Annotations coming.It's very well done, well put together. It's a Cento, a kind of found poem composed of lines from a literary work to both serve as homage and create something new.
Yes it's obviously Shakespeare and, as one reads, obviously Macbeth but all Centos should have the work from which they're drawn cited. It's the poet's way of saying "I know I didn't write these lines myself." If you really want to go crazy you can add a footnote that annotates, by act. scene and speaker, the source of each line. But as an experiment in writing a Cento, just noting the author and work should be fine.
I really like how you combined the lines to create the sights and sounds of battle.
, everyone who posted in the 2025 poem a week challenge. Everyone who shared their poetry in forums this year. Past Lit poets. And I especially thank and acknowledge @Angeline and @Tzara for their services to poetry. I’ve learnt a bunch from both of you.
All the best for 2026. 
, or perhaps because of them. 
Lit life coach
Sound advice, Angeline.
Ps this is discussion is akin to giving monkeys a loaded gun.
Got it! (Famous last words).
I like yours better, they look friendlier and homemade and contain more loveThe source of my wiring of grievances to the cookie gods. My mom used to make these pinwheel pinwheel at chtimastime.
They are painstaking to make… they require a bakers hand. But I try every year to make them… they are refrigerator cookies, and so you have to make the dough, refrigerate them to make them harden up some, then roll them into thin sheets, let them harden again, then take the chocolate and the vanilla ones and roll them up into a roll. Then slice. Mine came in very dry this year.
Inspiration for Festivus poem of airing of grievances.
What they should look like…
How they turned out.
Shush 
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