pink_silk_glove
Literate Smutress
- Joined
- Feb 6, 2018
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If one or both of my characters were totally hot, then no one would believe they were virgins.
Yes, so much this. Slightly different but in the same vein, the most common story on lit is drop dead sexy hot confident girl who gets what she wants jumps really boring guy just because she's horny. If she's that confident and she's that hot why does she want this turd? She's hot enough to have way better. You've lost me at unicorn. Now if she was the loser overweight geek girl it might work, especially if the guy fights off her aggressive advances as his buddies tease him. That could be original.
