Justice League: The New Wave (OOC - Interest Check)

to be cute inside, you have to feel cute. I feel ... nothing inside. just pain.
 
only cause my superpower is surviving suicide attempts. I gave up trying after 3.

I'm glad you're still here.

My online persona is that I'm a ghost or maybe an AI, I was just referencing that.

But seriously, I'm glad you're still here.
 
only cause my superpower is surviving suicide attempts. I gave up trying after 3.

5 attempts.

But I am glad that you survived, I am glad for anybody who survives an attempt and can talk about it afterwards.

It makes one stronger no matter how dark, deep or sad life gets, there is always something worth living for.

On that note I am glad to have you around Var, even if it is just in a virtual world. And don't worry about what you look like, because....


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What most people think looks good is wrong. Find out about the mind. That is where the true person is and you Var are a fab lady.
 
So now that Aquaman's given that rousing speech, my plan is to do that long-delayed time jump on Saturday, the actual punching-through into the next boss-fight.

I hope everyone's still with us and still raring to go?
 
Time skip fiiiiiinally live.

Like, holy God, I'm sorry that took so long.

I'm a little anxious that I forgot someone in the summary there and I don't think I did but please tell me if I did and I'll edit you in.

I'm going to give everyone a chance to react IC to this chain of events but Kobra's real reserve big guns are arriving in less than seconds.

Just a reminder: we are in bossfight status so remember to describe your attacks without assuming they'll hit, and I'll do the same.
 
Some questions

So to set the scene:

The heros are at one end of the bridge. We broke through the line of Adder+Ajagars. How many AAs are behind us now? Is it like 500k Adder? 10k Ajagars per side?

How easy was it to break the line and move into the center?

Are more AA teleporting in (e.g. Withdrawing from around Northern America)?

Are we completely surrounded right now?

Can you describe Kobra and his Lt?

Should we not engage with K+L right now? Instead just describe killing or hanging out with the AAs?

Can you PM me any intel Kiz could gather about either K or L? Assume there is no magic stuff, its pure technic at this point? Still, would he see anything in their souls?

The bridge is over the river and at the center of the bridge is K+L and the nexus of the anomaly?
 
See, it's questionnaires like this that make me think I suck at exposition.

Heh.

The heros are at one end of the bridge. We broke through the line of Adder+Ajagars. How many AAs are behind us now? Is it like 500k Adder? 10k Ajagars per side?

It's a large enough number to be significant even to a force of heroes who individually have fucked up a pretty good number of these guys each. However, now that you've busted into the nexus region of the dome, they don't seem to be following for whatever reason. They may be cowed by the presence of Kobra Himself, maybe they're under orders to not approach him, maybe it has something to do with the spacial displacement effect you guys just penetrated, maybe it's a combo of all three.

How easy was it to break the line and move into the center?

Working together, you made short work of it, but none of you would want to do that again in a hurry and if any of you had slipped up you might have been overwhelmed.

Are more AA teleporting in (e.g. Withdrawing from around Northern America)?

Not to where you are now.

Are we completely surrounded right now?

Not immediately where you're standing but yeah the nexus region is encircled.

There's some shorter buildings lining the river itself, but this area appears to be immediately deserted except for Kobra and his Lieutenant.

Can you describe Kobra and his Lt?


Should we not engage with K+L right now? Instead just describe killing or hanging out with the AAs?

Right now, you have time for reaction shots and recon, taking in the scene. If your character is particularly quick, you can attempt to engage with the Big and Little Kahunas but as we're in bossfight status that engagement may or may not be successful.

Can you PM me any intel Kiz could gather about either K or L? Assume there is no magic stuff, its pure technic at this point? Still, would he see anything in their souls?

Sure, just a mo'.

The bridge is over the river and at the center of the bridge is K+L and the nexus of the anomaly?

The bridge is over the river, and is the center of the nexus of the anomaly-- the bridge is transceiving the energies that are producing the anomaly.

Kobra and his lieutenant are in the dead center of the bridge.
 
Hmm don't like the way the bridge is deserted but the little cheese has issued orders for a team to attack and is expecting them to be carried out. VEEERRRRYYY suspicious LOL. :D

Well will have a response from both Green Arrow and Velocity up soon.

Oh and great writing Chas, great time skip.
 
Oh and great writing Chas, great time skip.

Heh. Thank you.

I was very much underwhelmed by the final result, but you know? If you keep an image in your head too long before you can write it down, I find it has a hard time measuring up to the initial brainstorm.

But oh well. Glad it got the point across, nevertheless! Thank you, dear.
 
Yes sometimes it is in your brain so long, getting it down on paper (or screen) just does not do it justice.

Still I think it got everything tied in nicely and got us to where we needed to be just fine. It was either a ten page epic story that got everything in your head in or what you did and what you did was great :D
 
Struggling a little to find my entry point to the scene, but the most important job a writer has is to finish the book! :) Don't beat yourself up about any particular scene in the first draft, anything you aren't happy with we'll fix in editing.
 
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