire in my manipulations
The heart hammers, the brain is stimulated
Your arousal keeps you quite fascinated
Along your lips, and into your nest
Satisfaction is a start that finishes your quest

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Legs parted, hips flexed and thrust
My tongue arousing your undiscovered lust
Fingers, hands gently exposing your need
Satisfying the hunger in which I feed
Eyes closed, ears alert to the sensations
Feeling the desire in my manipulations
The heart hammers, the brain is stimulated
Your arousal keeps you quite fascinated
Along your lips, and into your nest
Satisfaction is a start that finishes your quest

Nice One, Dingus!

Never before seen, was the curve of her hip
Between it and her breast, the most beautiful dip
Satiny smooth, aglow in moon light
My hand trembles, reaching toward such a sight

In my mind, I know it is certain to be
The kiss of death, bestowed upon me

My fingers against such utter perfection
Will seal my fate and cause my defection
Many will follow, but none will compare
To the excellence of, this woman so rare

~lucky (she exists)

 

[Dingus Guy]

Nice One, Dingus!

Never before seen, was the curve of her hip
Between it and her breast, the most beautiful dip
Satiny smooth, aglow in moon light
My hand trembles, reaching toward such a sight

In my mind, I know it is certain to be
The kiss of death, bestowed upon me

My fingers against such utter perfection
Will seal my fate and cause my defection
Many will follow, but none will compare
To the excellence of, this woman so rare

~lucky (she exists)

Thanks Lucky I think you bring out my best
I submitted after posting and now I rest
Yours is good as well and I think you should too
Copy and paste it and share it with the Lit crew

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Thanks Lucky I think you bring out my best
I submitted after posting and now I rest
Yours is good as well and I think you should too
Copy and paste it and share it with the Lit crew

I'm having fun...lusty, though it may be
Where did you post, are you sure it's for me?
A poet I'm not, but I do love to rhyme
Submitting gives me pause, most of the time.

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

I'm having fun...lusty, though it may be
Where did you post, are you sure it's for me?
A poet I'm not, but I do love to rhyme
Submitting gives me pause, most of the time.

~lucky

I posted in Literotica as we sit and spin
In erotic poetry but no contest to win

 

[lucky-E-leven]

I posted in Literotica as we sit and spin
In erotic poetry but no contest to win

Oh! I assumed you meant a thread,
Maybe I really am screwed up in the head
I doubt such a poem as the one I did scribe
Would get many votes without a fat bribe
This is alright, I wrote it for fun
I'm not quite ready to be under the gun


~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

Oh! I assumed you meant a thread,
Maybe I really am screwed up in the head
I doubt such a poem as the one I did scribe
Would get many votes without a fat bribe
This is alright, I wrote it for fun
I'm not quite ready to be under the gun


~lucky

You got nothing to lose if you do not try
Awards and praise come within thats no lie
So what they hey submit it tonight
I'm going to bed please turn off the light.
Sweet Dreams
Berries and whip creams

 

[lucky-E-leven]

You got nothing to lose if you do not try
Awards and praise come within thats no lie
So what they hey submit it tonight
I'm going to bed please turn off the light.
Sweet Dreams
Berries and whip creams

Thanks for the shove, I'm getting closer
I'd just hate to look like a poser.
You are right about seeking praise from within
This is a weakness of mine, but I must begin
A new road at some point, and maybe it's fair
To submit a little poem and finally share.

~lucky

"g'nite dingus guy"...quietly turning out the light

 

[minsue]

Thanks for the shove, I'm getting closer
I'd just hate to look like a poser.
You are right about seeking praise from within
This is a weakness of mine, but I must begin
A new road at some point, and maybe it's fair
To submit a little poem and finally share.

~lucky

"g'nite dingus guy"...quietly turning out the light

Lucky, it's good and I think you should share
You've a talent for rhyme and you have to start somewhere
So go on submit
To be posted on Lit
If this lil rhyme doesn't convince you, then how 'bout a dare?

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Lucky, it's good and I think you should share
You've a talent for rhyme and you have to start somewhere
So go on submit
To be posted on Lit
If this lil rhyme doesn't convince you, then how 'bout a dare?

Now you've done it, you don't play fair
Compliments I can deny, but never a dare
I copied and pasted and hit submit
Thanks for the push, I needed it.

~lucky

Dingus Guy
Minsue:

 

[minsue]

Now you've done it, you don't play fair
Compliments I can deny, but never a dare
I copied and pasted and hit submit
Thanks for the push, I needed it.

~lucky

Dingus Guy
Minsue:

I though the dare might push you along
If it didn't, I was prepared to break out in song.

I'm glad you submitted, Lucky.