My stories keep getting rejected by the monitor

[Jmanchu]

I'll grant "over the top".

Details for those who want them, behind a spoiler for those who don't:

Description of a "wrestling" match between two women where the winner gets to choose how the loser will be tortured as punishment. One contestant repeatedly slams the other into the ground head-first until her spine is almost broken, beats her at length with a kendo stick (hardwood practice sword), then breaks the stick and anally rapes her with the sharp end. After that she puts a funnelweb spider on the loser, knowing she has a phobia of spiders. The spider bites her repeatedly and then she's given antivenom so she can be hauled off and punished by being locked in a crate with more funnelwebs for 24 hours.

Interesting. I picture a dim filthy basement with cardboard boxes and discarded tissues strewn about with an intense smell so horrifying that it tingles and burns your nose from the immense power of ass and must emanating from the place. If you ran a UV light in that room, the entire place would glow a bright eerie blue like a crime scene... The only light in that dark room... a glow from a computer screen.

Its lonely inhabitant... a morbidly obese man in self seclusion from society... with an animu ahegao shirt stained with layers of Doritos chips dust, dried mountain dew, and his own filth collected through the years of wear and tear, an aversion to outdoor sunlight and grass, a scraggly neckbear coated in junk food... he writes his stories and fanfiction when he's not on discord or reddit being a deviant that is... Inspired by anime, his deviant horniness, and built up rage from years of constant rejection from IRL women and society, these unholy stories are all conjured up on his crusty, sticky keyboard... sticky with Cheetos, Doritos, Mountain Dew, chunks of Fruit by the Foot hardened through years of oxidization now part of the keys... and ungodly fluids we dare not mention... A place God himself has abondoned.

 

[djrip]

Interesting. I picture a dim filthy basement with cardboard boxes and discarded tissues strewn about with an intense smell so horrifying that it tingles and burns your nose from the immense power of ass and must emanating from the place. If you ran a UV light in that room, the entire place would glow a bright eerie blue like a crime scene... The only light in that dark room... a glow from a computer screen.

Its lonely inhabitant... a morbidly obese man in self seclusion from society... with an animu ahegao shirt stained with layers of Doritos chips dust, dried mountain dew, and his own filth collected through the years of wear and tear, an aversion to outdoor sunlight and grass, a scraggly neckbear coated in junk food... he writes his stories and fanfiction when he's not on discord or reddit being a deviant that is... Inspired by anime, his deviant horniness, and built up rage from years of constant rejection from IRL women and society, these unholy stories are all conjured up on his crusty, sticky keyboard... sticky with Cheetos, Doritos, Mountain Dew, chunks of Fruit by the Foot hardened through years of oxidization now part of the keys... and ungodly fluids we dare not mention... A place God himself has abondoned.

 

[MillieDynamite]

WTF

Interesting. I picture a dim filthy basement with cardboard boxes and discarded tissues strewn about with an intense smell so horrifying that it tingles and burns your nose from the immense power of ass and must emanating from the place. If you ran a UV light in that room, the entire place would glow a bright eerie blue like a crime scene... The only light in that dark room... a glow from a computer screen.

Its lonely inhabitant... a morbidly obese man in self seclusion from society... with an animu ahegao shirt stained with layers of Doritos chips dust, dried mountain dew, and his own filth collected through the years of wear and tear, an aversion to outdoor sunlight and grass, a scraggly neckbear coated in junk food... he writes his stories and fanfiction when he's not on discord or reddit being a deviant that is... Inspired by anime, his deviant horniness, and built up rage from years of constant rejection from IRL women and society, these unholy stories are all conjured up on his crusty, sticky keyboard... sticky with Cheetos, Doritos, Mountain Dew, chunks of Fruit by the Foot hardened through years of oxidization now part of the keys... and ungodly fluids we dare not mention... A place God himself has abondoned.

 

[EmilyMiller]

what the fuck is this

Beat me to it. You can beat me any time of course.

I have been know to include the occasional, “ooooh!” but you can take things too far. Much too far.

Em

 

[EmilyMiller]

Hey everyone thank-you for your feedback. I have adjusted my writing so let's see if they accept it. This is one of my stories.. true story too mind you.

It was one of those hot summer nights where no matter what you do you are drenched in sweat. She was wearing a short black skirt. No underwear and a Bikini top that was just barely covering her gorgeous perky tits. Her nipple got hard just at the sight of me walking up to her house knowing that what is coming next is only things that most people only see in porns.

In preparation of the festivities of the evening I already had my thre3tier cockring on knowing that it wouldnt be long before she was down on her knees sucking me as hard as she could. She loved my cock without any of my rings on. But when wearing thre3tier she knows that I just keep getting bigger and bigger the harder she sucks.

We proceeded to the side of her family's house and started doing shots of Jamason and drinking beers. WIthin 20 minutes we finished a six pack and half of bottle. As she was finishing her last beer for the moment she spread her legs open, Showing her glorious already soaked cunt.. Her clit was already swollen out of her hood waiting in anticipation for me. She wasted no time at all exposing my already hard cock.

She smiled and said. “ is that for me. It looks yummy. How about I see how big I can get it.” Like her Life depended upon it she started sucking my cock as hard as she could. Knowing the harder she sucked the bigger I got. While she was sucking she started rubbing her clit.

I took my whip and slapped her hands saying.” Did I tell you that you are allowed to touch my cunt you little filthy slut.” She started moaning on my cock as she choked herself trying to take it all in her mouth. It was at that point that I pulled her off my cock by the back of her hair and I said.” No…”

I pulled her skirt up to above her waist and wrapped my arms around her. Holding her upside down I lifted her up and started to suck and tonguefuck her clit..She started moaning etremely loud.. “You need to be quieter,, Now you suck you filthy whore.”.. While I'm sucking and tonguefucking her clit. Her moans become louder on my cock. It only took a grand total of 90 seconds before she squirts and it starts dripping down her body onto my cock. I threw her down to the ground and said. “Now look what you have done” I take my whip and tie it around her neck and force her to continue sucking my cock.

It at this point that I go into my bag of goodies and take out our Rabbit. As my cock is still swelling up in her mouth I place the rabbit on the ground. She sides it all the way inside of her and I put it on full blast. As it starts gyrating inside of her and flicking her clit as she moans on my cock and mumbles” Im squirting again." It’s at that point that I pull her off my cock via whip. Choking her I tell her. “ Keep the rabbit inside your tight cunt and start riding my cock with your ass."

Without a moment of hesitation she turns around and takes all of me deep inside of her. I grab the rabbit from her hands as she grabs on to the top pole on her fence and slides furiously up and down on my huge cock. I start fucking her in synic with the rabbit as she yells.”I have never been fucked like this before in my life.. Don't stop. Please don't stop, I just keep cumming over and over from your cock in my ass.” Like a waterside her pussy kept squirting soaking both of us in her hot juices.

I Force her to hold onto the rabbit and just sit with my cock in her ass as I reach for our strap. I tie the strap around the rabbit. Holding it in place inside of her. Then I told her. Grab onto the top of the fence and in doing so I lift her up and start fucking her ass hard and fast.She scream out

“OOOOOOOOOMMMMMYYYYYYYYYYGGGOOOODDDDDDDD.. Whatever you are doing dont stop please I love your hard cock pounding my ass”.. As her pussy juices started gushing down my legs as she kept say” Fuck me harder, Fuck me harder, Yes Yes Yes.” over and over until we were both drenched in sweat and pussy juices.

At this point 90 minutes has passed. I still didn't cum but needed a few moments to cool down and rehydrate . I Loosen the strap only for the rabbit to fly out of her along with a gushing sound which was all the extra juices still trapped behind the rabbit. While holding her up and with my cock still in her ass I walk us over to the hose. We are both over drenched in sweat and sex. She picks it up and starts spaying it over us while I still continue to fuck her ass at a slow pace. We then went to the chairs where we first started.

With my cock still in her ass she turns around and our bodies are inches away from one another. We then start kissing passionately as I tell her.” I love you with all my heart..” Reaching for 2 beers out of the cooler she replies.. I love you to.. No man has ever compared to you.” As I reached out to grab the other half of the Bottle and started pouring us shots I said.” Well… Has any man ever did to you what we are currently doing.”.. Her reply was.” What are you kidding… You are the first and only man who ever fucked my ass.. And you cock is so big but It feel just so good in there..”

As she slammed down her shot.” Well… This is the make-up for the blow job that you never finished on my 15th birthday… It only took 18 years for me to meet with you and well we have some lost time to make up for.. ..” For you see if you read the story of my first sexual expierence.. This is her… This is the first woman I ever truly loved as a teenager and It seems ironically funny that has been the last woman I have truly loved as an adult… We finish smoking a joint and the rest of the alcohol. Smoking a cigarette we are both pretty buzzed.

I look her in the eyes and say.” I still hate saved by the bell.”It was 20 minutes all together and the whole time my cock was still throbbing in her ass as she was still slowly sliding up and down on it. We finish A large gatorade…. TBC

Hi hun,

May I suggest that writing is a little premature for you. I would recommend a little reading first. Actually quite a lot of reading. And maybe some coloring and join-the-dots.

I am going to be honest. I wasn’t sure at times whether or not this was meant to be parody. I eventually came down on it probably not being. Which was maybe not a great conclusion.

However, my first stories here were pretty dire. So don’t give up. But read. Read some more. Try to work out how people write. Then have another go.

Em

 

[MillieDynamite]

I should be writing.

 

[Jmanchu]

WTF

Hey, I know I'm not the only one who pictured something like that.