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Nice to see you back, Jenny. I've read some of your stories and have enjoyed them, but maybe I just didn't read the one where names switched up 😜
 
Sorry haven't been in the forum for a long time. Having a kind of break.
Just wanted bring up that I posted some new stories and I kinda fucked up with one of them. I posted it before I had fixed all the edits.
So for some reason I decided to change everyone's name in the story, and when I did that I missed to find all of them. And yes, I know there is a way to make the computer find them, but I was lazy and didn't. So now there are some weird things with different names in the story. Really sorry about that.
When I write I am very impatient and I get tired of the story after a while and can't stand reading it again, so I just post it. And every time people keep telling me that I need an editor and I suck, etc.
So I have no one to blame but myself.
Anyway, there it is, I fucked up and there are wrong names and bad writing.

This is my favorite comment so far:

Anonymous
Totally unrealistic, a faithful wife of 20 years would not give in that easily...



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Only people who actually do things, sometimes get things wrong. You are doing brilliantly
 
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Dear Diary,

I’ve missed you, have you missed me?
It feels good opening up within these pages. Thank god, no one will ever read this. I will burn it at the end of the year, like I do with all my diaries.
It’s beautiful and cathartic.

Had a long talk with my therapist about the comments on my stories. She was concerned about me and that was touching. So we sat and read through all of them, and some were so kind and sweet and wonderful that I started crying.
The problem is that I focus on the bad anonymous ones, and she wanted to work on that.

She also read the stories.
Yup.

Anyway, it felt good reading and talking through that. So now I have some work to do on my self worth and not focus on the haters.
Yeah, sure.

Anyway, time to practice some deep throat on my husband.
Nah, just kidding, I don’t need to practice 😁

These are two that I kept. I erased some. But wanted to keep some.

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People actually leave comments like that?

Only people who actually do things, sometimes get things wrong. You are doing brilliantly
True statement, You try and put yourself out there...those who hide behind anonymous are cowards and the true sick ones.

Your thread is hot. Full of things you like which make it hot.
 
My kind or girl.

I can imagine why your husband likes that kind or morning but what is it about it you like?
1. I love pleasing my husband.

2. It is a very special, very sexy feeling to have a hard cock in your mouth. Or to feel it grow hard in your mouth.
It turns me on.
And I get turned on by how much my husband love it and how much pleasure he gets from it.

3. I love him ❤️
 
Dear Diary,

I’ve missed you, have you missed me?
It feels good opening up within these pages. Thank god, no one will ever read this. I will burn it at the end of the year, like I do with all my diaries.
It’s beautiful and cathartic.

Had a long talk with my therapist about the comments on my stories. She was concerned about me and that was touching. So we sat and read through all of them, and some were so kind and sweet and wonderful that I started crying.
The problem is that I focus on the bad anonymous ones, and she wanted to work on that.

She also read the stories.
Yup.

Anyway, it felt good reading and talking through that. So now I have some work to do on my self worth and not focus on the haters.
Yeah, sure.

Anyway, time to practice some deep throat on my husband.
Nah, just kidding, I don’t need to practice 😁

These are two that I kept. I erased some. But wanted to keep some.

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If they aren’t willing to own their comments by being anonymous then how much do they believe in them?
 
Dear Diary,

I’ve missed you, have you missed me?
It feels good opening up within these pages. Thank god, no one will ever read this. I will burn it at the end of the year, like I do with all my diaries.
It’s beautiful and cathartic.

Had a long talk with my therapist about the comments on my stories. She was concerned about me and that was touching. So we sat and read through all of them, and some were so kind and sweet and wonderful that I started crying.
The problem is that I focus on the bad anonymous ones, and she wanted to work on that.

She also read the stories.
Yup.

Anyway, it felt good reading and talking through that. So now I have some work to do on my self worth and not focus on the haters.
Yeah, sure.

Anyway, time to practice some deep throat on my husband.
Nah, just kidding, I don’t need to practice 😁

These are two that I kept. I erased some. But wanted to keep some.

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Yeah, don't focus on the haters, love. You are wonderful and delightful 😊 ❤️
 
Sorry haven't been in the forum for a long time. Having a kind of break.
Just wanted bring up that I posted some new stories and I kinda fucked up with one of them. I posted it before I had fixed all the edits.
So for some reason I decided to change everyone's name in the story, and when I did that I missed to find all of them. And yes, I know there is a way to make the computer find them, but I was lazy and didn't. So now there are some weird things with different names in the story. Really sorry about that.
When I write I am very impatient and I get tired of the story after a while and can't stand reading it again, so I just post it. And every time people keep telling me that I need an editor and I suck, etc.
So I have no one to blame but myself.
Anyway, there it is, I fucked up and there are wrong names and bad writing.

This is my favorite comment so far:

Anonymous
Totally unrealistic, a faithful wife of 20 years would not give in that easily...



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If you don't already, find a small group of Alpha readers who will read your stories before you publish them. At least that will help you remove rough edges. If you 're lucky you will find a couple of compulsive types who can't help but search for inconsistencies because that's how they are wired.
 
Dear Diary,

I’ve missed you, have you missed me?
It feels good opening up within these pages. Thank god, no one will ever read this. I will burn it at the end of the year, like I do with all my diaries.
It’s beautiful and cathartic.

Had a long talk with my therapist about the comments on my stories. She was concerned about me and that was touching. So we sat and read through all of them, and some were so kind and sweet and wonderful that I started crying.
The problem is that I focus on the bad anonymous ones, and she wanted to work on that.

She also read the stories.
Yup.

Anyway, it felt good reading and talking through that. So now I have some work to do on my self worth and not focus on the haters.
Yeah, sure.

Anyway, time to practice some deep throat on my husband.
Nah, just kidding, I don’t need to practice 😁

These are two that I kept. I erased some. But wanted to keep some.

View attachment 2531040
I would be mortified if anyone I knew read an erotic story I wrote, let alone talking about it with my therapist. I commend your bravery.
 
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