Creative Minds Unite...For Two Lines

[lucky-E-leven]

I though the dare might push you along
If it didn't, I was prepared to break out in song.

I'm glad you submitted, Lucky.

You know me all too well, but I must say
Hearing you sing would just make my day

~lucky

Thanks, Min

 

[Dingus Guy]

Mindy is right and I am glad you listened
Now that you submitted, your words have glistened
What I mean is,
the light shines on your words
Just like the sing song of springtime birds
Who is this girl with the symmetry and rhythm?
The words are freeing like a mouthful of gism.
It's just a start and I am sure more will follow
Never stop them coming or the world will seem hollow

Good job Mindy in getting Lucky to submit
I'm sure all that bondage makes you good at it

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Mindy is right and I am glad you listened
Now that you submitted, your words have glistened
What I mean is,
the light shines on your words
Just like the sing song of springtime birds
Who is this girl with the symmetry and rhythm?
The words are freeing like a mouthful of gism.
It's just a start and I am sure more will follow
Never stop them coming or the world will seem hollow

Good job Mindy in getting Lucky to submit
I'm sure all that bondage makes you good at it

Mindy's always right, but I don't mind
She would never put me in a bind
I keep checking for you poem to be posted
So I can leave a comment, and say I boasted
Thanks for your urging and confident air
I am a little apprehensive and a bit of a naysayer
But the deed is done and now I wait
For the poem to post and seal my fate.
If it is well received, I may post some more
And become even more of a rhyming whore.

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

Mindy's always right, but I don't mind
She would never put me in a bind
I keep checking for you poem to be posted
So I can leave a comment, and say I boasted
Thanks for your urging and confident air
I am a little apprehensive and a bit of a naysayer
But the deed is done and now I wait
For the poem to post and seal my fate.
If it is well received, I may post some more
And become even more of a rhyming whore.

~lucky

My poem is submitted yet it still is pending
Once you get feedback, you will write neverending
Down with the bad, you except your fate
You submit again and again at any rate
Do it for yourself and take in pride in what you do
You will get reward in that and still love Minisue

 

[lucky-E-leven]

My poem is submitted yet it still is pending
Once you get feedback, you will write neverending
Down with the bad, you except your fate
You submit again and again at any rate
Do it for yourself and take in pride in what you do
You will get reward in that and still love Minisue

Submitting is not really new to me
But among the top, I do wish to be
I checked out your page and my what a snake
It looks a bit heavy and not very fake

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

Submitting is not really new to me
But among the top, I do wish to be
I checked out your page and my what a snake
It looks a bit heavy and not very fake

~lucky

I once had a co-worker who had a fear
She saw a snake and she would shed a tear
So I hypnotized her to be brave
Seeing snakes now she must behave
The pic I took in Florida with a boa
I tapped her on the back and showed her
She didn't shriek as she used to do
It had worked and made her new
She still hates snakes but the fear is gone
With my hypnosis she had one
So the next time you need a hand
Look into my eyes and do not stand
The phobias will all wash away
Now men you love, you're no longer gay.

 

[minsue]

Lucky & Dingus, I'm so proud of you two!
I've left 5's and comments for the both of you.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Thanks Mindy & Lucky

Lucky & Dingus, I'm so proud of you two!
I've left 5's and comments for the both of you.

Thoughtfulness is in the way one expresses
Expression of Love
Expression of Like
Expression from the Heart
Expression of the Mind
In your thoughtfulness I felt them all
Thanks for being who you are.

 

[minsue]

Re: Thanks Mindy & Lucky

Thoughtfulness is in the way one expresses
Expression of Love
Expression of Like
Expression from the Heart
Expression of the Mind
In your thoughtfulness I felt them all
Thanks for being who you are.

 

[Dingus Guy]

Re: Re: Thanks Mindy & Lucky

I won't let this thread die,
3 days and I began to cry
Here is a poem to keep it alive
Four lines aren't good
So I made it five.

 

[minsue]

Well, lookee here! It's back from the dead.
Thank you, Dingus, for resurrecting the thread.

 

[lucky-E-leven]

You two are cool, I like you a lot
I'm off to write porn, please pray that it's HOT!

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

You two are cool, I like you a lot
I'm off to write porn, please pray that it's HOT!

~lucky

I am glad you two are back, alive and well
Now off to bed I go with dreams I will not tell

 

[Dingus Guy]

That movie about Jesus made so much money
I thought it was Lethal Weapon 5, but it wasn't funny
Next time I should read what the movie is about
It did give me some thoughts and little bit of doubt
Is he the Messiah?
I just don't know
I'll give Gibson credit
He did put on a hell of a show
I am more concerned today about my country's distress
Freedoms taken and the FCC making a huge mess
Gays should be let to marry, why would I care?
If they lived with a ring or had a life to share
Why is the radio being taken away from me?
I think the government should let things be
There is War, disease and famine and we worry about Stern?
I think the President and Congress have much to learn
Stop mixing religion and politics in my life
I choose my faith and I'll pick my wife
I'm not gay nor am I a religious man
Jesus is a movie and a book, but freedom is a plan

 

[minsue]

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Edited to add: I just realized I used my 1000th post on a smilie. Seems about right.





ps, I loved the poem Dingus

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Wow! Dingus, that was something. Nice work, man. Not even a follow up springs to mind. Smooth, buddy.

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

Thank you ladies
Now back to Hades

 

[Dingus Guy]

I wrote a poem today and broke down crying
Look at my eyes and you can see I am not lying
A piece of me is slipping slowly away
I am getting further and further lost each day
It's depressing, yes I know and I am sorry about that
I guess I am in need of a friend to listen and chat

 

[lucky-E-leven]

I wrote a poem today and broke down crying
Look at my eyes and you can see I am not lying
A piece of me is slipping slowly away
I am getting further and further lost each day
It's depressing, yes I know and I am sorry about that
I guess I am in need of a friend to listen and chat

It pains me to hear you this way, my rhyming friend
PM me or post here, a willing ear I'd love to lend.

~lucky

 

[lucky-E-leven]

Where O' Where is Dingus Guy?
He dropped a note and then did fly.
I hope he's well
This thread's not swell
Without his wit so wry.

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

Where O' Where is Dingus Guy?
He dropped a note and then did fly.
I hope he's well
This thread's not swell
Without his wit so wry.

~lucky

It's been tough as of late I will not lie
Thank you for you kind words in your reply

 

[lucky-E-leven]

It's been tough as of late I will not lie
Thank you for you kind words in your reply

When things get tough, you get tougher
If that doesn't work...I'll be your buffer.

~lucky

 

[Dingus Guy]

When things get tough, you get tougher
If that doesn't work...I'll be your buffer.

~lucky

I could always use a good buffing
If that doesn't work maybe some stuffing

 

[lucky-E-leven]

I could always use a good buffing
If that doesn't work maybe some stuffing

There's the Dingus I know and love
Innuendo and invitation, over and above.

~lucky

 

[minsue]

Dingus, friend, it's good to see you joke
And I've always got more tulips whenever you need them, bloke.