Creative Minds Unite...For Two Lines

[Dingus Guy]

There's the Dingus I know and love
Innuendo and invitation, over and above.

~lucky

Still not myself
Far off in a closed box
Fumbling with the latch
Clumsy as an ox
Can't get out
Can't break free
Alone in darkness
With nothing to see
I lose patience
Then I stop trying
Can't get my wits
Can't stop crying
I scream for help
Yet nothing comes out
My voice is silent
My mind in doubt
No one sees me
I am not heard
This poem am I
Living every word

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Mindy, my sweet, my thoughts do turn
Of happier days, may we all soon learn.

~lucky

 

[minsue]

Still not myself
Far off in a closed box
Fumbling with the latch
Clumsy as an ox
Can't get out
Can't break free
Alone in darkness
With nothing to see
I lose patience
Then I stop trying
Can't get my wits
Can't stop crying
I scream for help
Yet nothing comes out
My voice is silent
My mind in doubt
No one sees me
I am not heard
This poem am I
Living every word

My empathy is real
I know how that feels
I wish I could help you
For I'm crying today, too

http://www.tulips.com/flowers/Apeldoorn1102.jpg

- Mindy

ps to Lucky - Thanks

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Still not myself
Far off in a closed box
Fumbling with the latch
Clumsy as an ox
Can't get out
Can't break free
Alone in darkness
With nothing to see
I lose patience
Then I stop trying
Can't get my wits
Can't stop crying
I scream for help
Yet nothing comes out
My voice is silent
My mind in doubt
No one sees me
I am not heard
This poem am I
Living every word

This is not living, no, certainly not.
This is hurt and pain and sounds like a lot.
Your voice may be silent, but I still see words
Write, do not scream, your words they are heard
You say no one sees, but I disagree
You are quite real, to Minsue and me.
The darkness seems real, but it will not last
Tomorrow these things will be in the past.
They won't go away, they'll surely survive
But each passing day you will feel more alive.

~lucky

Minsue...http://www.addis-welt.de/smilie/smilie/liebe/smilie_liebe1.gif

 

[Dingus Guy]

Two lines, maybe more to come
Where did this suddenly arise from?

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Drug up from the deep
This thread did creep

My friend Dingus Guy
Is back, and rhyming on the fly!

~lucky

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Reposting for New Players!

Creative Minds Unite...For Two Lines
Washington Post Poetry Competition
THESE ARE ENTRIES TO A WASHINGTON POST COMPETITION ASKING FOR A RHYME WITH
THE MOST ROMANTIC FIRST LINE BUT .... THE LEAST ROMANTIC SECOND LINE:

Love may be beautiful, love may be bliss
But I only slept with you, because I was pissed.
*************************
I thought that I could love no other
Until, that is, I met your brother.
**************************
Roses are red, violets are blue, sugar is sweet, and so are you.
But the roses are wilting, the violets are dead, the sugar bowl's empty
and so is your head.
**************************
Of loving beauty you float with grace
If only you could hide your face.
****************************
Kind, intelligent, loving and hot
This describes everything you are not.
******************************
I want to feel your sweet embrace
But don't take that paper bag off of your face.
*******************************
I love your smile, your face, and your eyes
Damn, I'm good at telling lies!
************************************
My darling, my lover, my beautiful wife:
Marrying you screwed up my life.
************************************
I see your face when I am dreaming.
That's why I always wake up screaming.
***************************************
My love, you take my breath away.
What have you stepped in to smell this way?
****************************************
My feelings for you no words can tell
Except for maybe "Go To Hell".
*****************************************
What inspired this amorous rhyme?
Two parts vodka, one part lime.



Anyone think they can come up with the most romantic first line and the least romantic second line? Get after it, then!

~lucky

 

[Carl East]

Your eyes are like two twinkling stars
reflected in a stagnant pond.

or

If the gods sculptured those breasts
They must have a sense of humour.

Carl

 

[Dingus Guy]

Hey Lucky I love that new AV
Too bad you like girls such a pity

 

[Dingus Guy]

You know Lucky this thread only can last with your beautiful words.
Even if your rhymes are bad and your prose is as extinct as dodo birds.

 

[Guest]

I love you so much, I often wonder if my heart were made of glass.
So what are you fucking waiting for? Get out the KY and fuck me up the ass!

 

[cloudy]

I love you so much, I often wonder if my heart were made of glass.
So what are you fucking waiting for? Get out the KY and fuck me up the ass!

PMSL!!!

 

[Dingus Guy]

PMSL!!!

Cloudy my sweets with all your beauty, it's called 'two lines'
Next time you add a post bitch, you better read the signs

 

[lucky-E-leven]

This guy seemed nice at first as he posted
If he doesn't watch his step his ass will get roasted.

~lucky

(not you DG. )

 

[cloudy]

Cloudy my sweets with all your beauty, it's called 'two lines'
Next time you add a post bitch, you better read the signs

Dingus, my love, I'll take that to heart.
Smile when you say "bitch", you old fart.


(hope you realise I'm playing)

 

[doormouse]

When I met you, I was offered romance
Now just put on the monkey suit and dance!

 

[Lord DragonsWing]

When I met you, I was offered romance
Now just put on the monkey suit and dance!

Hops around the room with a banana in his hand and his tail flicking across doormouse's cute butt.

 

[doormouse]

Ah, LDW you crazy baboon
Now get naked and back to my room

 

[Pornofan420]

You heal my tired soul, give me all that I lack
Which is why I forgive you the hair on your back.

 

[Dingus Guy]

You heal my tired soul, give me all that I lack
Which is why I forgive you the hair on your back.

It's 2:30am, and I am tired so I will just say howdy
I might be getting old, but my cock will outlast you Cloudy


(ditto)

 

[Lord DragonsWing]

It's 2:30am, and I am tired so I will just say howdy
I might be getting old, but my cock will outlast you Cloudy


(ditto)

And as Cloudy dozes we deal the cards,
wondering who else she may make hard.

 

[doormouse]

And as Cloudy dozes we deal the cards,
wondering who else she may make hard.

And if LDW stops to perve,
On a platter his liver I'll serve

(your mouth's open LDW)

 

[Dingus Guy]

And if LDW stops to perve,
On a platter his liver I'll serve

(your mouth's open LDW)

Ahh, another sweet post from the lovable doormouse
I feel sorry for the guy she sends to the poor house.

 

[doormouse]

Ahh, another sweet post from the lovable doormouse
I feel sorry for the guy she sends to the poor house.

I'm a sweet loveable little gal
If my man cheats, make room in Hell

 

[minsue]

Pardon the bump for this very old thread
I missed it so much I brought it back from the dead.